Response to Philip Wade:
Hi Phillip,
Thank you for reaching out, I would be happy to work together on the upcoming group assignment. I can see that you are true to your word in that you have taken on the leadership initiative to reach out to potential group partners! I too will follow up with the other students that you have reached out to, as they seem like appropriate group members who can compliment the strengths and weaknesses that you and I may bring to the table.
Your summer internship sounds incredibly interesting, and i’m glad to see someone else who is also completing their degree in Interdisciplinary Studies. I am excited to see how such technical knowledge will play into your writing style.
Best,
Amanda Burke
Email to Jocelyn Toledo
Hi Jocelyn,
I am writing to you today to ask if you would like to collaborate as team members for our upcoming assignments. I can see that Philip reached out to you, as he did myself, and I think that we would all work very well together.
I am impressed by your busy schedule and array of activities. Personally, I find that when I am busiest, I am the most productive as I have no choice but to well manage my time.
Your completion of Arts One sounds like a great great attribute to our group, as peer review is going to be such a big part of this course. The tone and style which you write in is distinct and well put together, something I am looking to improve on myself!
If you have any questions or concerns, please feel free to reach out anytime at amandajessieburke@gmail.com.
Best,
Amanda Burke