Monthly Archives: March 2022

Unit Three Reflection

After completing my formal report draft, I feel I learned more in regards to how to research, organize and write a full report surrounding a topic of interest. In terms of researching, I learned how to find and utilize primary data research in order to support my topic. By doing this, I was not only able to learn more about my topic, but was able to utilize this research in order to strengthen my paper. I was able to gain more expertise on my topic too by doing research.

 

In terms of organizing, I learned that with a clear organizational pattern throughout a paper, it allows the reader to become less confused and more interested in the writing. In other words, it allows readers to stay focused, and draw connections between the paragraphs throughout the paper. Throughout my formal draft, I utilized this learning and organized my paper with headings and subheadings. By organizing my paper this way, it allows readers to understand the material better, and allows myself to express my ideas in different paragraphs. 

 

In terms of reviewing peers, I have learned that by reading and providing feedback to others has improved my own writing. Through the peer review process, I am able to view and understand my strengths and weaknesses more in depth. Moreover, when feedback is given from peer-review, I am able to work on my mistakes more, and learn from them.

Unit 2 Reflection

Researching and creating a LinkedIn Profile

For assignment 2.2, we were tasked to research and create a post regarding the best practices of LinkedIn. Having had a LinkedIn account since my first degree, I have used the platform to showcase my experience and qualifications. In addition, I have used the platform to find new opportunities, network with current and former co-workers and learn new skills. However, this assignment allowed me to dive deeper into what goes into an effective LinkedIn profile and experience. Through this assignment, I learn better techniques and tips on how to make my LinkedIn more effective towards employers. With these techniques and tips, I made changes to my existing profile and now with the tips I had read and implemented, my profile has become better. As someone who plans to become a Software Engineer and one day, a business owner, I am excited to see where my LinkedIn profile takes me.

 

Peer Review Process

The peer review process has allowed me to look at my writing in a different light. I have been able to see what some of my strengths and weaknesses are through peer review, as well as see different writing techniques through some of my peer’s writings. I was able to implement and improve upon many improvements Varneega had pointed out to me. One improvement I was able to improve upon was adding more background knowledge to the company I was writing to. She pointed out that a preface to the company, Jasper, would be important to readers and provides sufficient background knowledge to the proposal. Another area I continue to struggle but improve upon is my grammar and spelling. I have always struggled with grammatical and spelling errors, but because of peer review’s, I am able to see it more transparently. With all this in mind, I would say the peer review process is a helpful and effective writing tool to strengthen an individual’s writing. My writing has strongly benefited from peer reviews, and I look forward to more!

 

 

REVISED Formal Report Proposal – Feasibility of a Fully Remote work model

Peer Review of  the Formal Report Proposal