Documenting an Author’s Process

During our class visit to the Rare Books and Special Collections (RBSC) branch of Irving K. Barber Library, we were allowed to pour over an astonishingly wide variety of documents that contributed to the final draft and publishing of Joy Kogawa’s Obasan. The nature of the documents varied greatly, from scribbled notes following Kogawa’s train of thought, to rejection letters from publishers, to typewritten drafts of certain chapters, to letters written from Kogawa to the Canadian prime minister – the list goes on. All of these documents contributed to a tangible way of viewing and understanding Kogawa’s process of writing Obasan, a documented journey that one could piece together (to a certain degree) on their own with the help of this collection.

The background of this process, provided by these documents, gives the book far more depth, in my opinion. However, as Dr. Luger mentioned in class recently, the advent of technology in providing us with easy-to-use word processors erases a lot of this process. Granted, it must make the editing process remarkably easier and perhaps speed up the writing process itself, but physical representations marking the author’s journey towards the final draft are lost. Current technology would likely erase in part another important aspect of Kogawa’s formulation of Obasan: physical documents of the past such as letters and telegrams. E-mails would likely replace a large portion of this correspondence, and its speed would likely change even the content of communication. With all that is erased by technology, library branches like the RBSC must be affected, and will continue to be affected, by the sheer lack of physical documents in circulation that detail an author’s process – especially in comparison to the impressive extent of Kogawa’s.

Although there’s little to be done about this trend, I find it a saddening in a way. This particular nature of documentation allows the reader to interact with the story to a further extent, and so much more goes into published product than is indicated by the final draft. It would be incredible to have a collection such as Kogawa’s to document processes of other books, like of Marjane Satrapi’s Persepolis. It would conjure up even greater of an appreciation for the work, thought, and struggle that goes into the published product. There’s simply something about paper documents capable of being held that provides a level of intimacy and personal connection with the content.

Children & Trauma

For the past couple of weeks, our class has read and started to analyze Marjane Satrapi’s moving graphic narrative, Persepolis. The story is narrated by Marji, a feisty 10-year-old girl growing up in the midst of the Islamic Revolution and Iran-Iraq War. Her narrative captivated my attention immediately, and I began to wonder why this was.
Since I was in elementary school, I have always been fascinated with narratives of historical events. This early fascination began with book series like Dear Canada: a collection of fictional diaries narrated by young girls and set in historically significant – and often traumatic – settings, such as the Halifax Explosion of 1917, the Spanish flu epidemic of 1918, the Ukrainian Canadian Internment of 1914, the residential schools of 1966 and many more. As a kid, I was never taken aback by the juxtaposition of the trauma of these events and a child’s point of view. However, after delving into Satrapi’s Persepolis, it now strikes me as a more potent contrast and wrought with purpose.
Generally, authors of books are rarely children themselves – so why do some choose to speak from a child’s perspective, especially when they are narrating solemn or upsetting events? One explanation is the issue of accessibility. Complicated situations may be simplified through the eyes of a child, as their interpretations are often influenced by a lack of information or differential understanding of nuanced circumstances. This simplification has a way of inviting a larger audience, including those who may find a detailed account from a history textbook uninteresting or confusing. I encountered a lot of information about historical events through Dear Canada at a younger age than some of my peers, drawn in by the voices of young girls like me describing horrifying, yet captivating traumatic settings. In Persepolis, Marji’s perspective as a child simplifies certain aspects of the Islamic Revolution, likely extending its accessibility to the Western audience it is directed toward, as we discussed in class.
A child’s point of view may also work to humanize traumatic events that are overwhelming and hard to grasp emotionally. A general historical description of, say, World War 1 may list the number of casualties in a given battle – the Battle of the Somme resulted in one million, for example. From this information, it is difficult to comprehend statistics of this magnitude at face value to identify with the sheer devastation of this event. However, a child’s perspective – of losing a father or brother in this battle, of the grief it brought on the family, of the change that resulted from this death – provides a personal narrative that works to ground trauma and information that can otherwise be incomprehensible.
Whatever the purpose, historical narratives through the eyes of a child have proved to be a profound, even jarring, means of interacting with traumatic events.

http://www.scholastic.ca/dearcanada/books/
https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Battle_of_the_Somme
https://www.amazon.ca/Persepolis-Story-Childhood-Marjane-Satrapi/dp/037571457X

The Scale of Abstraction: Balancing our Mindset

In “Academic Writing: An Introduction”, Giltrow et al. examines varying “levels of generality” employed in different genres, particularly in reference to the genre of summary. These levels may be demonstrated on a “scale of abstraction” upon which broad, comprehensive information labelled “high-level” is located on the “abstract” end of the spectrum, with “low-level” information, in reference to detail, on the “concrete” end. Various genres require corresponding applications of this spectrum; summary in scholarly writing, for example, often entails a more comprehensive look at a piece of writing with a selection of details, an approach that “helps a summary reader to grasp what the abstractions mean” (Giltrow et al., pp. 40).

I think the idea of an appropriate relationship between abstraction and detail is applicable to mental health as a student and the concept of mindfulness. If we consider the term “high-level” in regard to a broad perspective and “low-level” to a narrow focus, we can apply this scale to a balance of mindset.

Psychology Today defines mindfulness as “a state of active, open attention to the present.” Common practices of mindfulness meditation often entail focusing one’s attention to immediate senses and emotions and “noticing them without judgment”. The benefits of this detail-oriented awareness are widely promoted in mental health communities – the American Psychology Association (APA) investigated and confirmed “the idea that mindfulness reduces emotional exhaustion and improves job satisfaction.”

As a first year student, the big picture of four years at university can be daunting, even paralyzing, at times. Merely looking at the month of November on my calendar is intimidating as I consider the assignments, midterms, and papers demanding skills I have not acquired yet. In avoiding an overwhelming, negative attitude, it is essential for me to employ a level of mindfulness, to ground myself in a detail-oriented perspective that pulls me to the present. “I may not have the ability to write a multi-page research paper at this point, but that is not what is being asked of me right now; today, I need to focus this reading.”

Despite the benefits of being mindful of the present, it is, of course, unrealistic to practice in all circumstances – especially as a university student. If I am unaware of the future demands of all my classes combined, I will lack the time and resources to complete my work. Similarly, I cannot select and pursue a specific degree if I refrain from considering my future beyond the current moment.

It is this interplay of abstract versus detail, big picture versus immediate present, that can play a large role in our mental health. As a first-time university student, it is a skill I must obtain as I face the steep learning curve before me and a balance that will take time and experience to master.

https://www.psychologytoday.com/basics/mindfulness
https://www.helpguide.org/harvard/benefits-of-mindfulness.htm
https://www.apa.org/pubs/journals/features/pst-48-2-198.pdf
https://www.amazon.ca/Academic-Writing-Introduction-Janet-Giltrow/dp/1554811872

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