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this connection of everyone with lungs

Hi everyone,

I hope all of you guys are currently enjoying your reading break and catching up on rest! This past week our class focused on, American poet, Juliana Spahr’s this connection of everyone with lungs and 4 other poems we had to look over.  All of the poems we read focused and revolved around the events of 09/11/01 as well as post 09/11/01. After reading over many of my classmate’s blog posts, most of them concentrated on imagery in Spahr’s poems along with some in text analysis.

To start us off, Paolina talked about the repetition and aftershocks of 09/11/01. She pointed out how the events of 09/11/01 led to the recurrence of news stations repeating images of “planes crashing into towers over and over again” and how everyone wanted it to end but no one could escape the damage that was done. There was no way of breaking free from the inter-web and news stations which had engulfed and connected everyone to the events of 09/11/01. The only thing that people could do was to “breathe the space between the hands and the space around the hands and the sapce of the room and the space of the building” (Spahr). Olivia later talked about Billy Collins poem, “Names”, and wondered whether if we knew that these four poems were related to 09/11/01 if we were not told. She later states that the “images of names inscribed on the stone and flesh and up in the air around buildings” is what gave it away.  This connects to Paolina’s idea of repetition and how some images of 09/11/01 can trigger our memory of what we had seen from the past.

Erin does some critical in text analysis on Sphar’s poem involving awareness. She talks about one scene in the poem where there is a “Juxtaposition between lying in bed on a beautiful island to the atrocities being discussed through the world” and how the relationship between the two must be realized and dealt with. She criticizes Spahr for being an “eyewitness” to the news, that she is seeing and acknowledging what is going on but does nothing about the situation. Personally, this gets me very frustrated as it reminds me of people who sit behind their computer screens complaining about social problems within their society but choose to not take any action. She then connects this idea to the laziness within the American society. Erin digs a little deeper and even realized that the entirety of Sphar’s poetry within this connection of everyone with lungs has the phrase “I speak” rather than “I do” which I found very interesting since our contemporary world seems to be too focused on social media and celebrity gossip instead of being aware of real issues that are much more important and need to be dealt with.

On a side note, I found it very unique that Joseph turned his blog post for this week into his own little poem which I found extremely creative. Props to him for doing that and thinking outside of the box!

That is all for now, signing off.

Martin

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http://blogs.ubc.ca/astu100josephmoric/

http://blogs.ubc.ca/oliveabellastu/

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Class Blog : Safe Area Goražde

Hey bloggers,

It has been a while for all of us since our last individual blog posts and this week it is my turn to be the class blogger! Throughout this past week, our class did not just focus on one specific reading, but two! We jumped back and forth between Joe Sacco’s Safe Area Goražde  and Joy Kogawa’s Obasan. Since there were so many interesting blogs to read and discuss about, I decided to keep it simple and focus on the different components of Safe Area Goražde. 

To start off, Mia talked about Joe Sacco’s decision on making Safe Area Goražde a graphic narrative a good thing and would allow the pages to be brought to life. She argued that the graphic narrative “would not have produced the effects that it did if it was written in a more formal, traditional style”, which I totally agree with since individuals would have a very difficult time visualizing what is going on if the illustrations were just in text. Graphic narratives highlight certain moments and memories and make the images more vivid and real for the reader which would, in turn, “tell a deeper story”. Alex also adds to Mia’s argument by saying that the illustrations in Safe Area Goražde  “encompasses graphic detail in to his illustration in order to further emphasize the dramatic violence that occurred”. 

Also, Mia brings up the idea that with Sacco interviewing the people of Goražde, he is able to “take a small war torn town that had been largely invisible to the world, and give it a face”.The message that she is trying to convey here is that Goražde will not become another war zone with faceless victims, as we have seen in Persepolis where the drawings that Alex had said are “iconographic style[s] that emphasizes the conformity that was brought to Iranian society during it’s revolution”. For example, Satrapi depicts countless crowds of girls in the hijab throughout the book. 

Isiah discusses about the type of setting that Joe Sacco is in during his time in Bosnia. He talks about the prevalent issues of choice for the population of Goražde. For Goraždans, all of their choices are limited and Isiah adds that “The act of leaving is not within their reach”. Isiah also talks about Joe Sacco’s representation to the citizens, he represents “America, the English language, journalism, and most of all, he represents the idea of escape”. In the graphic narrative, Sacco freely comes in and out Goražde by flashing his Blue Card. The idea of escape emphasizes on the idea of a better life out there that is modern and filled with “wonderful material items like Levi jeans”. The idea of escape for the people of Goražde ties in with the aspect of choice, something that the Goraždans do not have or are very limited to.

Melissa, adds on to Isiah’s conversation about “wonderful items” and relates it to his idea of choice and escape while incorporating it with strength within the people of Goražde. From pages 50-56 titled “Silly Girls”, the ladies in the house are very limited to “luxury” resources since they are not allowed out of the city (no choice/escape). Despite their limitations, Melissa argues that they are still able to have “smiles on their faces [which] show how strong they are as human beings”. They are not going to allow their surroundings affect their happiness and interests, which shows a lot of strength and spirit in them. Personally, if I was in their shoes I would definitely not be able to keep up with the same attitude. Would you guys be able to keep the same attitude?

Until next time,

– Martin