To: Lovin Kahlon

From: Brianna Diogo

Date: July 27, 2022

Subject: Peer review of the formal report draft: Integrating Ultrasonic Scaling at Pediatric Dental Practice in Winnipeg, Manitoba

Thank you for submitting the report on integrating ultrasonic scaling at pediatric dental practice in Winnipeg, Manitoba. This is a great job of exploring solutions to the issues within the practice. Below are suggestions for improving the formal report.

First Impressions:

• The report does a great job of detailing the areas in which the practice could use improvement
• Great solution
• The images and data really add substance and relevance to the report
• A few minor formatting errors could be because of how the document was exported

Introduction:

• The background and description are very concise but also provide all of the necessary details for the audience to get a grasp of what will be covered in the report
• The method of inquiry is great and detailed
• The Limitations of the Study and Scope of the Inquiry headings are different from the others, as they are not indented

Plan:

• This is great, and detailed, and all of the figures embedded are incredibly helpful

Budget:

• Great structure, easy to follow and the elements are nicely laid out

Revised Recare System:

• This looks great!

Conclusion:

• Everything looks great, but be sure to go over it a few times to make sure everything is as concise and relevant as possible to present the most amount of information with minimal filler

Organization and Design:

• Make sure all the headings are the same
• The introduction begins halfway down a blank page
• Just be sure to check for formatting

Conclusion:

The report looks great! Below is a summary of suggestions:

• Reformatting the report
• Revising the content to make it as concise and relevant as possible

Thank you for allowing me to peer review. If there are any questions, please contact me at briannadiogo2018@gmail.com

Best,

Brianna Diogo