To: Lovin Kahlon
From: Brianna Diogo
Date: July 27, 2022
Subject: Peer review of the formal report draft: Integrating Ultrasonic Scaling at Pediatric Dental Practice in Winnipeg, Manitoba
Thank you for submitting the report on integrating ultrasonic scaling at pediatric dental practice in Winnipeg, Manitoba. This is a great job of exploring solutions to the issues within the practice. Below are suggestions for improving the formal report.
First Impressions:
- The report does a great job of detailing the areas in which the practice could use improvement
- Great solution
- The images and data really add substance and relevance to the report
- A few minor formatting errors could be because of how the document was exported
Introduction:
- The background and description are very concise but also provide all of the necessary details for the audience to get a grasp of what will be covered in the report
- The method of inquiry is great and detailed
- The Limitations of the Study and Scope of the Inquiry headings are different from the others, as they are not indented
Plan:
- This is great, and detailed, and all of the figures embedded are incredibly helpful
Budget:
- Great structure, easy to follow and the elements are nicely laid out
Revised Recare System:
- This looks great!
Conclusion:
- Everything looks great, but be sure to go over it a few times to make sure everything is as concise and relevant as possible to present the most amount of information with minimal filler
Organization and Design:
- Make sure all the headings are the same
- The introduction begins halfway down a blank page
- Just be sure to check for formatting
Conclusion:
The report looks great! Below is a summary of suggestions:
- Reformatting the report
- Revising the content to make it as concise and relevant as possible
Thank you for allowing me to peer review. If there are any questions, please contact me at briannadiogo2018@gmail.com
Best,
Brianna Diogo