{"id":175,"date":"2023-04-17T18:07:14","date_gmt":"2023-04-18T01:07:14","guid":{"rendered":"https:\/\/blogs.ubc.ca\/danielkim15\/?page_id=175"},"modified":"2023-04-17T19:58:40","modified_gmt":"2023-04-18T02:58:40","slug":"best-works","status":"publish","type":"page","link":"https:\/\/blogs.ubc.ca\/danielkim15\/best-works\/","title":{"rendered":"Best Works"},"content":{"rendered":"<p>Here are my best works through the team in Engl 301. All of the assignments linked are revised.<\/p>\n<p><strong>Revised Peer Review of the Definition Assignment<\/strong><\/p>\n<p>This assignment aimed to provide an audience with an understanding of a complex term using a parenthetical definition, a sentence definition, and an expanded definition. What I found most challenging about this assignment was avoiding using jargon. Finding laymen&#8217;s terms to explain a complex topic was a challenging but valuable skill to learn to know.<\/p>\n<p>For revisions, I re-formatted the parenthetical definition, elaborated more on the expanded definition, and connected my visuals with my definition&#8217;s main body.<\/p>\n<p>Here is the revised Definition Assignment:\u00a0<a href=\"https:\/\/blogs.ubc.ca\/engl30199c2022w2\/2023\/02\/16\/revised-definition-daniel-kim\/\">Revised Definition<\/a><\/p>\n<p><strong>Revised Formal Report Proposal <i>and<\/i> Progress Report with Surveys<\/strong><\/p>\n<p>For the Formal Report Proposal, I was tasked to complete a Formal Report regarding a topic with a rising issue. The topic I chose was the rise in the cost of transportation. For this proposal, I conducted an anonymous survey, interviewed UBC as my primary data, and thoroughly incorporated literature journals and additional sources for my secondary data. I used the information provided and made suggestions. The revised Formal Report includes revisions I made that were provided in the Formal Report Proposal. The Progress Report with Surveys outlines the intended audience, the purpose, significance, objective, research plan with a tentative survey, and a schedule to stay on task.<\/p>\n<p>In this assignment, I am confident in conducting future Formal Reports. With this Formal Report I completed, I acquired the skills such as writing in a professional tone, using concise writing techniques, creating surveys, and analyzing data while making complementary suggestions based on the results.<\/p>\n<p><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">Here is the revised Formal Report Proposal:\u00a0<a href=\"https:\/\/blogs.ubc.ca\/engl30199c2022w2\/files\/2023\/04\/Formal_Report_Daniel_Kim_Engl_301.pdf\">Revised Formal Report<\/a><\/span><\/p>\n<p><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">Here is the revised Progress Report with Surveys:\u00a0<a href=\"https:\/\/blogs.ubc.ca\/engl30199c2022w2\/2023\/03\/15\/23-memo-for-daniels-progress-report\/\">Revised Progress Report with Surveys<\/a><\/span><\/p>\n<p><strong>Revised Proposal Memo<\/strong><\/p>\n<p><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">The purpose of the proposal memo was to learn how to write an email memorandum to stakeholders professionally. For revision, I revised the email memo by not signing off on it.<\/span><\/p>\n<p><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">Here is the revised Proposal Memo:\u00a0<a href=\"https:\/\/blogs.ubc.ca\/engl30199c2022w2\/2023\/03\/12\/21-email-memorandum-for-formal-report-proposal-revised\/\">Revised Proposal Memo<\/a><\/span><\/p>\n<p><strong>Revised LinkedIn Best practices memo<\/strong><\/p>\n<p>This assignment taught me the importance of using Linkedin. With social networks growing exponentially, Linkedin helps professionals grow their networks faster than ever. As a result, the Linkedin Best Practice Memo taught me the ten ways of maximizing Linkedin usage to support my professional career.<\/p>\n<p><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">Here is the revised Linkedin Best Practice Memo:\u00a0<a href=\"https:\/\/blogs.ubc.ca\/engl30199c2022w2\/2023\/03\/06\/22-linkedin-best-practices-memo-daniel-kim\/\">Revised Linkedin Best Practices Memo<\/a><\/span><\/p>\n<p><strong>Revised Memo to Evan Crisp<\/strong><\/p>\n<p>With this assignment, I wrote a Memo to Evan Crip regarding the information on writing with a \u201cYou Attitude\u201d to improve writing emails. This assignment taught me lessons that I would be using in a professional setting. Thus, I enjoyed writing the Memo and will keep tabs on them as I progress in my career. Regarding revisions, I did not sign off on the Memo and changed the imperative verbs to \u2018ing\u2019 verbs.<\/p>\n<p><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">Here is the Revived Memo to Evan Crisp:\u00a0<a href=\"https:\/\/blogs.ubc.ca\/engl30199c2022w2\/2023\/03\/22\/memorandum-writing-with-you-attitude-2\/\">Revised Memo to Evan Crisp<\/a><\/span><\/p>\n<p><strong>Revised Peer Review of a Formal Report<\/strong><\/p>\n<p>This assignment aimed to review our teammate\u2019s formal proposal draft. I thoroughly analyzed the document and made several recommendations.<\/p>\n<p>My primary revision was making sure to remove as many pronouns as possible. With this change, it makes far more sense to address the peer-reviewed as a general audience so that it can be applied to various other applications.<\/p>\n<p><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">Here is the Revised Peer Review of the Formal Report:\u00a0<a href=\"https:\/\/blogs.ubc.ca\/engl30199c2022w2\/2023\/04\/03\/33-peer-review-for-terrys-formal-report-draft-daniel-kim\/\">Revised Peer Review of Formal Report<\/a><\/span><\/p>\n<p>&nbsp;<\/p>\n","protected":false},"excerpt":{"rendered":"<p>Here are my best works through the team in Engl 301. All of the assignments linked are revised. Revised Peer Review of the Definition Assignment This assignment aimed to provide an audience with an understanding of a complex term using a parenthetical definition, a sentence definition, and an expanded definition. 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