Adrienne Yap LinkedIn Peer Review

LinkedIn Peer Review Form

Peer Review of: Adrienne Yap

Peer Reviewed by: Usman Zahoor

Date: Nov, 1, 2019

LinkedIn Profile: https://www.linkedin.com/in/adrienneyap/

 

Profile Picture (is there one?)

Comments: 

Yes

Profile and About

• Location, tagline, contact info filled out
• Engaging summary that outlines skills and objectives

Comments: 

Nice profile picture. I would consider adding more detail to your tagline. What are you professional interests? Skills? Adding detail will make you stand out, especially in such a competitive field. Your summary was very well written. However, I would like to know the why of it all. What is your writing process? What makes your creativity and writing unique?

Experience and Education

• Experience listed chronologically or functionally
• Provides brief overview of job (Title, dates, job description)
• Engaging summary that outlines skills and objectives

Comments: 

Well done. However, you don’t have any description of your responsibilities under your Vice position as Social Media Manager. I would also add bullet points to each experience, just to keep things cohesive. 

Education section was filled out correctly. 

Volunteer Experience

• Experience listed chronologically or functionally
• Provides brief overview of experience (Title, dates, job description)

Comments: 

I might add a bit more description to your role as a research assistant. What about that job adds to your resume? How does it apply to writing and content creation? There are skills to be gained from every experience; what’s important is to have it connect to your end goal. 

Skills and Endorsements

• Lists relevant skills
• Lists relevant accomplishments

Comments: 

Skills listed seem very relevant to your career objective (social media). 

General Overview

Comments: 

I think with a little tweaking, your profile could attract a lot of recruiters. I would focus on the little details, like adding more descriptions and really diving deep into your work process, as well as what makes you unique. Overall, I think it’s a very good profile. Keep making those connections and since you’re a writer, I would consider posting more articles on LinkedIn. 

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