From: Huntley Bain
Date: December 5th, 2019
Subject: Peer Review of Evan Crisp Memo
I have reviewed your 3.1 Memo regarding the you-attitude writing assignment. Your assignment is well organized and is easy to follow. My first impression is strong, your writing is concise and the letter presents the information that Evan needs to know clearly. Please review the comments suggestions I have listed below and let me know if you have any questions:
- Your opening is clear and informs Evan that you will be providing suggestions
- You give examples for every suggestion which makes it clear for the reader.
- Your memo follows the correct format
- The memo is concise and saves Evan time from reading unnecessary information
Overall, well done, Chelsea. If you have any questions please do not hesitate to contact me at huntley.bain@gmail.com.
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