Nicholas Jang | Assignment 2.2 Peer Review of Barton Lui’s LinkedIn Profile

Peer Review Form

 

To: Barton Lui

From: Nicholas Jang

Subject: Peer review of Barton Lui’s Linkedin Profile

 

Hello Barton,

 

Thank you for submitting your LinkedIn profile for peer review. Please see my review and comments below for ways to enhance your profile.

 

First Impressions

• A complete profile with entries in multiple categories
• Uses a custom profile URL which allows people to find you easily
• Volunteer experiences appear to be thoroughly filled out

 

Profile Photo

• Photo is centred and clearly shows your face
• You have dressed appropriately in business attire
• The photo matches your cover background
• Consider a standing photo

 

Title Box

• The title box filled with information that showed your education
• Your key headlines were separated and stood out due to the capitalization
• A little bit cluttered

 

Effectiveness of the Summary

• No summary section

 

Experience and Achievements

• The experience section could be expanded on as the current entry lacks information when compared with your volunteering entries
• Experience section appears to be slim
• Volunteer experiences are filled out and have descriptions that explain your duties and achievements

 

Education

• Degrees are listed in chronological order
• Both degrees display their proper names with the duration when you attended

 

Skills and Accomplishments

• Skills are endorsed by multiple people which adds credibility
• Consider getting more endorsements for various skills
• The accomplishment section is well written

 

Conclusion

After reviewing your profile, it is clear that you are off to a strong start. Implementing the following edits will further enhance your profile:

• Considering taking professional headshots
• Create a profile summary by moving some of the information in the title box to the summary section
• Move the volunteer experiences of UBC Vancouver Housing Market club to the experience section
• Rearrange your profile so that your volunteering experiences section is above the licences and certifications
• Try to add more experiences, these experiences do not have to be jobs

Please let me know if you have any questions or need further clarification on the improvements.

 

Regards

Nicholas Jang

 

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Barton Lui Linkedin Profile