ENGL 301 Assignment 3:1 Peer Review of Writing with Attitude

To: Roxanne Robles, ENGL 301 student
From: Erin Mungham, ENGL 301 student
Date: November 21, 2020
Subject: Peer review of Assignment 3:1 Memo to Evan Crisp

Thank you for submitting assignment 3:1, the email memo to Evan Crisp. The memo demonstrated the You-Attitude very well and provided great suggestions to Evan. Please see the peer review below.

First Impressions:

• Assignment criteria is met and the You-Attitude is consistent throughout.
• Helpful information was given to Evan Crisp in a professional and friendly manner.

Organization:

• The introduction, body and conclusion are concise and well written.
• Bullet points allow for good flow and clear presentation of ideas.

Writing Style:

• The minimal use of imperative verbs ensured the purpose of this memo was to provide information rather than instructions.
• The writing style is professional and respectful and doesn’t single the reader out.

Grammar:

• The writing flows well with no grammatical errors.

Concluding Comments:

• This is an excellent written memo and met the required criteria of employing a You-Attitude throughout.
• There are no improvements or edits that need to be made.

Thank you and please feel free to ask any questions, it has been a pleasure peer reviewing this work.

Roxanne’s Email Memo to Evan Crisp