Dear Rodrigo,
Happy Monday, I hope you had a wonderful weekend!
Great work with your email memo to Evan Crisp- it was clear, concise, and thoughtful. I’ve attached my feedback below!
Introduction:
You did a wonderful job of re-clarifying Evan’s initial problem and, clearly, transitioning into the feedback that you’ve provided.
Feedback:
The feedback you provided was well thought out, thorough, and applicable to what Evan was looking for. Great job! Putting your feedback into bullet points made it easy to read and clearly separated your topics. However, I think that you could have improved on this section by implementing the use of the “bolding” function to highlight sections you found most important/ applicable.
Conclusion:
To reiterate, I think you did a great job. If you have any questions, however, please feel free to email me at evanfruiz@gmail.com.
Best,
Evan Ruiz
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