To: Jessica Lee, ENGL 301 student
From: Nicholas Jang, ENGL 301 student
Date: December 4, 2020
Subject: Peer review of Jessica Lee’s Assignment 3:2 Formal Report
Hi Jessica,
Thank you for submitting assignment 3:2 for review. The assignment was a formal report outlining a strategy Urban Outfitters could employ to excel in the Chinese market. Please see my suggestions below for improvement.
Content:
- Information was insightful and well thought out
- I found the data section the most informative section
- I would recommend the “possible solution” section revision as it could benefit from additional content
- The technical terms such as USP are well defined
- Meets the criteria specified in the assignment
- The report is logically laid out with the problems and solutions identified and discussed in a methodical process
Organization:
- The organization of the draft is clear and effective throughout the entire report
- Headings and Sub-headings are used strategically
- Paragraphs are not overly long and remain a manageable size for the reader
- The report shows signs that links all parts of the report together
Style:
- The report uses an objective tone that focuses on the positive
- The writer implemented the techniques explored in assignment 3-1
Design:
- There are no grammatical errors
- The report is well laid out and meets the design requirements of the report guidelines
Concluding Comments:
- This paper was well written and shows a strong grasp of formal report writing
- The report is missing one visual as the formal report guidelines state a minimum of three visuals should be incorporated in the report
Please feel free to let me know should you have any questions.
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