To: Shuge Luo
From: Enguang Shi
Date: November 4th, 2020
Subject: LinkedIn Profile Peer Review
LinkedIn Profile Review Form
LinkedIn Page:
https://www.linkedin.com/in/shuge-luo-a00bb018a/
Reviewer:
Enguang Shi
Review Date:
2020/11/04
Photo & URL
The profile photo has a nice and tidy background and it is also pleasant to look at. It would be better for others to recognize you and get connections if you reveal your face.
The URL is a default one. You can consider customizing your URL to make other people easier to find you.
Summary
Showing your current status and previous background, the summary is succinct and clear. To intrigue interests, you could consider showing some personal characters in this section.
Background Information
The background information should be more detailed to let others know what have you done basically. For example, you can add information on how many students you have taught when you worked as a Chinese teacher, or what activities you have taken part in when studying at the University of Edinburgh.
Language and Tone
The language and tone are professional and clear.
Overview
In conclusion, this LinkedIn profile is well-formed. It has every section filled. However, you could try to discover more details in each of the sections.
It is a pleasure to take a look at your LinkedIn profile. Please consider my suggestions and feel free to modify whatever you think would be helpful. If you have any concerns or questions, please feel free to let me know.
Cheers,
Enguang Shi
Shuge’s LinkedIn page:
https://www.linkedin.com/in/shuge-luo-a00bb018a/
The reviewing template:
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