To: Phoebe Wu, ENGL 301 student
From: Nicholas Jang, ENGL 301 student
Date: November 22, 2020
Subject: Peer review of Phoebe Wu’s Assignment 3:1 Memo
Hi Phoebe,
Thank you for submitting assignment 3:1 for review. The email memo outlining advice to Evan Crisp was generally well written and provided useful tips. Please see my suggestions below for improvement.
First Impressions:
- Information is displayed in a clear manner
- Meets the criteria specified in the assignment
- Lists plenty of strategies that can be implemented
Organization:
- Introduction, body, and conclusion sections are easily identifiable
- Spacing between sections is consistent
- The title for the body section is bolded and underlined
Writing Style:
- The memo uses a professional writing tone and abstains from using imperative verbs
- Does not use the word “you” or “your” in the tips section
- Tips are concise but contain meaningful insights
Grammar:
- There are no grammatical errors
Concluding Comments:
- This memo was well done and satisfied all the criteria of the assignment
- After peer-reviewing your memo, it is clear that you fully understand the concepts of this lesson
- No changes or improvements are needed for this assignment
Your memo has been interesting to review and provided me with additional strategies I can employ in my email writing. Please feel free to let me know should you have any questions.
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