To: Roxanne Robles, ENGL 301 student
From: Erin Mungham, ENGL 301 student
Date: December 13, 2020
Subject: Peer review of application package
Thank you for submitting your application package. Please see the review of your application package below which outlines suggestions for improvements and areas of excellence.
First Impressions:
This application package includes all of the assignment requirements. The cover letter and resume maintain a positive and professional tone throughout and give sufficient detail to highlight achievements.
Content:
- The standard parts of a resume (contact information, career objectives, education, work experience, references) are all included
- Objective fits the job criteria
- Work experience lists the most recent jobs first
- Cover letter conveys a professional persona for the prospective employer
- Cover letter highlights skills and work experience in an organized manner
- Reference letters are well-written and respectful
Layout:
- The layout for the cover letter and reference letters are all well-formatted and easy to follow along
- Placing the dates in the employment section on a resume all in the same place (right margin) will maintain an organized layout
Design:
- Ensuring all font colour is the same throughout a resume will help with consistency and visual appeal
Concluding Comments:
With the following edits, this will be an excellent document:
- Placing the dates in the same place (right side of page)
- Ensuring all font colour is the same throughout
Thank you and please feel free to ask any questions, it has been a pleasure peer reviewing this work.
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