To: Hansol Yang, Technical Writing Member
From: Eric Zhang, Technical Writing Member
Date: Feb 2, 2022
Peer Review / Term: Recursion
Great job on completing this assignment and posting it before the deadline. Please see below for my review and suggestions.
First impressions:
This is a very well-organized and written document. It includes a proper format, which makes the document very clean. You also have a figure to demonstrate your example as well as a properly formatted reference.
Organization:
- Good introduction paragraph, it clearly stated what the assignment is and what you are going to write.
- Headings are bolded, which gives a clear structure of the document.
- The example figure in the “Expanded Definition” section is not captioned – please refer to the textbook example.
- The document needs a conclusion or a concluding message that summarizes what was stated in the document.
Content:
- An introduction to this assignment which indicates the requirements for this document
- Three different definition forms
- Used at least four expansion strategies
- Included one visual figure
- A reference section
Definition:
- The example of the recursion is somewhat difficult to understand for someone with zero knowledge in computer science.
- Recommend using a simpler code with step by step explanation
Grammar/Typos:
- Document contains some errors with grammar and sentence structure. For example, “Here I will show the example”.
- Note that pronouns are recommended to be avoided and that “an” should be used instead of “the” before “example”.
Work Cited List:
- Very impressive Reference list and a correct usage of the style.
- Please note that the requirement is to use three or more outside sources.
Concluding Comments:
This document is very well written. It is also very well organized, and it gives the audience a clear structure of the documents. This can be a very successful document with the following suggestions and a good proofread:
- Caption the visual figure to improve description
- Thorough proofread for sentence structure and grammatical errors.
- Include a closing message.
Overall, very well written and hopefully you find my suggestions helpful to you. It was a treat reading your document and learn about recursion. Please feel free to ask any question you may have. Thank you!
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