Name of the Reviewer: Trisha Bhamra
Author’s Name: Alexander Clements
Title of the Expanded Definition: Lesson 1:3 – Definition’s assignment – Expanded definition for “Cloud Architecture”
The material was easy to understand and digest upon first reading. There was enough information provided with adequate visual aids to better understand the subject. A few questions came to mind when reading the material:
- Is cloud architecture like cloud storage we use on a day-to-day basis?
- Who is the end user?
- What is the purpose of distinguishing between the “front end” and “back end” of the processing? Are those the layman terms used? Will it facilitate my understanding of the subject matter?
Clarifying the above three questions will lead to approval of the definition.
Overall, the purpose was clearly defined, and the document was legible enough for a layperson to understand cloud architecture. Compare/ Contrast, visuals, and analysis of parts was especially useful in gaining better insight into cloud architecture. Grammar, flow, and layout was consistent and concise. The document is well written. Some questions (listed above) may need some clarification for myself. Well done!
Link to the definition under review: https://blogs.ubc.ca/engl301-99c-2021wc/2022/01/30/lesson-13-definitions-assignment
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