To: Varneega Theva,
From: Jen Worsham – ENGL 301 99C Team Member
Date: February 5, 2022
Subject: Peer Review of the Three Definitions Assignment
I really enjoyed reading your definition of the term “full-stack developer”. I had not known the definition of this term before, and you explained it well enough that I feel I understand it now.
Organization:
Well-written with a good build-up of information and clear forecasting statements as the reader proceeds.
Expression:
The use of “back end” and “front end” in the parenthetical definition may not be clear to non-computer-experts (though you address this in the sentence definition). Perhaps in the parenthetical definition you might use “server side” and “client side” and then elaborate on this as “back end” and “front end” in the sentence definition?
Content:
Grammar/Spelling: Generally, your grammar and spelling are good. I noticed a few things to correct.
- A hyphen in the term “full-stack” is sometimes used and sometimes omitted in this work. It would be good to keep this consistent.
- Similarly, the hyphen usage for “front end” and “back end” is inconsistent.
- The term “career fare” should be spelled “career fair”.
- The sentence “a full stack developer is an engineer that handles and operates an entire application, from servers, databases and other internal architecture that drives the application to everything that a client can see and interact with on the external side” is missing a comma or two that would add clarity.
Visuals:
The visual you added helps to depict the division of front-end and back-end knowledge.
Works Cited List:
Your works cited list appears to be complete and well-formatted.
In conclusion, this was a well-written piece of work, and I found it to be informative and easy to read.
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