Peer Review of  the Formal Report Proposal

To: Ali Hasan

From: Varneega Theva, ENGL 301 99C Team Member

Date: February 18, 2022

Subject: Peer Review of  the Formal Report Proposal

 

Thank you for sharing your formal report proposal! You’ve done a great job at coming up with a feasible idea that could truly benefit working individuals.

Below are a few minor revisions I would suggest:

 

First Impressions:

The document is very well laid out and it’s easy to follow the process of the research to be conducted.

Organization:

• Follows the organization guidelines as required which includes an introduction, audience description, problem and solution statements, scope, methods, qualifications and conclusion

Introduction: 

• Great comparison of the pre-pandemic and pandemic work models
• Consider rephrasing “With the pandemic coming to an end..” in the second paragraph as this could be misleading
• Provide some insight as to what type of company “Jasper” is

Statement of Problem and Proposed Solution:

• The problem statement concisely describes both sides of the issue while mentioning the biggest challenges of both
• Further details could be provided regarding the solution such as how many hours per week should be minimum in person

Scope and Methods:

• The areas of inquiry show great promise for attaining depth in information
• The methods reasonably describe how the research will be conducted
• There is an inclusion of peer-reviewed articles in this process

Qualifications/ Conclusion:

• Qualifications mentioned provide reassurance for the successful implementation of the research
• The conclusion succinctly wraps up the proposal, while summarizing   the key details
• There is a key mention of requesting for approval

Spelling/ Grammar:

• The term “deeper” is misspelt under the methods section
• The fourth inquiry point under the scope section is a bit wordy, could be further simplified

Concluding Comments:

All in all, this proposal is a great idea and thoroughly describes the issue at hand. Other than a few minor suggestions as stated, this document is ready for review under our instructor.

• Correcting the spelling/grammar as mentioned
• Including a preface to the company, Jasper
• Providing further details for the solution

Please let me know if you’d like any clarifications on the notes posted above. Cheers!

 

Formal Research Report – Feasibility of a Hybrid Work model