Revised Business Letters – Complaint and Bad News Adjustment

Letter#1 Complaint letter

 

Carol Li

7435 Vista Cres

Burnaby, BC V5E2C9

 

Mar 12, 2022

 

Aritzia

4700 Kingsway,

Burnaby, BC V5H 4M1

 

Attention: Aritzia Concierge Department

Subject: Received Incorrect Order

 

Dear Sir/Madam,

 

I made an order a week ago, the order number is 9476520, and yesterday I received the package with the number 9492 3398 9613. The dress’s size in the package is not what I ordered. Attached is the screenshot of the details of my order.

 

I launched an exchange request last night, but the website showed that I need to pay the shipping fee, which is hard for me to swallow. Also, I bought this dress for my sister’s wedding on Saturday, but I’m afraid it’s too late.

 

I understand this may happen sometimes, but I hope you could send me the correct package and cancel my shipping fee. I have been a devoted customer of your company for years now and I hope you will take my complaint seriously.

 

I Look forward to your reply.

 

Regards,

Carol Li

 

Enclosed: Order #9476520 Screenshot

 

 

 

Letter#2 Bad News Adjustment Letter

 

Aritzia

4700 Kingsway,

Burnaby, BC V5H 4M1

 

Mar 12, 2022

 

Carol Li

7435 Vista Cres

Burnaby, BC V5E2C9

 

Subject: RE: Received Incorrect Order

 

Dear Carol.

 

Thank you for reaching out to us regarding your order issue and we’re sincerely sorry for what we did.

 

We will pay for the return shipping fee of the dress after receiving the original package. We appreciate it if could pack the wrong dress up, drop it off at your nearest FedEx Post Office, and sent it to us.

 

However, according to our company’s return and exchange policy, we cannot send you a new package until we receive your return. We’re sorry to have caused you trouble due to our mistake and to express our apologies, we’re offering you a 30% discount coupon for your next purchase.

 

We apologize for this unpleasant experience. Thank you for your feedback that helps us improve our service. If you have any questions or would like to discuss this matter further, please contact us through this email address.

 

I look forward to your continued support.

 

Sincerely,

Tara S.

Manager of Aritzia Concierge

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