Reflection Blog 1:3

Peer review process

Through the peer review process, I was able to learn from the strength of my partner’s definition and understand my weaknesses. Ben did an excellent job breaking down the components of the definition and explaining from the smallest component to the definition. The visuals presented early helped me understand the general idea of the definition before reading. As I was the reader/audience for the definition, I was also able to strengthen my writing skills by thinking from the reader’s perspective.

Editing process

Ben made very good points about placing visuals early in the definition and using less technical words for non-technical readers. I took his feedback and added an extra visual under sentence definition and added placed the visual examples above some sections. I believe this is easier to understand for the readers since the concepts are technical. Also, as Ben suggested, I removed some technical terms that could confuse the readers without a technical background.

https://blogs.ubc.ca/engl30198a2022s12/2022/02/08/revised-definitions-of-object-oriented-programming/