Details Please: Another example

Providing the necessary details concisely is tricky – so, here is another example to follow:

Details please:.

Summary of Research Proposal:

• Introduction and background
• Statement of problem
• Proposed solutions
• Scope of questions
• Research methodology
• My qualifications
• Concluding paragraph

Rewrite:

Summary of Research Proposal:

• Introduction and background: Increasing use of skateboards as a method of transportation around campus
• Statement of problem: Congestion caused by skaters and pedestrians sharing walkways
• Proposed solutions: Provide an appropriate lane for skaters along main routes of campus
• Scope of questions: The numbers of skaters and attitudes toward the need for a separate lane
• Research methodology: Surveys and secondary research on construction and planning
• My qualifications: Experienced in conducting research
• Concluding paragraph: A separate lane will improve traffic congestion and safety for skaters.