To: Lovin Kahlon
From: Brianna Diogo
Date: July 27, 2022
Subject: Peer review of the formal report draft: Integrating Ultrasonic Scaling at Pediatric Dental Practice in Winnepeg, Manitoba
Thank you for submitting the report for integrating ultrasonic scaling at pediatric dental practice in Winnepeg, Manitoba. This is a great job of exploring solutions to the issues within the practice. Below are suggestions for improving the formal report.
First Impressions:
- The report does a great job of detailing the areas in which the practice could use improvement
- Great solution
- The images and data really adds substance and relevance to the report
- A few minor formatting errors, could be because of how the document was exported
Introduction:
- The background and description is very concise but also provides all of the necessary details in order for the audience to get a grasp of what will be covered in the report
- The method of inquiry is great and detailed
- The Limitations of the Study and Scope of the Inquiry headings are different from the others, as they are not indented
Plan:
- This is great, detailed, and all of the figures embedded are incredibly helpful
Budget:
- Great structure, easy to follow and the elements are nicely laid out
Revised Recare System:
- This looks great!
Conclusion:
- Everything looks great, but be sure to go over a few times to make sure everything is as concise and relevant as possible in order to present the most amount of information with minimal filler
Organization and Design:
- Make sure all the headings are the same
- The introduction begins halfway down a blank page
- Just be sure to check for formatting
Conclusion:
The report looks great! Below is a summary of suggestions:
- Reformatting the report
- Revising the content to make as concise and relevant as possible
Thank you for giving me an opportunity to peer review. If there are any questions, please contact me at briannadiogo2018@gmail.com
Best,
Brianna Diogo
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