To Nicole White
From: David Cheung
Date: June 29th, 2022
Project Proposal Peer Review
Thank you for submitting your project proposal for the creation of a company website for Piquant Gourmet Specialties. It was an interesting read. Please see the review of your document and suggestions for improvement below.
First Impressions:
This document appears to be a comprehensive research proposal consisting of a statement of audience, introduction, statement of problem, proposed solution, scope, methods, my qualifications, and conclusion. Please see below.
Statement of Audience and Introduction:
- A good paragraph introducing the context of the audience of the document.
- The introduction does a good job explaining the background of Piquant, and underlines the causes of the problems the business currently faces.
Statement of Problem and Proposed Solution:
- The statement of problem section does a good job of describing what specific problems are faced by Piquant.
- The proposed solution section proposes that the multiple problems faced by Piquant can be solved via creating a company website.
Scope:
- The scope of the proposal laid out by the questions you seek to answer seems appropriate.
Methods:
- The methods section includes both a consultation with relevant parties and literature reviews.
Qualifications
- Your qualifications appear to be suited for the task of researching the feasibility of creating a web site for Piquant.
Conclusion
- The conclusion encourages reader acceptance.
Grammar style
- “They sell local and imported goods and specialize in Indian and Mediterranean foods cooked in-house”
- Replace “and specialize in” with “specializing in”
Concluding remarks:
Your proposal is an interesting read. It is informative and well organized. The document does a good job of convincing the reader that a website would not only offer a solution to being unable to answer a customer’s phone inquiries, but also expand the clientele of Piquant. The following change will make this an excellent document:
- Fixing minor grammatical and style errors.
Feel free to ask me any questions
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