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Unit 3 Reflections

Unit 3 of ENGL 301 has continued the trend that the previous 2 units have started. Writing memos to peers has become second nature as has understanding the flow of the course generally.

The biggest challenge, but also the most interesting part of this unit, was the Formal Report Draft. This is not necessarily a bad thing but I found that my topic seemed to narrow down from ‘students in general’ to ‘K-12 public education’. While I found contacting interviewees to be somewhat frustrating, mostly due to slow responses, I was surprised to find that they mostly provided me with inciteful and interesting responses. One thing that I had foresaw (but hoped would that they would mention less) is how funding affects the school curriculum and teacher training. While they mentioned other obstacles as well, it was clear that most teachers think that funding is the primary issue. While there are many helpful solutions that I can propose that would not involve major budget increases, a budget increase appears to be the main solution to the problem.

Besides some issues with the content of my draft, I actually found the process of interviewing and surveying people to be interesting. I have never needed to interview or survey people before so it was a novel experience for me. I mostly interviewed teachers from my old high school and surveyed siblings of friends, so finding subjects was not a major issue. I found it interesting hearing people’s perspective on this issue. I was delighted to find out that basically all of the teachers felt that programming was an important and worthwhile subject to add to the curriculum.

Organizing my essay proved be a pretty huge challenge. Even though I had already planned the general sections that I would cover in my report, I found that once I started, I needed to remove or add some sections. For example, I initially planned on having ‘research findings’ and ‘research discussion’ section. When I was writing, I found this to be awkward because most of my research involved opinions, so the discussion and results blended together. In the end, I felt that it was a better idea to use research to give a more in depth introduction to the subject to the audience.

I also felt that peer reviewing Travis’s work gave me some insights into my own, so that seemed like a helpful experience as well. I found Travis’s work interesting because he chose an issue vastly different from the one I chose. I also felt that his peer review of my work was helpful. He suggested that I spend more time thinking about my solutions section which was exactly what I thought I needed to do as well.

Overall, I felt that this Unit prepared me for creating a final copy of my formal report. I think that once I am done the report I will feel very accomplished.

Email Memo

Dear Erika,

My letter if application has been posted on my blog. I have attached a PDF of it in this email. In my application I discuss:

  • My interest in software development
  • My academic history, including my degree in Biographical Geosciences and my current enrollment in the Bachelor of Computer Science program
  • The pros and cons of my writing style, which I could consider to be (perhaps overly) straightforward and to-the-point
  • My learning method, which is generally a ‘learn by doing’ approach
  • My work history, including a lifeguarding position where I currently work, a sales position, and a software development co-op position

Kind Regards,

Josh MacDonald

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Application Letter

1234 Smith Street
Vancouver, BC, V5V 5V5
January 16, 2016

Joshua MacDonald
Computer Science Student
University of British Columbia
Vancouver, BC, V6T 1Z4

Dear Potential Group Member,

I hope you will consider my application to be member of your group in English 301. I am currently a third year student in the Bachelor of Computer Science Program (BCS) program at UBC and will graduate in May of 2018.

The BCS program is a program that allows students who already have a degree to get a computer science degree in 70 credits rather than 120. My first degree was in Geographical Biogeoscience in the Geography department. As a software developer, I am interested in application design and implementation. Ultimately, I would like to work at a larger company, because I think I will be able to grow professionally in that setting.

When I write I try to make my writing clear and concise, with too many embellishments. I think that this is both a positive and a negative. It is important to make your point clear in writing, however, having a flat tone to your writing can be boring to the reader. I aim to balance clarity in my writing with a style that keeps the reader enticed.

I consider myself to be more of a kinesthetic learner, meaning someone who “learns by doing.” For written reports and assignments, I find that it is helpful to quickly start writing without too much toiling over what needs to be included, make a rough copy, and then edit and add to what you have. I find that this is especially helpful during essay writing. A certain level of planning is helpful to the writing process because it helps keep the topics discussed organized. But at some point, I find it is better to simply start writing.

Currently, I work as a lifeguard at the UBC Aquatic Centre. Working at the UBCAC has given me practice staying focused and on task. I also worked as a door-to-door salesman for a summer. I found that job helped me taught me how to persevere. During the most recent semester, I did a co-op with the School of Architecture and Landscape Architecture (SALA) as a C# developer. This job was by far the most relevant to my professional interests. At SALA I learned how to independently solve problems. I also learned lots of more technical skills related to software development and software architecture. All of these experiences helped to harden my work ethic and I believe make me an excellent candidate to be a member of your group.

Thank you for taking the time to read my application. I look forward to telling you more about why I should be selected as your group partner. I can be reached at josh.a.macdonald@gmail.com.

Sincerely,

Josh MacDonald

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