Reflection Blogs

Unit 1 Reflection Blog

Throughout the process, I have learned to view my writing from a more critical perspective and how to make necessary revisions to enhance the clarity and coherence of my work. The peer review process, in particular, helped me to see my writing from a different angle and consider how others might interpret my work.

For the writing process, I learned three ways to write a definition in different angle. I choose weight stigma as my term because I think weight stigma is very common nowadays but not many people are aware of it. I think the most useful way I learned to explain weight stigma is the expanded definition. It gives me many ways to explain weight stigma well can clearly.

The peer review process was beneficial because it allowed me to receive constructive feedback and suggestions from my peers. The feedback was detailed, specific, and helped me to identify areas in my writing that needed improvement. One of the most valuable things I learned during the peer review process is how to present my ideas more clearly and effectively. It was also helpful to receive suggestions on how to organize my ideas and make my writing flow better. Terry’s writing is awesome, but I found some citation issues which would make me pay more attention to citation rules on my writing in the future.

Through the editing process, I learned how to be more meticulous when revising my work. I had to check my work multiple times to ensure that my ideas were clear, concise, and that my grammar and punctuation were correct. During this process, I realized that it is crucial to take the time to carefully edit and proofread my writing to produce a polished final product.

Overall, the experience of writing, receiving feedback, and editing was a rewarding and educational process. Through this process, I have gained a better understanding of how to communicate effectively, how to take and provide constructive feedback, and how to produce a high-quality piece of writing.

 

Link to Revised Definition: Revised Definition

Link to Peer’s Review: Peer’s Review

 

 

Unit 2 Reflection Blog

LinkedIn Profile

As a software engineer, I understood the importance of having a robust LinkedIn profile to enhance my professional image and increase my chances of being discovered by potential employers. Therefore, I was excited to work on the LinkedIn profile assignment for this unit.

Initially, I thought my profile was already comprehensive enough. However, I knew there was always room for improvement, so I decided to review my profile thoroughly. My goal was to identify areas that needed improvement and optimize my profile accordingly.

During my research, I learned that LinkedIn is an essential tool for recruiters to discover new talent. I also discovered best practices for using the platform, such as highlighting relevant experience and education. After analyzing my profile, I realized that some of the experience listed was no longer pertinent to the software business, so I removed them. I also added my time as a learning technology rover at Sauder School of Business to my experience section, which was a relevant experience that I previously overlooked.

Since updating my profile, I have noticed an increase in visitors to my page, and I have also made new connections with professionals in my field. I am excited to continue using LinkedIn beyond this course and take advantage of all the networking opportunities the platform offers.

In conclusion, working on the LinkedIn profile assignment was an eye-opening experience for me. It allowed me to re-evaluate my professional image and optimize my profile for better exposure. I now understand the importance of having a comprehensive LinkedIn profile and will continue to use it as a tool to enhance my professional network.

Proposal and Peer Review

Writing a research proposal and participating in the peer review process was an enriching experience that taught me valuable lessons. Throughout the process, I learned how to craft a compelling research proposal and how to critically evaluate the work of others.

Writing a research proposal required me to identify a research question that was both relevant and feasible. I had to conduct extensive research on my topic and ensure that my proposal adhered to the standard format and guidelines. Through this process, I learned how to develop a clear research question and how to structure a proposal that effectively communicates the importance and feasibility of my research.

The peer review process was equally valuable. It taught me how to evaluate the work of others critically. I had to provide constructive feedback that could help the author improve their research proposal. In doing so, I learned how to identify strengths and weaknesses in a proposal and how to offer suggestions for improvement. This process taught me how to communicate feedback effectively and how to provide constructive criticism that can help an author improve their work.

Participating in the peer review process also helped me improve my own writing skills. As I reviewed the work of others, I was able to see common mistakes and areas for improvement that I could apply to my own work. I learned how to structure a proposal effectively, how to write a clear and concise research question, and how to communicate my research in a way that would engage the reader.

Overall, the process of writing a research proposal and participating in the peer review process was a valuable learning experience. I gained a deeper understanding of how to craft a compelling research proposal and how to critically evaluate the work of others. These skills will undoubtedly be useful in my future research endeavors and will help me become a better researcher.

 

 

Unit 3 Reflection Blog

Formal Report Draft

During the process of researching, organizing, and writing the formal report draft on granting Chinese nurses the right to prescribe medication, I learned the importance of paying attention to details. It is crucial to ensure that every aspect of the report is thoroughly researched and organized in a clear and concise manner. I realized that conducting thorough research on the topic is crucial to ensure that the information presented is accurate and relevant. Additionally, it is essential to ensure that the sources used are reliable and trustworthy.

To ensure that the report was well-organized, I created an outline that provided a clear structure for the report. The outline helped me to identify the key areas that needed to be covered and ensured that the report flowed logically. Moreover, it helped me to ensure that all the necessary information was included in the report.

When writing the report, I found it helpful to use simple language and to avoid using technical jargon. This made it easier for readers to understand the report’s contents and ensured that the report was accessible to a broader audience. Additionally, I found that using examples and case studies helped to provide context and make the report more engaging.

One of the challenges I encountered during the process was finding reliable sources of information on the topic. To overcome this challenge, I ensured that the sources used were peer-reviewed journals, academic articles, and reports from reputable organizations. I also used the assistance of Professor Erika Paterson from the University of British Columbia to ensure the quality of the survey used for the report.

Overall, the process of researching, organizing, and writing the formal report draft was a valuable learning experience. It helped me to improve my attention to detail and organizational skills, and I gained valuable insights into the nursing profession in China. The report’s findings could provide evidence-based information for healthcare policymakers to make informed decisions that could improve the quality of care provided to patients in China.

 

Peer review

As I reflect on the process of researching, organizing, and writing the peer review of Miranda’s formal report draft, I realize how important attention to detail is. To provide a comprehensive review, it was necessary to read the report multiple times, paying attention to the language, structure, and design. It was essential to look for inconsistencies and inaccuracies and provide constructive feedback on how to improve the report.

One thing that stood out was the importance of presenting findings objectively without bias or personal opinion. It is crucial to analyze data and literature thoroughly to provide evidence-based suggestions for improving teaching approaches. Additionally, organizing the report logically, using clear headings and subheadings, helps readers navigate the report with ease.

Another important aspect was to use appropriate language for an academic report, with clear and concise writing style. It was crucial to use references to relevant literature and provide a detailed analysis of the data collected through the online survey. Lastly, the design of the report played a crucial role in enhancing its readability. The use of tables and figures was appropriate and increased the readability of the report.

Overall, this peer review process has taught me the importance of paying attention to detail in writing and the role of constructive feedback in improving the quality of a report.

 

Unit 4 Reflection Blog

Web Folio

As I reflect on my experience creating my web folio, I realize how much I have learned throughout the process. The web folio project allowed me to showcase my work and personality online and provided me with a platform to present myself professionally to potential employers or clients.

I learned how to use WordPress to create and design web pages, which was a valuable skill that I can use in the future. Despite some minor formatting challenges, the adaptable design of WordPress made the transition from my ENGL 301 blog to my web folio much smoother.

One of the most significant takeaways from the web folio project was the importance of paying attention to the smallest details while maintaining a professional demeanour online. I learned how to create a consistent theme and design across all my pages, ensuring that my brand was clear and cohesive.

Creating a cover letter, letters requesting references, and a resume also taught me how to craft professional documents that effectively communicated my skills, experience, and personality. This project also taught me how to network through LinkedIn and use my web folio to showcase my best works, which I believe will be useful in my future career endeavours.

Overall, the web folio project was a valuable experience that taught me several valuable skills. It reignited my passion for web development and motivated me to continue honing my writing and design skills beyond the duration of the course. I believe that my web folio will be an essential tool in my career and professional development, and I am excited to continue updating and refining it in the future.

Self-Assessment Reflection Blog

As an international student from China studying computer science, I have found the technical writing English course to be highly beneficial for my language skills development. Throughout the course, I have had numerous opportunities to practice my writing skills and have become much more confident in my English writing abilities.

One of the most valuable aspects of the course for me was the research report assignment. This assignment provided me with a structured framework to conduct research and present my findings in a clear and concise manner. It helped me to develop my critical thinking skills, which are essential in computer science. Additionally, the peer review process provided me with valuable feedback and helped me to improve my writing and research skills further.

I also appreciated the various writing assignments that focused on formal communication in a professional working place. These assignments allowed me to understand the importance of effective communication in a professional setting and helped me to improve my ability to communicate ideas and information clearly and concisely.

Overall, I feel that this English course has been highly beneficial to my academic and professional growth. I am now more confident in my English writing abilities and feel better equipped to communicate effectively in a professional setting.