Oral Anecdote:
I used the Google Chrome extension “Voice In” for speech-to-text.
last night went to the Arctic Monkey show with a buddy a show that we had bought tickets for around a year ago I was a pretty big arctic monkeys fan back in the day but I kind of have a stopped listening to their music in recent years but I thought it would be an awesome opportunity to ReDiscover their music and really get back into them over the year as things go sometime it never really happened and I never really started re-listening their music so all of a sudden last night was the concert but I was still excited because it was a night out and it was going to be some good music and I get to hang out with a buddy so what also happened is that over the past year I’ve moved quite far away from where the venue was so initially when we bought the tickets I was living in Richmond and I could take the sky Train downtown and become you know pretty easy to get to The Venue but now I live in South Surrey and so to take public transit to and from the venue it would take about an hour and a half so I decided that I was going to drive and because it would be more convenient and I would save myself a bit of time at least I thought and yeah so I set off yesterday headed downtown to meet my buddy for some dinner before the show so we went to a pizza place I’d never been to in a in East Van can’t remember the name but it was pretty good had a good selection on alcoholic beer and I had a pretty good one that was Philip’s pilsner and I was pretty tasty after dinner we headed to the show and it was it was that moment where I said okay are we going to find parking or are we going to try and pay for parking but you know I’m trying to save some money so I decided that we were going to park in a residential area nearby the venue but not too far off but not too close because all the streets around the venue said you know permit parking only for residents of this that and the other street but you know we were looking at the cars didn’t really see any permits or anything so I don’t know if they register them online or how that all works so we took our chances I parked the car there hoping that it obviously wouldn’t get told we wouldn’t get a get a bill on it and so thankfully not but anyways we headed off to the concert of people it was pretty wild just all the way down the sidewalk usually when I’ve gone to concerts you know there’s tons of entrances so I think you know they can let people in pretty relatively quickly and there’s not a huge lines outside but in this particular venue it seems like there was only one main entrance and so the lineup was going down the sidewalk block blocks and blocks between this moment where he said okay you know should we go to the end of the line or should we you know head over towards the front of the line and at the same time we’re walking towards the back of the line so you know we had made her decision you know we’re not as young as we used to be so we said yeah we better follow the rules and enjoying the join the queue like everybody else and so there we get in there it’s pretty good the opening acts already happening so we find our seats and and yeah we’re just hanging out listening to the opening act and waiting for the Arctic Monkeys to come on and then the show finally starts starts with the bang it was really good show but I definitely didn’t know I would say you know a quarter or maybe you know a third of the songs I would imagine that many of them are from albums that I had never heard of or never listened to maybe they were too recent but in any case a lot of their hits from several albums ago they played a lot of those so it was great to hear them and you know to have a good time at the concert after the concert I decided that I would drive my buddy back downtown he lives on your Granville Street and so I said yeah you’re not going to Uber I already have my car so I don’t mind dropping off before I head back to South Surrey and then we get into downtown and it is madness I thought the trip was going to take you know even on Google Maps said it was going to take like 9 minutes to drop them off but we hit downtown and the Coldplay concert I guess they were also playing last night was just letting out tonight I’m assuming they played BC Place just based on the amounts of people that were coming where they were coming from so we were just deadlocked in traffic so what was supposed to be like a nine minutes drop off turned into you know a 30 minute Adventure downtown before I even started my Trek back to South Surrey but anyways all in all it was a really good time it was a good night and it gave me excuse to start listening to the Arctic Monkeys again
Reflection:
First and foremost, I found this week’s task to be extremely challenging. I never realized how much of oral communication is conversational based and that orating a longer story without a conversational partner is both awkward and somewhat uncomfortable. I was surprised by just how much casual daily spoken language is built on small bits of oral language at a time, usually interspersed with questions, prompts or at least non-verbal prompts from people you are speaking with. With the absence of these things, I struggled to tell a non-rehearsed story for five minutes. I needed to restart my story many times before I was able to just flow with it and keep it going. Initially, I kept getting stuck a sentence or two into the oration because I was stumbling over my words or something sounded “stupid”, for lack of a better word. Eventually, I just let go of those feelings and let the process happen.
This text deviates quite a bit from the conventions of written English. Most strikingly, the text is entirely composed of one huge, run-on sentence. Punctuation is absent from this text entirely. This causes the text to read like the ramblings of someone’s (my) inner thoughts more than an actual story. Beyond that, capitalization and the division of the text into logical paragraphs also make this text stand in contrast to standard English written conventions. These missing elements result in the text lacking emphasis, pacing and the indication of emotions.
Overall, this text does capture the essence of my anecdote. The information is all presented in text form, though there are minor errors with how the “speech to text” program captured some of my words which does change the context. For example, in mentioning the pizza place we had dinner at, I made a point of saying that they had a good selection of “non-alcoholic beer”. In the text version, it reads as saying “good selection on alcoholic beer”. This error is both grammatically incorrect but also changes my intended meaning. At another part in the story, I was expressing how I hoped that my car would not get towed. The text reads “wouldn’t get told” which, again, changes the intended meaning. There are a few more examples of these misinterpretations of my story. This points to the fact that speech recognition software is certainly not error-proof. In truth, I think it would be quite challenging to design a program that is free of errors unless the system is trained extensively on the speech patterns of the individual speaker using it. Otherwise, so many factors can potentially impact how we pronounce and enunciate words.
I would say that the most common mistakes in my text, beyond the issues with the software interpreting some of my words and transcribing them incorrectly, were simply mistakes in the way that I told the story. What I mean by that is that upon reading the story I was amazed with the amount of “filler” phrases that I used. Specifically, I seem to speak with a lot of “you knows” when I am orally telling a story, at least when orally telling an unrehearsed story. When that is translated into a written story it reads as though it should be a piece of dialogue and not a narration, per say. If I had sat down and scripted the story, I believe that the finished product would be more interesting overall. I would have paid close attention to the construction of my phrase and selected verbs and adjectives that really captured my feelings and actions more authentically.
Through this activity it has become abundantly clear to me that oral storytelling and written storytelling are two very different types of texts that require unique skill sets. Beyond conversations, most oral storytelling I have done in the past has largely been in the form of formal presentations. These presentations are actually more like readings of written texts as I have often written scripts or at least developed talking points that I have practiced beforehand. When writing stories, one can spend any amount of time meticulously crafting the text. In oral storytelling, you need to deliver the text in that moment without having the time or luxury to undo, redo, take a break or consult other resources. At the same time, oral storytelling is more than the words spoken by the orator. Oral storytelling is also told through the use of one’s voice, one’s actions and body language, one’s context to a community and the place in which you are telling a story.
A quote from one of our reading’s this week really stood out to me and helped me consolidate my thinking on this topic. Gnanadesikan wrote, “writing is generally done more deliberately than speaking, so finished written pieces are much more carefully crafted than a typical spoken sentence. Written texts can thus convey their message more precisely” (p. 5). While I agree with Gnanadesikan I also believe that oral texts require crafting of a different nature. It seems to me that some of the skills required to deliver a powerful oral text may have been lost over time. Being so reliant on written texts, and even using written texts for the purpose of delivering them orally has, I believe, caused us to underdevelop oration skills. We spend so much time in school preparing students to develop oral communication skills but often use formal presentations as the main means through which to achieve this. Perhaps more attention should be paid to helping students develop their otal communication skills without pre-planning the text and writing it out beforehand.
References:
Gnanadesikan, A.E. (2011). The first IT revolution. In The writing revolution: Cuneiform to the
Internet (pp. 1-12). John Wiley & Sons.