I chose to write a bit of a political piece. Please keep in mind that this was all just off the top of my head. Also, I realize I’m a terrible speller (thank goodness for word processing software!)
I write a lot by hand, but rarely ever share what I write by hand with anyone. Ever since I started University, I will organize essays by writing down my outlines by hand. I also like to annotate things I’m reading by hand as well. I’m a songwriter as well, and write most of my songs out by hand.
The actual writing that took place wasn’t challenging for me. I was aware that what I was writing was going to be viewed by my academic colleagues, and didn’t want to sound stupid. I find myself reading a lot more than I write these days, particularly about politics. This exercise was interesting in that it allowed me to “put-to-paper” some of my ideas that I haven’t really had the opportunity to mull over extensively.
I crossed out some of my mistakes but didn’t really edit my ideas. This is basically directly out of my head. I didn’t want to try and make it look perfect, and didn’t have any pencils or white-out around to fix mistakes. When I write things with paper and pen, I commit to it being messy. It’s still my most effective method for drafting.
I feel that using word processors on computers is a more linear form of writing. I take full advantage of the spell checking and grammar checking available through software. I can check my word count, or change my font with impunity. I can easily edit my mistakes in a way that is impossible for the reader to even see that they had ever existed in the first place.
When I write things out by hand things can get messy. I can make mistakes, fix them, and then go back and realize I had it right the first time. I can cross sentences out that show me paths I don’t want to truly follow. I can rearrange pages in an order that makes better sense. I can worry less about the final polished product and focus on the underlying structure.
I don’t prefer one or the other. To me, they are two different tools with two distinct jobs that coexist together. I use both depending on the task at hand.
Potato Stamp
Firstly, my stamps turned out HORRIBLY, so please excuse my shoddy workmanship. I didn’t realize that I needed to mirror all of the letters until I had put them onto the sheet of plywood that I was using… I also used too much paint on the first one, and not enough on the second. I was considering trying to redo it, but thought that perhaps my failure could lead to some good observation/commentary. Here it is:
I found the process challenging. Just to get those stamps cut into the potatoes took several tries. I kept cutting parts that I needed to leave in. I was trying to make a statement by replacing the last symbol with a peace sign (due to the fact that I wanted to do this word but didn’t want to repeat a letter. The stamp making took me about 45 minutes.
My letters looked pretty good to me (based upon my limited ability at carving). That was until I dipped them in the paint!! That’s why I left the stamps in the picture so you can see what I was trying to do.
This was (obviously) a highly inefficient manner of mechanizing writing. I took almost the same amount of time to complete my stamp (which looked terrible) as I did to write my reflection (which I hope is at least somewhat articulate). But I understand how someone with more talent than me could use the potato method to consistently produce a message.
laura ulrich
June 2, 2020 — 9:03 pm
Hello Andrew,
Thank you for your articulate reflection!
Kudos to you for trying potato printing, though! I had the benefit of prior experience, but it always boggles the mind the first time you flip your letters… only to realize they’ll mirror! But I just have to ask— why did you choose to stamp on wood?!
I find it interesting that you think writing on the computer is more linear since I just commented the same thing on Linda’s blog post! Have you ever tried mindmapping? I got in the habit back in my biology days, and now that’s how I get most of my thoughts out. I often tell myself I’m going to learn how to code *properly* so that I can build a digital mind-mapping program that fits my needs (such as easily switching between typing and sketchnoting). I find that mindmapping helps me visualize the connection between ideas, and establishes the flow in my final piece.
Also, just wanted to say I loved this statement: “I can easily edit my mistakes in a way that is impossible for the reader to even see that they had ever existed in the first place.” That says so much about digital text, from words to the pictures we post.
andrew shedden
June 4, 2020 — 9:50 am
Hi Laura,
Thanks for commenting! I chose to stamp on wood because I had some scrap wood on my workbench. I’ve also been looking at ways to
“brand” some of my woodworking projects. Given how poorly my potato printing turned out, I think I’ll look at buying a branding iron instead!
I have tried mind-mapping, but have yet to find an application that worked in the same way as I can with paper and pen! I will occasionally tape my arguments to the wall and connect them with string.
I don’t necessarily think that the perfection inherent in digital expression is better for creativity!
Rebecca Hydamacka
June 7, 2020 — 2:54 pm
Hi Andrew,
I am impressed that you tried both tasks. My handwriting is so atrocious it would be too embarrassing to share. I see some clear ideas and very few edits; you are very good at editing your “mistakes.” I wonder about what manual scripts will look like in the future? I found some of my old (don’t ask how old) notebooks from Grade 10 and marvelled at the difference – they actually appeared very neat and “linear.” It is as if I was a different person.
It is also impressive how you have created “peace” without repeated letters. I had thought of the word but with two “e”s it was out. I am also glad to hear someone else struggled with the carving. It is interesting that you “edit” out mistakes in your “manual script” and felt pressure because of it being viewed by academic colleagues and yet you let the imperfect of your letters shine.
TanyaWeder
June 8, 2020 — 1:59 pm
Thank you for sharing your handwritten thoughts. I really identified with your thoughts on Identity Politics. Your thoughts on tribalism, communication, and limited interpretation of complex thoughts are all things I have lengthy discussions about with friends and family.
I can relate to the apprehension of sharing these handwritten notes as I know I feel more protective of those raw ramblings than my finished polished word-processed versions. I think this is apparent even from your preamble about your spelling though your thoughtful reflections.
I also find that handwritten notes are excellent to get ideas out of my head. Stream of consciousness ramblings that can lead to interesting and unexpected places. I too tend to scratch out errors rather than erase them for speed and because I know that this is a draft of ideas. A brainstorm. A seed that will become a ll grown tree (that you can later cut down for firewood)! I agree that these are two different tools with different purposes, outcomes, and formality of language.
(Don’t worry I carved a letter the wrong way too. Stamped it. Realized my error and re-carved it. Stamped it and gave myself a high-five for getting it right. Moved on to the next letter. Stamped it. Realized I made the same error again!! Fixed it. Managed to complete the rest of the stamps properly. Ha)
andrew shedden
June 15, 2020 — 8:46 am
Hi Tanya,
I definitely still feel that handwriting is the best way for me to get my thoughts onto paper initially. I also really appreciate being able to edit thoughts so quickly and effectively without worrying about forgetting things I had initially written!
A
SHAWNLAU
June 13, 2020 — 10:58 am
Hi Andrew,
Just wanted to know more about your song writing process. In your analysis, you wrote that putting things on paper allows you to mull over your ideas more. How do you reconcile all the factors involved with song writing, such as rhythm, rhyme, and melody? Is this something that all comes together as you are writing?
With the potato carving, I also did the letters backwards and needed to reflect the image in a mirror to get it right. But I used uppercase letters for their ease of carving, more straight lines that can be done with one slice. I like the medium of paint on wood, a bit more of a rustic feel.
Shawn
andrew shedden
June 15, 2020 — 8:48 am
Hi Shawn.
I usually write the general chords down over the lyrics when I’m writing songs. The rhythm is usually right within the words, and if it’s outside of what’s written I usually just remember my own odd metre choices! Glad you like my potato carving! I’m just grateful that I kept all of my fingers in the process!
A
TYLERSENINI
August 2, 2020 — 4:06 pm
Your stamps turned out great! The process that I had took me over an hour as I had to redo lol.
andrew shedden
August 14, 2020 — 12:15 pm
It was a very frustrating process for someone who isn’t so inclined!