Romanticizing Warriorhood – Keith Camacho: Authors Tribal History
by bobbyg
Camacho’s Romanticizing Warriorhood is in interesting piece of poetry because of its two part structure in explaining the tribal history. It starts off with the narrator describing the types of spears their ancestors would use for warrior hood. The poem then continues with the narrator describing their spear and how it resembles that of their ancestors.
“then began to marvel at our warrior hood
at our encounters at our spears
the kind of spears my ancestors used
the kind I wanted to use
the kind my friend used
she showed me one
sketched on a paper pad
showed the sharp tip
the slim shaft
and said, “see, that’s what we used” (113)
What I found interesting is the connection that is made between the past and present and the historical significance of warrior hood that is shown in a form of literature. For me it gives a sense of how these stories in poem form outlines the significance of family and the power of stories.
“I ask permission
from the spirits
with my machete
chopping away
i find an ifet tree
cut a piece
carrying the wood
to my truck”
One important aspect I noticed was the use of nature and how nature plays an important role in the tribal history of the narrator. In this particular poem the narrator portrays the clouds, trees and previous ancestors as important figures in the impact of tribal history. The poem ends with the narrator ending their life and laying beside their ancestors.
“we never died so forth
not then
not now
not ever”
What the author accomplishes in this poem is signifying the power of stories. The author situates themselves in the forest and recalls what it takes to be a warrior- similar to their ancestors. The author without mentioning explains that the ancestors sacrificed themselves to keep their sprits alive and the author does the same. While sharing this experience the author allows us to examine the power of stories and how stories that have been passed down still have the power to move forward.
Hi Bobby,
I am really glad that I read your blog posting on the poem by Keith Camacho. I especially enjoy your repeated use of quotations in the blog entry. The poem provides an interesting narrative of the author’s attempt to make a warrior spear along with a powerful ending implying historical events, “the spaniards/become/the cannibals/they are”.
Thanks for the posting!
Have a good week.
Carrie