{"id":372,"date":"2023-02-17T20:00:25","date_gmt":"2023-02-18T03:00:25","guid":{"rendered":"https:\/\/blogs.ubc.ca\/kin345\/?p=372"},"modified":"2023-04-15T11:33:17","modified_gmt":"2023-04-15T18:33:17","slug":"reflection-on-assignment-3","status":"publish","type":"post","link":"https:\/\/blogs.ubc.ca\/kin345\/?p=372","title":{"rendered":"Crafting Comprehensive Definitions: Lessons Learned from Defining &#8216;Registered Kinesiologist&#8217;"},"content":{"rendered":"<div class=\"flex-1 overflow-hidden\">\n<div class=\"react-scroll-to-bottom--css-sijrs-79elbk h-full dark:bg-gray-800\">\n<div class=\"react-scroll-to-bottom--css-sijrs-1n7m0yu\">\n<div class=\"flex flex-col items-center text-sm dark:bg-gray-800\">\n<div class=\"group w-full text-gray-800 dark:text-gray-100 border-b border-black\/10 dark:border-gray-900\/50 bg-gray-50 dark:bg-[#444654]\">\n<div class=\"text-base gap-4 md:gap-6 md:max-w-2xl lg:max-w-xl xl:max-w-3xl p-4 md:py-6 flex lg:px-0 m-auto\">\n<div class=\"relative flex w-[calc(100%-50px)] flex-col gap-1 md:gap-3 lg:w-[calc(100%-115px)]\">\n<div class=\"flex flex-grow flex-col gap-3\">\n<div class=\"min-h-[20px] flex flex-col items-start gap-4 whitespace-pre-wrap\">\n<div class=\"markdown prose w-full break-words dark:prose-invert light\">\n<p>Defining the term &#8220;Registered Kinesiologist&#8221; can vary based on the audience, context, and purpose. In this assignment, I explored three types of definitions &#8211; parenthetical, sentence, and expanded &#8211; to provide a clear and comprehensive understanding of the term.<\/p>\n<p>Through the peer review process with my partner Sonja, I learned the importance of incorporating illustrations to enhance the definition and adjusting the writing flow to create a logical conclusion.<\/p>\n<p>Based on Sonja&#8217;s feedback, I revised my definitions of &#8220;Registered Kinesiologist&#8221;. The link to the revised definitions can be found here: <a href=\"https:\/\/blogs.ubc.ca\/engl30199c2022w2\/2023\/02\/16\/revised-definition-of-registered-kinesiologist\/\" target=\"_new\" rel=\"noopener\">https:\/\/blogs.ubc.ca\/engl30199c2022w2\/2023\/02\/16\/revised-definition-of-registered-kinesiologist\/<\/a>. The changes I made include incorporating more context, providing more examples, and adjusting the language for clarity.<\/p>\n<p>In conclusion, this exercise taught me the importance of defining terms accurately and how to tailor definitions to different audiences and purposes. By incorporating feedback and continuously practicing, I can improve my writing skills and create more effective definitions in the future.<\/p>\n<\/div>\n<\/div>\n<\/div>\n<div class=\"flex justify-between lg:block\">\n<div class=\"text-gray-400 flex self-end lg:self-center justify-center mt-2 gap-2 md:gap-3 lg:gap-1 lg:absolute lg:top-0 lg:translate-x-full lg:right-0 lg:mt-0 lg:pl-2 visible\"><\/div>\n<\/div>\n<\/div>\n<\/div>\n<\/div>\n<\/div>\n<p>&nbsp;<\/p>\n<\/div>\n<\/div>\n<\/div>\n<p>Below is the Sonja&#8217;s peer review :<\/p>\n<blockquote class=\"wp-embedded-content\" data-secret=\"EMmOLmQC3Y\"><p><a href=\"https:\/\/blogs.ubc.ca\/engl30199c2022w2\/2023\/02\/13\/peer-review-of-longs-assignment\">Peer Review of Long&#8217;s Assignment<\/a><\/p><\/blockquote>\n<p><iframe loading=\"lazy\" class=\"wp-embedded-content\" sandbox=\"allow-scripts\" security=\"restricted\" style=\"position: absolute; clip: rect(1px, 1px, 1px, 1px);\" title=\"&#8220;Peer Review of Long&#8217;s Assignment&#8221; &#8212; English 301 99C Technical Writing\" src=\"https:\/\/blogs.ubc.ca\/engl30199c2022w2\/2023\/02\/13\/peer-review-of-longs-assignment\/embed#?secret=VSzjbfbqVE#?secret=EMmOLmQC3Y\" data-secret=\"EMmOLmQC3Y\" width=\"600\" height=\"338\" frameborder=\"0\" marginwidth=\"0\" marginheight=\"0\" scrolling=\"no\"><\/iframe><\/p>\n","protected":false},"excerpt":{"rendered":"<p>Defining the term &#8220;Registered Kinesiologist&#8221; can vary based on the audience, context, and purpose. 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