My story:
I thought that for today’s story we had talk about the field trip. That I went on today with my students. So I found out that our city was hosting a Mayor’s Expo for environmental education and I was really excited for. The opportunity to take my students there and of course it was a free field trip and. That was very enticing for us. No, the Mayors Expo was organizing busing. So they contacted me and let me know that they were going to send a city bus to pick us up. So it is the morning of the field trip. And we go to get on the bus and there is just a very loud beeping noise. We load all the children on and I’m letting the driver know that we can go. And we already a little bit late at this point, of course. Amber still just sitting there. So I go up to the vibe stripper again and I might get we can actually leave. It’s OK. And he was like, I’m not actually sure if I’m able to drive the bus because it’s making this beeping sound, giving me warning signals. So I’m waiting for my supervisor to let me know if we can go. After a little bit. Bus driver starts driving the bus and I’m like, oh great, we’re on our way. We’re about 15 minutes late at this point. An then he pulls over about 5 minutes away from the school. And tells me that he is not able to drive the bus, the bus can’t go over 30 kilometres an hour and that he is calling for another bus to come pick us up. So now we’re only 5 minutes from the school. We were pulled over on the side of a busy Rd. And it is boiling hot with the sun shining into the windows. And we are just waiting on this bus. Obviously this starts turning into chaos as my grade eight students are all over the place, excited, things like that Kids are trying to get off the bus and go walk around on the streets and I’m. Attempting to keep everybody under control. Eventually another bus does show up to come pick us up and takes us. Down to our field trip and we show up about. An hour late at this point. So we have missed the scheduled. Sessions that we were supposed to attend to and then we spent about 15 minutes waiting at the check in desk just trying to figure out what sessions I can take my students through. And how we’re going to manage the schedules, which I spent of course hours making for everyone signing him up for different sessions, but. In the end, we ended up having a wonderful field trip. Despite showing up an hour and a half late.
Story Analysis:
To complete this task, I utilized the speech to text feature (Office dictate) on Microsoft word. The most notable deviations from written conventions of English is the amount of times that I started a sentence with “so”, something I’m now hyper aware of. I can’t fault the program for that, but it is interesting to note the differences in the way that I would speak and how I would type out a story.
There are a significant amount of errors throughout the text. I found that every time I paused when speaking, the program finished the sentence and started a new one. The result is a rather choppy read with numerous sentence fragments. There are quite a few word substitutions, my personal favorite being the rebranding of the “bus driver” to a “vibe stripper” which actually still fit with the narrative. In several places the sentences start with the word “And” which deeply irks my teacher heart, but a common mistake found in students writing. Stylistically, if I was typing out a story I would likely add some spaces between paragraphs to group ideas together and help the reader digest the information. As a SPED teacher, this assignment really resonated with me. We are constantly being inundated with the directive to have the students use speech to text for their writing. While it does have some benefits for students, the written work comes out disjointed, full of errors, word substitutions and poor punctuation. I wonder about the effect this has on my students understanding of the English language. Often when we read back through their writing, they are unsure of what it says / is supposed to say/ or mistakenly believe a word to be another substituted word.
Aside from the disastrous punctuation and a few word substitutions, the text manages to convey the story well. There is only one area where I got a little lost reading it, but the key information is articulated well. The program I used functioned better than Google Read and Write (often used by my students) and I was quite impressed with the result. There are no spelling mistakes and the program rarely missed any of the words that I was speaking. The story I chose wasn’t particularly exciting and I found that towards the end I wasn’t entirely sure what point I was making. Had I chosen to script or write the story out, I likely would’ve edited it and made sure that there was a strong ending rather than a loose trail of thoughts.
A key difference in oral storytelling and written story telling is the relaxation of grammar rules and enhanced stylistic choices that the speaker might make. In my story, this came to fruition in the form of me saying “so” about every 3 seconds. The most obvious difference between print and oral texts is the absence of any tone or tempo that add meaning to a message. On paper, my story is incredibly boring, but if articulated verbally, the addition of dramatic pauses, tone and sound effects add another dimension to the message. When stories are told in person, there is an added bonus of facial expressions, body language and hand gestures that add a depth to the information being communicated. I think that my take away from this exercise is a strong preference for oral storytelling, and the hindrances of speech to text software.