My story was captured by an iPhone speech to text function in the notes app:
When I was about six years old, I received this Barney doll from my mom for Christmas. I was starting to get out of the Barney phase by that age so I wasn’t particularly excited to receive this gift but thought I would play with it to see if I could kind of rekindle that love I once had for Barney the one thing that made me apprehensive about this particular Barney doll was that it would talk without any prompting so I would just be playing with other toys in my room and then all of a sudden I would hear Barney say play with me or I love you. I was always a child who was fearful of unexpected noises so this Barney doll and me were not a particularly good combination as the days went on. It got even more challenging for me to deal with the Barney doll I would be trying to sleep and in the middle of the night I would hear Barney say terrifying things such as play with me and I love you. My mom remembers seeing this flying Barney doll come out of my room several nights in a row. After quite a while of me hiding Barney around various spots in my house. I decided to take more dramatic action one day while playing outside I decided to bring Barney out to a little forest that was behind my house. I went as deep into this forest as I could go and hit Barney under some leaves and dirt. A very nice week went by where I didn’t have to listen to Barney’s voice and then one day I opened the door to see the same Barney doll sitting on our doorstep. There was no knock when it arrived, and I had no clue how it had gotten there. The only possible explanation would be one of my neighborhood. Friends knew about the doll and brought it back to me when they found it in the woods or that the doll was alive and coming to murder me. Both scenarios seemed equally likely at my young age after this horrifying discovery and likely some tears to my parents. I convince them to donate the doll to OS freaked out child 30 years later I have become a father and my own child has always been nervous around talking dolls and stuffed animals. Perhaps this fear is hereditary
The speech to text function struggled with several conventions of written English. It would frequently miss punctuation marks like commas or periods (“I decided to take more dramatic action one day while playing outside…”). It would also add unnecessary periods, even in sections where I don’t remember making a pause in my speech (“one of my neighborhood. Friends knew about…). Due to the incorrect capture of punctuation marks, there are both run-on sentences and sentence fragments all over the place. Had I written this story, I would have included paragraphs. Voice to text was not able to predict where I would like new paragraphs to start. This also reads like someone talking, rather than a written account of the events. This is especially apparent when I used casual language (“if I could kind of rekindle that love…”).
Despite the many wrong uses of the English language in voice to text’s capture, I was impressed by the amount of words it correctly understood. The only misunderstood word was “OS”, which was meant to be “a less”. There are some excellent story elements that are right with this story. There was the comical imagery of the barney doll being thrown or its reappearance on my doorstep. The story is also relatable for anyone who has been fearful of an inanimate object. I noted the strong ending I included, connecting my current self to the past. I have always struggled with storytelling, and I surprised myself with the inclusion of a few interesting story elements.
The most common mistakes are the amount of written English convention rules being broken. I feel that this is an interesting story, told by someone who struggles with storytelling and was not captured properly by a mobile device. The device was unable to capture my expressions, tone or chuckling between certain parts. The rules of the written English language exist to make stories easier to read and familiar to the reader. Breaking up paragraphs and allowing pauses from punctuation are essential to capturing the interest of the reader.
Scripting the story would have allowed me to include written conventions to properly communicate my interesting story. I likely would have thought the story out in a more concise way, leading to shorter sentences and more focused work. The structure would have been clarified by using paragraphs and having the ability to edit my work.
I find that oral storytelling is messy and spontaneous. I was quite surprised that I hadn’t said “like” or “um”, though this was likely because I knew I was being recorded. Written storytelling is more intentional, thought out and structured. Both are an important way to communicate in our language, but I felt that this specific story works better through oral storytelling. The power of the story comes from my tone, expression and pauses. To translate this story in written form, more emphasis would be placed on details, conventions and effective word choice. When telling this story orally, it would likely change slightly based on who my audience was. When writing this story, my goal would be to effectively communicate it to a wider audience.
