“I have a great story to tell you.”
Something happened long long ago, years before you and I, when there were only two territories on earth that of the land and that of the sea. . The land and sea people had never physically encountered one another , however they had both heard stories which had been passed down and been remembered well.
The people who occupied the land lived in peace and harmony. Families worked in unison to gather food and water, and to build shelters. People lived off the land, shared and traded goods and food. There was no war or poverty. The land provided more than enough for all .
The water people lived similarly until a corrupt leader named Shugra took the sea throne. The once peaceful society the sea people knew and loved changed dramatically when Shugra decided he deserved more than others and implemented a rule where a half of every family’s food and belongings were to be given to him. He introduced money into their society, and soon there was a large gap between the rich; his friends & family and the poor.
His younger brother, Shutsy, pleaded and begged Shugra to abolish the money policy that was causing such inequality and dissension. However, Shugra would not budge despite the obvious destruction of the once peaceful community of sea people. Some lived in abject poverty while others gained from Shugra’s reign. People began to think only of themselves and to thieve from each other. The sea world was in complete chaos.
Shutsy knew there was no rationalizing with his stubborn, materialistic brother, and his only choice was to try and get help from the land people. Shutsy, much like the majority of his community had only heard stories of the land people, so he asked the elders where he might find them. After speaking with nearly the whole elderly population, he had a general idea as to where he might find the land people and set out to find them.
After fifteen days of swimming and ten hours of walking, he saw what looked like a small village. As he got closer, he began to get teary-eyed as he realized, the village looked just like his had before Shugra had taken over the sea throne. The land people saw Shutsy who was sobbing loudly now and began walking towards him. A curious elderly man asked, ” Why are you crying? Who are you, and what brings you here?”
Shutsy sighed and began to tell the tragic story of the poverty and bloodshed occurring amongst the sea people due to his brother’s greedy hand . The land people were horrified and couldn’t believe the terror Shutsy revealed. They pleaded to Shutsy to “call the story back”(King 10). “But, of course, it was too late. For once a story is told, it cannot be called back. Once told, it is loose in the world”(King 10).
To my surprise, this story actually took longer to write than some research papers. In high school, creative writing was one of my favorite classes however, after majoring in Sociology and writing mainly research papers and literature reviews, I have definitely lost touch with my creative side. While I had somewhat of a writer’s block for a good hour or so, I definitely had some fun with this exercise! Thanks, nice to use a bit of my right brain for once!
References:
King, Thomas. “”You’ll Never Believe What Happened” Is Always A Great Way To Start.” The Truth about Stories: A Native Narrative. Toronto: House of Anansi, 2003. 1-29. Print.
Paterson, Erika. ““ENGL 470 Canadian Studies ;Canadian Literary Genres.”University of British Columbia. UBC Blogs. 2014. Web. Web. 16 Jan. 2014.https://blogs.ubc.ca/engl470/unit-1/lesson-12/