if there is evil in the world, this is how it came into it

take the story about how evil comes into the world, the story king tells about the witches’ convention in chapter one of the truth about stories, and change it any way you want, except the ending. your story must have the same moral – it must tell us how evil came into the world and how once a story is told, it cannot be taken back. learn your story by heart, and then tell the story to your friends and family. after you have told the story a few times,  post a blog with your version of the story and some commentary on what you discovered about story telling.

– question posed by erika paterson.

 

"moloch" by stephanie lines
“moloch” by stephanie lines. 2014. inspired by allen ginsberg’s “howl”.

a long time ago there were two children. they were wandering together and scouring the earth in search of wondrous things. they swam through lakes so clear and blue that they shone in the sun like glass. they climbed through the deep cool trees of forests that smelled rich like wet earth and rotting wood. they wandered into cold caves that dripped damp and grew slick, towering rock spires. and they kept on looking for more wondrous things because that’s what the human heart desires above all else – to search for more. so they climbed mountains and gazed on breathtaking views, and visited dry deserts where the earth spread out in miles of dry earth and shimmering sand. and still they kept on searching.

one day one of the children noticed a bright shiny object in the ground. the children circled around it and began to dig to uncover the object. they kept digging and digging and they found that the more they dug, the more of the object was uncovered. it was so shiny and hard, it was unlike any of the other rocks they had seen before. the children began to get very excited as they realized how deep they could dig with their own hands. they began to uproot plants nearby in order to uncover more of the brilliant rock below. they began to chase animals away in order to focus undisturbed on their digging. they started working late into the night and lost concern for the other things going on in the land around them. when other children wandered across them, the digging children hid their holes and shiny rock treasure. the other children did not understand, but this was the beginning of evil in the world.

soon the digging children became old and yet they still dug away at the earth searching for more. the land around them was bare and dead and empty. one of the children, now old, lied down and died because he was too tired to dig anymore.

the other child, now also old, spoke aloud to the empty land around him. “i have dug the greatest hole in the world,” he said.

i’m not sure if he knew it, but once a story has been told, it can never be taken it back.

 

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Yuxweluptun, Lawrence Paul. “Fucking Creeps They’re Environmental Terrorists”, 2013, Acrylic on canvas, 84” x 72”.

this a story i formulated over a few days, mostly with my boyfriend as a listener. we both found it hard to pin “evilness” as being something human or created by humans. the idea of evil brings up ideas surrounding religious morality immediately. after much thought however, i realized i did see a great destructive evil in greed and money. my boyfriend and i both agreed on this and i began to formulate the story of how our human innocence of searching and living can very quickly and easily get caught into greed and selfishness that is harmful to others and the world. sharing the story with people around me meant that i got a lot of input and encouragement, and also inspiration. it wasn’t a story that i wrote. it was a story that i was a part of,  just as much as my professor was a part of for giving me the assignment, and the writer thomas king was a part of it for sharing his version of how evil came into the world, and my boyfriend was a part of it for getting excited with me about our ideas and giving me input into his version of what goes wrong in the world.

 

works cited

Busby, Brian John. “Thomas King”. The Canadian Enyclopedia. April 2008. www.thecanadianencyclopedia.ca/en/article/thomas-king. Accessed 25 Sept 2016.

King, Thomas. The Truth about Stories. New York : House of Anansi Press, 2011. Print.

Lines, Stephanie. Molech. 2014.

Paterson, Erika. “Lesson 1.3 – Introduction to Thomas King and Story”. ENGL 4710 Canadian Literary Genres: Canadian Studies. University of British Columbia. Nov. 2013. blogs.ubc.ca/courseblogsis_ubc_engl_470a_99c_2014wc_44216-sis_ubc_engl_470a_99c_2014wc_44216_2517104_1/unit-1/lesson-13/. 25. Accessed 25 Sept. 2016.

Yuxweluptun, Lawrence Paul. Fucking Creeps They’re Environmental Terrorists. 2013. Mcauley and Co. Fine Art. mfineart.ca/macaulay-co-fine-art/artists/lawrence-paul-yuxweluptun/. Accessed 25 Sept. 2016.

4 thoughts on “if there is evil in the world, this is how it came into it”

  1. Hello Stephanie,
    I very much enjoyed your version of how evil came into the world. I enjoyed how you began the story off with the innocence of the children. In my version, I also tried to emphasize the innocence that existed before evil entered the world and altered it into a harmful force.
    I also enjoyed your comments in your write-up about how you got inspiration from the input of others. So often we strive to make things original and untouched by others to present it as our own art. To me, stories can only be improved by the input and inspiration that comes from others. It’s difficult to create a story within a vacuum.

    1. hi hope!
      i enjoyed your story too! i especially enjoyed how breif yours was. i think brevity is very effective. and i agree – stories need breathing room and soundboards to bounce off of! any creative writer will agree with you – it takes community around in order to be able to get the feedback needed to complete projects that are accessable. how wonderful to be bale to share stories aloud and have immediate feedback and input for them.

      i think we are often obsessed with an idea of ownership of stories, what with trademarks and copyrights etc. i mean for sure, the artist deserves recognition for their work. but what about the people that inspired the artist? do they not deserve recognition as well?

  2. Hi Stephanie,

    Thanks for your post and for sharing your story. I really enjoyed how evil was something that took time and accumulation to create, something that is not the case in most of the stories I have read. I also really liked how greed and desire was the essence of evil- something that is very easy to see in today’s modern world. The question I had was about the story that can never be untold. I just want clarification, is the child at the end who has successfully dug the whole telling the story to others? Or is it just the declaration that they have finished the whole, that is the story?

    Thanks!

    -Jenny

    1. hi jenny!
      thanks for your feedback and kind words! i also appreciated your story and your modern relevant take on it.

      the child was not the narrator of the story. the telling of the story that cannot be taken back was the simple statement the boy makes where he says “i have dug hte greatest hole in the world”.

      best,
      stephanie

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