{"id":264,"date":"2021-02-14T23:58:18","date_gmt":"2021-02-15T06:58:18","guid":{"rendered":"https:\/\/blogs.ubc.ca\/mrbristow\/?page_id=264"},"modified":"2021-02-14T23:58:54","modified_gmt":"2021-02-15T06:58:54","slug":"task-5-twine-task","status":"publish","type":"page","link":"https:\/\/blogs.ubc.ca\/mrbristow\/etec-540\/task-5-twine-task\/","title":{"rendered":"Task 5: Twine Task"},"content":{"rendered":"<p><a href=\"https:\/\/blogs.ubc.ca\/mrbristow\/files\/2021\/02\/ETEC-540.zip\">ETEC 540 Twine Task<\/a><\/p>\n<p><a href=\"https:\/\/blogs.ubc.ca\/mrbristow\/individual-intellectual-productions\/ip6-learning-through-game-design\/\">ETEC 565S Twine Game<\/a><\/p>\n<p><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">First and foremost, I feel this Twine story assignment really helped illustrate to me the concept of a hypertext network with its restructuring of text where \u201call the individ\u00adual pages may be of equal importance in the whole text, which becomes a network of interconnected writings.\u201d (Bolter, 2001, p. 27). I created my Twine story for ETEC 540 by following two primary threads with approximately four secondary branches loosely (and hopefully humourously) based around my struggles with procrastination in education. My first steps were to flesh out a single thread of story which I was then able to branch off of and link back to. As I created my slides\/pages, I found myself aligning with Bolter\u2019s statement that when working with hypertext networks, \u201c[t]he medium itself encourages brevity\u201d as I would create short and basic titles for easier indexing and accessing from different slides. In several of my slides and linking decisions I hoped to mimic an internal monologue for which I used informal utterances as described by Gretch McCulloch to Helen Zaltzman. I feel this informal writing style communicates a more accurate representation of language which, as seen in our previous assignment of speech-to-text, is far different from our standard form of written language.<\/span><\/p>\n<p><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">As I look back at the visual representation of the Twine, I am struck by Bolter\u2019s statement that \u201cthe electronic writing space can represent any relationships that can be defined as the interplay of pointers and elements. Multiple relationships pose no special problem\u201d (2001, p. 32) as links can be made between any of the pages regardless of where they may appear in a \u201clinear\u201d structure. Using the hypertext network to create the electronic \u2018choose your own adventure\u2019 platform seemed in harmony with Bush\u2019s declaration of a mathematician who is\u00a0<\/span><\/p>\n<p><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">\u201ca man of intuitive judgment in the choice of the manipulative processes he employs. All else he should be able to turn over to his mechanism, just as confidently as he turns over the propelling of his car to the intricate mechanism under the hood.\u201d (1945)<\/span><\/p>\n<p><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">Adopting the digital platform frees the reader from having to flip from page to page in a traditional book allowing the creator to guide the reader or user through the experience without removing them from the experience.<\/span><\/p>\n<p><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">Bolter did have me questioning its true interactivity as he shares how some \u201cchallenge the hypertextual definition of interactivity: letting the reader choose links only gives the illusion of con\u00adtrol, which is really withheld from the reader.\u201d (Bolter, 2001, p. 43) This had me consider if perhaps this could be related to Zaltzman\u2019s worry that auto-correct will begin choosing words for us causing us to link our ideas in a different way, prescribing to the auto-correct algorithm\u2019s version of language rather than our own? Will our remediation of print and adoption of digital technologies remove our own agency and expression through language?<\/span><\/p>\n<p>&nbsp;<\/p>\n<p><i><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">The Allusionist<\/span><\/i><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">, Helen Zaltzman interviews Gretchen McCulloch, Internet linguist.<\/span><\/p>\n<p><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">Bolter, J.D. (2001). Writing Space: Computers, hypertext, and the remediation of print (Links to an external site.). Mahway, NJ: Lawrence Erlbaum Associates, pp. 77-98.<\/span><\/p>\n<p><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">Bush, V. (1945). As we may think. The Atlantic Monthly, 176(1) (Links to an external site.), 101-108.\u00a0<\/span><\/p>\n<p>&nbsp;<\/p>\n<p><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">Image source<\/span><\/p>\n<p>&nbsp;<\/p>\n<p><a href=\"https:\/\/upload.wikimedia.org\/wikipedia\/commons\/thumb\/8\/84\/Black_Man_Working_at_his_Desk_Cartoon_Vector.svg\/800px-Black_Man_Working_at_his_Desk_Cartoon_Vector.svg.png\"><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">https:\/\/upload.wikimedia.org\/wikipedia\/commons\/thumb\/8\/84\/Black_Man_Working_at_his_Desk_Cartoon_Vector.svg\/800px-Black_Man_Working_at_his_Desk_Cartoon_Vector.svg.png<\/span><\/a><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">\u00a0<\/span><\/p>\n<p><a href=\"https:\/\/upload.wikimedia.org\/wikipedia\/commons\/thumb\/c\/c0\/375-thumbs-up-1.svg\/600px-375-thumbs-up-1.svg.png\"><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">https:\/\/upload.wikimedia.org\/wikipedia\/commons\/thumb\/c\/c0\/375-thumbs-up-1.svg\/600px-375-thumbs-up-1.svg.png<\/span><\/a><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">\u00a0<\/span><\/p>\n<p><a href=\"https:\/\/upload.wikimedia.org\/wikipedia\/commons\/thumb\/4\/41\/Shia_LaBeouf_%28Cannes_Film_Festival_2012%29.jpg\/406px-Shia_LaBeouf_%28Cannes_Film_Festival_2012%29.jpg\"><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">https:\/\/upload.wikimedia.org\/wikipedia\/commons\/thumb\/4\/41\/Shia_LaBeouf_%28Cannes_Film_Festival_2012%29.jpg\/406px-Shia_LaBeouf_%28Cannes_Film_Festival_2012%29.jpg<\/span><\/a><\/p>\n","protected":false},"excerpt":{"rendered":"<p>ETEC 540 Twine Task ETEC 565S Twine Game First and foremost, I feel this Twine story assignment really helped illustrate to me the concept of a hypertext network with its restructuring of text where \u201call the individ\u00adual pages may be of equal importance in the whole text, which becomes a network of interconnected writings.\u201d (Bolter, [&hellip;]<\/p>\n","protected":false},"author":31422,"featured_media":0,"parent":243,"menu_order":0,"comment_status":"closed","ping_status":"closed","template":"","meta":{"footnotes":""},"class_list":["post-264","page","type-page","status-publish","hentry"],"_links":{"self":[{"href":"https:\/\/blogs.ubc.ca\/mrbristow\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/pages\/264","targetHints":{"allow":["GET"]}}],"collection":[{"href":"https:\/\/blogs.ubc.ca\/mrbristow\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/pages"}],"about":[{"href":"https:\/\/blogs.ubc.ca\/mrbristow\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/types\/page"}],"author":[{"embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/blogs.ubc.ca\/mrbristow\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/users\/31422"}],"replies":[{"embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/blogs.ubc.ca\/mrbristow\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/comments?post=264"}],"version-history":[{"count":2,"href":"https:\/\/blogs.ubc.ca\/mrbristow\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/pages\/264\/revisions"}],"predecessor-version":[{"id":267,"href":"https:\/\/blogs.ubc.ca\/mrbristow\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/pages\/264\/revisions\/267"}],"up":[{"embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/blogs.ubc.ca\/mrbristow\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/pages\/243"}],"wp:attachment":[{"href":"https:\/\/blogs.ubc.ca\/mrbristow\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/media?parent=264"}],"curies":[{"name":"wp","href":"https:\/\/api.w.org\/{rel}","templated":true}]}}