{"id":27,"date":"2018-03-01T01:05:38","date_gmt":"2018-03-01T08:05:38","guid":{"rendered":"https:\/\/blogs.ubc.ca\/richmondassetmap\/?p=27"},"modified":"2018-03-01T01:05:38","modified_gmt":"2018-03-01T08:05:38","slug":"blog-post-2","status":"publish","type":"post","link":"https:\/\/blogs.ubc.ca\/richmondassetmap\/2018\/03\/01\/blog-post-2\/","title":{"rendered":"Blog Post #2"},"content":{"rendered":"<p><b><i>\u201cComing together is a beginning; keeping together is progress; working together is success.\u201d &#8211; Henry Ford<\/i><\/b><\/p>\n<p><b><i>Blog #2: Project Proposal + Progress<\/i><\/b><\/p>\n<p><b>PDF of Project Proposal:<\/b><\/p>\n<p><a href=\"https:\/\/blogs.ubc.ca\/richmondassetmap\/files\/2018\/03\/Proposal.pdf\">Proposal<\/a><\/p>\n<p>&nbsp;<\/p>\n<p><b>Weekly Objectives and Achievements <\/b><\/p>\n<p><b>Week 3 (Jan 22 &#8211; 28) <\/b><\/p>\n<p><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">Objectives: <\/span><\/p>\n<ul>\n<li style=\"font-weight: 400;\"><b>Arrange a meeting<\/b><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\"> with our community partners from Vancouver Coastal Health, Anne Swann and Rani Wangsawidjaya, to have a better understanding about the project and our roles.<\/span><\/li>\n<li style=\"font-weight: 400;\"><b>Write and post blog post #1<\/b><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\"> &#8211; an introduction about our group<\/span><\/li>\n<li style=\"font-weight: 400;\"><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">Each group member has to complete TCPS2 tutorial course on research ethics<br \/>\n<\/span><br \/>\nAchievements:<\/li>\n<\/ul>\n<ul>\n<li style=\"font-weight: 400;\"><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">Jan 22nd, 2018 &#8211; <\/span><b>Had our first meeting<\/b><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\"> with Anne at Richmond Public Health <\/span>\n<ul>\n<li style=\"font-weight: 400;\"><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">Gained knowledge in the background statistics of Richmond demographics and the importance of a food asset map <\/span><\/li>\n<li style=\"font-weight: 400;\"><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">Learned about the goals, responsibilities and key dates for this project<\/span><\/li>\n<\/ul>\n<\/li>\n<li style=\"font-weight: 400;\"><b>Posted blog post #1<\/b><\/li>\n<li style=\"font-weight: 400;\"><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">Every group member completed TCPS2 tutorial course on research ethics <\/span><\/li>\n<\/ul>\n<p>&nbsp;<\/p>\n<p><b>Week 4 (Jan 29 &#8211; Feb 4) <\/b><\/p>\n<p><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">Objectives: <\/span><\/p>\n<ul>\n<li style=\"font-weight: 400;\"><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">Learn how to write a project proposal <\/span><\/li>\n<li style=\"font-weight: 400;\"><b>Write project proposal outline <\/b><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">(section by section) <\/span>\n<ul>\n<li style=\"font-weight: 400;\"><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">Receive feedback from Tori if major changes are needed to be made <\/span><\/li>\n<li style=\"font-weight: 400;\"><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">Prepare to present the outline of project proposal to class for next week <\/span><\/li>\n<\/ul>\n<\/li>\n<\/ul>\n<p><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">Achievements: <\/span><\/p>\n<ul>\n<li style=\"font-weight: 400;\"><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">Developed a project proposal outline during tutorial <\/span><\/li>\n<\/ul>\n<p>&nbsp;<\/p>\n<p><b>Week 5 (Feb 5 &#8211; 11) <\/b><\/p>\n<p><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">Objectives: <\/span><\/p>\n<ul>\n<li style=\"font-weight: 400;\"><b>Presentation <\/b><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">on project proposal outline to Tori and other groups in the class<\/span><\/li>\n<li style=\"font-weight: 400;\"><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">Receive <\/span><b>feedback <\/b><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">and <\/span><b>edit <\/b><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">proposal outline after the <\/span><\/li>\n<li style=\"font-weight: 400;\"><b>Write proposal<\/b><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\"> &#8211; due Feb 9th <\/span><\/li>\n<li style=\"font-weight: 400;\"><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">Edit blog post #1 accordingly to Tori\u2019s feedback <\/span><\/li>\n<\/ul>\n<p><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">Achievements: <\/span><\/p>\n<ul>\n<li style=\"font-weight: 400;\"><b>Wrote and submitted project proposal <\/b><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">to Tori <\/span><\/li>\n<li style=\"font-weight: 400;\"><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">Edited and resubmitted blog post #1 <\/span><\/li>\n<\/ul>\n<p>&nbsp;<\/p>\n<p><b>Week 6 (Feb 12 &#8211; 18)<\/b><\/p>\n<p><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">Objectives: <\/span><\/p>\n<ul>\n<li style=\"font-weight: 400;\"><b>Edit <\/b><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">project proposal after receiving feedback from Tori <\/span><\/li>\n<li style=\"font-weight: 400;\"><b>Email <\/b><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">final version of project proposal to Anne and Rani <\/span><\/li>\n<\/ul>\n<p><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">Achievements: <\/span><\/p>\n<ul>\n<li style=\"font-weight: 400;\"><b>Emailed project proposal <\/b><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">to Anne and Rani <\/span><\/li>\n<\/ul>\n<p>&nbsp;<\/p>\n<p><b>Week 7 (Feb 19 &#8211; 25) <\/b><\/p>\n<p><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">Objective: <\/span><\/p>\n<ul>\n<li style=\"font-weight: 400;\"><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">Start working on excel document <\/span><\/li>\n<li style=\"font-weight: 400;\"><b>Receive feedback<\/b><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\"> from Anne and Rani <\/span><\/li>\n<\/ul>\n<p><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">Achievements: <\/span><\/p>\n<ul>\n<li style=\"font-weight: 400;\"><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">Contacted Richmond city hall and the Richmond chamber of commerce for business licenses \u00a0<\/span><\/li>\n<\/ul>\n<p>&nbsp;<\/p>\n<p><b>Week 8 (Feb 26 &#8211; Mar 4) <\/b><\/p>\n<p><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">Objectives: <\/span><\/p>\n<ul>\n<li style=\"font-weight: 400;\"><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">Write and <\/span><b>post <\/b><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">blog post #2 &#8211; Project proposal and progress <\/span><\/li>\n<li style=\"font-weight: 400;\"><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">Aim to <\/span><b>finish updating excel document by March 5th <\/b><\/li>\n<\/ul>\n<p><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">Achievements: <\/span><\/p>\n<ul>\n<li style=\"font-weight: 400;\"><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">Posted blog post #2 <\/span><\/li>\n<\/ul>\n<p>&nbsp;<\/p>\n<p><b>Moment of Significance <\/b><\/p>\n<p>&nbsp;<\/p>\n<p><b><i>What?<\/i><\/b><\/p>\n<p>&nbsp;<\/p>\n<p><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">Our group had a hard time finalizing the project proposal. We created it using our own knowledge, and from additional research we did. By integrating opinions from our group members, our partners Anne and Rani, and our TA Tori, we managed to finish the proposal outline and the first submission.<\/span><\/p>\n<p>&nbsp;<\/p>\n<p><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">Writing of the Proposal <\/span><\/p>\n<p><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">Lessons We Learned \u2018The Hard Way\u2019 about Writing Proposals:<\/span><\/p>\n<p><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">When we say \u201cthe hard way\u201d, we actually mean lessons we learned through thoughtful constructive criticism from our professor, teaching assistant and community partner. Undoubtedly, rejection hurts on any level, and when we first received our grade we all realized there was serious room for improvement.<\/span><\/p>\n<p>&nbsp;<\/p>\n<p><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">Cohesion <\/span><\/p>\n<p><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">We had difficulty making a cohesive proposal since every group member worked on different parts of the proposal which meant there was not a single, cohesive voice, but rather many disparate voices running throughout the proposal.<\/span><\/p>\n<p><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">Readily Understandable Content<\/span><\/p>\n<p><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">Complex language, jargon and obscure abbreviations do not belong in a proposal. Breaking down what we researched (food sovereignty, food security, community planning) into concise digestible paragraphs proved much more difficult than originally expected.<\/span><\/p>\n<p>&nbsp;<\/p>\n<p><b><i>So What? <\/i><\/b><\/p>\n<p>&nbsp;<\/p>\n<p><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">Importance of Cohesion<\/span><\/p>\n<p><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">Cohesion not only reflects how we communicate as a group and finalize our projects, but is also important for effectively persuading the reader that our proposal holds credibility.<\/span><\/p>\n<p>&nbsp;<\/p>\n<p><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">Importance of Understandable content <\/span><\/p>\n<p><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">Having a crystal clear understanding of our project\u2019s objectives and goals will better allow us to make higher level connections from our research and to think critically about making improvements to the web application. <\/span><\/p>\n<p>&nbsp;<\/p>\n<p><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">These skills we have gained in the proposal creations <\/span><\/p>\n<p><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">Improving communication and information sharing is not only a goal of the RFAM, but we now realize must be a goal for us to work toward as a group. <\/span><\/p>\n<p>&nbsp;<\/p>\n<p><b><i>Now What? <\/i><\/b><\/p>\n<p>&nbsp;<\/p>\n<p><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">In preparation for our feedback interviews about the application and the final presentation of our findings, we aim to make a several improvements to our team strategy.<\/span><\/p>\n<ul>\n<li style=\"font-weight: 400;\"><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">We will put a much larger emphasis on editing and revising for simple grammatical errors as well as the content itself after receiving feedback from our community member and TA<\/span><\/li>\n<li style=\"font-weight: 400;\"><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">We will meet in person as a group more often outside of class<\/span><\/li>\n<li style=\"font-weight: 400;\"><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">We will get better at time management, and make sure to get work done sooner so that midterms do not take us by surprise again!<\/span><\/li>\n<\/ul>\n<p>&nbsp;<\/p>\n<p><b>Upcoming Objectives and Strategies <\/b><\/p>\n<p>&nbsp;<\/p>\n<p><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">Next, we will be collecting data from the community organizations and grocery shops and obtain consents to publish their information. We are planning to achieve this by email and phone. Once we will gather all the information, then we will be entering them into the Excel spreadsheet provided by the Vancouver Coastal Health before March 5th. Based on the latest update that we provide, our community partner will then compile them into the Food Asset Map.<\/span><\/p>\n<p>&nbsp;<\/p>\n<p><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">Towards the end of March, our team will do an infographic presentation on the final project and the final report will be completed by early April.<\/span><\/p>\n<p>&nbsp;<\/p>\n<p><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">As for future assignments, we plan to complete all assignments at least 1 to 2 days before deadline. This can improve our time management skills and ensuring all assignments are submitted on time. We will also be having a small meeting for every assignment to assign roles and responsibilities. This can prevent any confusion or frustration within the group.<\/span><\/p>\n<p><img loading=\"lazy\" decoding=\"async\" class=\"alignnone size-medium wp-image-31\" src=\"https:\/\/blogs.ubc.ca\/richmondassetmap\/files\/2018\/03\/pic-300x225.jpg\" alt=\"\" width=\"300\" height=\"225\" srcset=\"https:\/\/blogs.ubc.ca\/richmondassetmap\/files\/2018\/03\/pic-300x225.jpg 300w, https:\/\/blogs.ubc.ca\/richmondassetmap\/files\/2018\/03\/pic-768x576.jpg 768w, https:\/\/blogs.ubc.ca\/richmondassetmap\/files\/2018\/03\/pic-1024x768.jpg 1024w\" sizes=\"auto, (max-width: 300px) 100vw, 300px\" \/> <img loading=\"lazy\" decoding=\"async\" class=\"alignnone size-medium wp-image-32\" src=\"https:\/\/blogs.ubc.ca\/richmondassetmap\/files\/2018\/03\/pic-2-300x223.png\" alt=\"\" width=\"300\" height=\"223\" srcset=\"https:\/\/blogs.ubc.ca\/richmondassetmap\/files\/2018\/03\/pic-2-300x223.png 300w, https:\/\/blogs.ubc.ca\/richmondassetmap\/files\/2018\/03\/pic-2.png 321w\" sizes=\"auto, (max-width: 300px) 100vw, 300px\" \/><\/p>\n","protected":false},"excerpt":{"rendered":"<p>\u201cComing together is a beginning; keeping together is progress; working together is success.\u201d &#8211; Henry Ford Blog #2: Project Proposal + Progress PDF of Project Proposal: Proposal &nbsp; Weekly Objectives and Achievements Week 3 (Jan 22 &#8211; 28) Objectives: Arrange a meeting with our community partners from Vancouver Coastal Health, Anne Swann and Rani Wangsawidjaya, &hellip; <\/p>\n<p class=\"link-more\"><a href=\"https:\/\/blogs.ubc.ca\/richmondassetmap\/2018\/03\/01\/blog-post-2\/\" class=\"more-link\">Continue reading<span class=\"screen-reader-text\"> &#8220;Blog Post #2&#8221;<\/span><\/a><\/p>\n","protected":false},"author":50438,"featured_media":0,"comment_status":"open","ping_status":"open","sticky":false,"template":"","format":"standard","meta":{"footnotes":""},"categories":[1],"tags":[],"class_list":["post-27","post","type-post","status-publish","format-standard","hentry","category-uncategorized"],"_links":{"self":[{"href":"https:\/\/blogs.ubc.ca\/richmondassetmap\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/posts\/27","targetHints":{"allow":["GET"]}}],"collection":[{"href":"https:\/\/blogs.ubc.ca\/richmondassetmap\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/posts"}],"about":[{"href":"https:\/\/blogs.ubc.ca\/richmondassetmap\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/types\/post"}],"author":[{"embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/blogs.ubc.ca\/richmondassetmap\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/users\/50438"}],"replies":[{"embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/blogs.ubc.ca\/richmondassetmap\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/comments?post=27"}],"version-history":[{"count":1,"href":"https:\/\/blogs.ubc.ca\/richmondassetmap\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/posts\/27\/revisions"}],"predecessor-version":[{"id":33,"href":"https:\/\/blogs.ubc.ca\/richmondassetmap\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/posts\/27\/revisions\/33"}],"wp:attachment":[{"href":"https:\/\/blogs.ubc.ca\/richmondassetmap\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/media?parent=27"}],"wp:term":[{"taxonomy":"category","embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/blogs.ubc.ca\/richmondassetmap\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/categories?post=27"},{"taxonomy":"post_tag","embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/blogs.ubc.ca\/richmondassetmap\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/tags?post=27"}],"curies":[{"name":"wp","href":"https:\/\/api.w.org\/{rel}","templated":true}]}}