Week 3 – Aragon’s “Paris Peasant”

I think the quote, “I find myself unable to place complete confidence in any notion I may have of the universe without first subjectifying that notion to an abstract examination” (8), perfectly summarizes this novel. Paris Peasant‘s narrator either thinks too much, believes he has to share each thought as he experiences them, or a combo of the above. What I’m trying to say is, I like good detail as much as any reader, but this was too much. If I was ready for Combray‘s narrator to stop talking after the first chapter, it took only a few pages for this narrator to run his course with me. Suffice to say, the modernist style is simply not for me.

This isn’t to say I disliked all aspects of this novel; Aragon demonstrates a gorgeous poetic sensibility through his surrealistic prose. A line that especially stuck out to me was, “you are a haunted house, and nothing at all would be achieved by sending a delegation of scientists with all their little bits of apparatus to observe the strange phenomena to which you play martyred host” (178-179). His narration, though seemingly never-ending, has a knack for including the most outrageous of metaphors and similes. He certainly is not afraid to break the traditional structures of fiction. Moreover, this is the first novel I’ve read that follows a narrator with no identifiable qualities; this is likely because Aragon wants his readers to see Paris through the eyes of a mundane observer, and not to get to know the observer himself. However, by the end, the reader has grown accustomed to the unique writing style. In this way, the writing itself is identifiable, but the narrator as an individual is not. Very interesting.

While the portraits of places (eg. Passage de l’Opera and parc Buttes-Chaumont) are extensive and compelling, I particularly identified with the narrator’s attentive observations of the people around him (eg. “the lecturer, after twisting, curling or waving his moustachios, sets off casually along an entirely new track, as he starts reminiscing about those lovely nights” (148); One can gather that Aragon himself places a lot of thought into the lives and characterisation of people, or simply creates ideas or narratives regarding the individuals in his midst at any given moment.

Another similarity to Proust’s Combray is the coming of age quality. Though Paris Peasant doesn’t follow the narrator from childhood to adulthood, nor does it mention anything specific regarding who the narrator is, there is an unmistakable feeling that time is running out throughout the prose. The narrator is observing the deconstruction of the world as he knows it, and there is a palpable fear there. As we grow older, our opinions and perspectives shift into broader understandings, if not entirely different ones. It’s scary watching the universe we built for ourselves in our youth turn into something unrecognisable; that is, until we gather our bearings. Take a few deep breaths. I like this aspect of Paris Peasant; what is new to us can still be appreciated, yet we’re entitled to any feelings that accompany this new viewpoint on life.

The final point I would like to make will be brief, as this is unfortunately common in older literature; the way the narrator talks about women is entirely objectifying (eg. “Instead of concerning yourself with the conduct of men, start watching women walk by. […] I don’t want to die without having first gone up to each one, touched her at least with my hand, felt her weaken, willed that this pressure shall be enough to conquer her resistance” (8). I read this as, ‘Hey! Instead of monitoring men’s behaviour or holding them accountable, let’s freely touch and objectify women! They are objects for my pleasure after all!” Yeah, definitely not my favourite part. The question I ask now is, can you name a single piece of older literature written by a man that passes the bechdel test? 🙂

Week 2 – Proust’s “Combray”

From the first paragraph of Proust’s Combray, the author’s intrinsic, attentive, and stunning control over language is evident. The manner in which he captures the disorientation of hovering listlessly in the place between sleep and awake–that long moment of disequilibrium as we return to ourselves following a dream (“it seemed to me that I myself was what the book was talking about: a church, a quartet, the rivalry between Francois I and Charles V” (3).)–is so vivid, it successfully pulls readers into the narrative right off the bat.

Proust’s work is one of my first forays into the world of modernist novels. I often enjoy writing that presents itself as long streams of consciousness, and while it was this style that initially hooked me in the opening paragraph, by the end of the first chapter, I was honestly hitting a wall and ready for him to stop talking. Nonetheless, there remains an achingly beautiful air of loneliness between the margins of Proust’s writing, as can be seen in the passage, “The rest of humanity seemed very remote compared with this woman I had left scarcely a few moments before; my cheek was still warm from her kiss, my body aching from the weight of hers. If, as sometimes happened, she had the features of a woman I had known in my life” (5). The narrator’s attachment to a woman from a dream leaves room for the reader to infer that this is a man living a life of solitude, yearning for touch of any sort.

Later, the narrator’s relationship with his parents respectively render this loneliness emanating from early paragraphs much clearer. If I were to attempt to psychoanalyse the protagonist, I would say his serious attachment to his mother (eg. his focus on receiving his bedtime kiss; “I would […] choose with my eyes the place on her cheek that I would kiss, prepare my thoughts so as to be able […] to devote the whole of the minute Mama would grant me to feeling her cheek against my lips” (27)), coupled with his fear of his father (“terrified as I saw the gleam from my father’s candle already rising up the wall” (36)), paint a picture of a small child desperate for maternal affection (or any affection really), yet afraid to speak to his needs due to having been ridiculed and shut down in the past. It made me very sad for the protagonist, and his unfulfilled longing for connection.

The overall theme, or rather feeling, I think Proust wanted readers to take from this narrative, is that of growing into adulthood, and the difficulties that come with letting go of childhood and learning to be alone with yourself. I don’t believe that loneliness is always tied to love, but I think it often is. And it is both this love and this loneliness that emerges in the narrator’s recall of his aunt Leonie upon tasting the madeleine in his tea. Sometimes a taste, a sight, a scent, can bring us back to the person we were before adulthood and its expectations/burdens shackled us to the present. In this regard, my question for you is; to what degree do our early senses and memories determine who we’ll one day become?

Intro :)

Hello, friends! My name is Neko Smart and I am a second year Arts student. I grew up in Victoria, B.C., and am now residing in Vancouver with my cat, Gremlin, an adorable yet thoroughly messy roommate. I am an avid reader and writer; in high school, I started a slam poetry team on a whim. Since then, I’ve been sucked into the world of spoken word poetry, which has taken me to various cities, even to the States once, to compete or perform. I’m also a big music lover, and rely heavily on my guitar and ukulele to decompress between classes and bouts of studying.

I decided to take this course because I had room in my schedule and it looked interesting. Also, the literature credits don’t hurt at all. I grew up with my French stepmother as an active presence in my life and development, so she had myself and my siblings speaking the language from a young age. I was in the French immersion program for all of my schooling, which helped me maintain my French over the years. I’m looking forward to reading literature by authors of various romance languages. Because the works we’re studying have been translated into English, I’m curious to see whether the nuances of the unique languages are evident despite this. I am entering this course with an open mind, ready to learn whatever comes my way.

The course structure definitely caught me off guard. However, I actually really like the concept of contract grades. I think it’s good skill building to anticipate your capacity throughout the semester and hold yourself to that capacity/expectation. Everyone so far seems lovely and keen, and I’m hoping we’re able to get to know one another face to face at some point this semester. 🙂