During analysis of data for the Formal report, I always have a concern that I am on a right track and the data that I have collected is reliable. After reading other student’s formal report, I understand how to re-create and re-arrange data. I found out that data analysis is the process of distilling large quantities of information. It seems that data analysis such as survey questions process is a core part of formal research report. Research direction and its result can be varied depending on how a researcher translates information. In addition, choosing the right thesis was difficult for me because I had so much information I wanted to share and talk about and I did not know how to pick just one and go with that. Organizing the material for my paper to support my thesis was not too difficult since I had plenty of information and material. I found that importance of translation of data to provide clarity and enhance stakeholder understandings of issues and events. To enable these things, a researcher needs to identify significant issues or experiences, identify major hallmarks of those issues and experiences, and make connections between similarities and differences among the data. Through the process of data analysis, data can be transformed into valuable and readable information. During data analysis process, I found an interesting thing. All the data that I collected have connections since they are tied with one topic. The exercises of brainstorming, drafting, revising and peer review were a huge help. I was able to see what other people thought of my work and that they could give me good feedback to improve my work. Finally, I realized that the formal report is a process through data gathering, analysis, arrangement, and reporting that should consider various readers’ thoughts, status, experiences, and perspectives. For a significant research paper, it is important not to forget the purpose and direction of the research.
Unit Two Reflection Blog
Reflect on the process of creating a LinkedIn profile.
From this unit, I learned deeply about the LinkedIn that how we can use to finding a job, how LinkedIn helps to develop our resume and how to make more connection with people. I also learned that how the LinkedIn profiles should look like. Moreover, I also learned the objectives, features and plans of the LinkedIn. I also learned more about how to use the LinkedIn profile. In addition, how I can post a job, how I can send a massage to corporations.
First, I would organize my profile by adding current information and being true to myself. The profile needs to be authentic and not fake. Then I would keep active by posting regularly, as well as taking advantages of the communities that LinkedIn has to offer. There are several groups in different areas that I could join to make connections and promote their business. I would keep all of my connections current by keeping in touch and not forgetting about them.
Once there I looked at to see what made others profiles successful. As the title states, it is the profile summaries. Each one had a summary describing either how much the love their job, personality traits and motivation, specific candidates for their company, and explains what the candidates can expect and gain from the company
Finally, first impressions are everything, and you always see someone’s picture on LinkedIn before you see their profile, if their picture is not appealing or appeasing in any way than you are less like to continue looking at them as a contact or contender. Having a well taken, Picture can definitely help to progress your personal brand and build relationships. I found, this can hugely beneficial to a company or a person trying to develop their personal brand.
Reflect on the process of brainstorming
Since this is the first time I am responding to an issue like this, it is true that I struggled with structure/organization in this genre. However, my proposal significantly show my pathos/passion toward the issue.
Reflection on Peer Review Process
The peer review session helps me to pick the right diction, adjust my tone in the letter and choosing the most convincing evidences to present my case. In a timed-writing manner, I would struggle with my time management and ideas for each assignment since I will not have the chance to consult others’ ideas before writing.
Email to my writing groups
To: joelgpenner@gmail.com
From: jk82017@gmail.com
Subject: ENGL301 Writing Partner
Dear Joel Penner,
My name is Seungjae cheon and Than you for inviting me to your writing team.
I came across your application to join a professional writing team through your blog post.
I have reviewed your application and I believe your leadership skills and backgrounds would
be invaluable asset to our team.
Thus, I would like to join to your professional writing team. Attached is my application letter.
If you have any further questions or learn more about me, please email me at Jk82017@gmail.com or take a my blog at https://blogs.ubc.ca/seungjaecheon301/
Sincercly,
Seungjae Cheon
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To: Kakabbs@ghotmail.com
From: Jk82017@gmail.com
Subject: ENGL301 Writing Partner
Dear Abby wang
My name is Seungjae cheon and Than you for inviting me to your writing team.
I came across your application to join a professional writing team through your blog post.
I have reviewed your application and I believe your planning skills and organized skills will
be invaluable asset to our team.
Thus, I would like to join to your professional writing team. Attached is my application letter.
If you have any further questions or learn more about me, please email me at Jk82017@gmail.com or take a my blog at https://blogs.ubc.ca/seungjaecheon301/
Sincerely,
Seungjae Cheon
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To: kcottrell@alumni.ubc.ca
From: Jk82017@gmail.com
Dear Kathy Cottrell,
Subject: ENGL301 Writing Partner
Dear Seung Jae Cheon,
My name is Seungjae cheon and Than you for inviting me to your writing team.
I came across your application to join a professional writing team through your blog post.
I have reviewed your application and I believe that studying and taking care of children must be very challenging and I am sure as team members, we can work together to come up with great reslults and your experiences will be invaluable asset to our team.
Thus, I would like to join to your professional writing team. Attached is my application letter.
If you have any further questions or learn more about me, please email me at Jk82017@gmail.com or take a my blog at https://blogs.ubc.ca/seungjaecheon301/
Sincerely
Seungjae Cheon
301 – Formal proposal memo
MEMORANDUM
To: Dr. Erika Paterson, English 301 Instructor
From: Seunjae Chun 301 Student
Date: February 5, 2018
Subject: ENGL 301 Research Proposal for Formal Report
The international students experience extreme difficulties when they try to get a job in Canada. However, there is no information center to help the international students to get a job in UBC.
My proposal will Focus on the following in detail:
• information about job finding for UBC international students
• Suggestions to UBC for international student job center
• Any great sources and examples from other universities
• An explanation of my qualifications
Thank you and please reach me for many further questions.
301- Formal proposal
To: Dr. Erika Paterson
From: Seungjae Cheon
Date: February 5, 2018
Subject: Proposal for job information center for international student in UBC campus
Introduction
The international students experience extreme difficulties when they try to get a job in Canada. However, there is no information center to help the international students to get a job in UBC.
Statement of Problems UBC tries to attract more international students than before as a business, they tend not to care their students after graduation. By making the job information center for the international students that informs the students which company hires the international students who can speak two languages or hires the international students without discrimination related to the working visa, the international students would be more competitive and it would be great for UBC as well.
Problems
Many international students are studying in UBC and many of them want to get a job in Canada. However, it is not easy for ESL students to get a job with low quality English skill. Moreover, due to the financial crisis, the regulation of hiring ESL students became very strict compared to before.
Proposed solution
If new job information center build, not only international students, also UBC will get advantages. There are several reasons that why UBC also get advantages. First, if new job information center helps to get job for international students, students that are more international will be interested in getting into UBC. Most of international students want to get a job in the Canada that UBC can help their opportunities. The second reason for why UBC has to make new job information center is that UBC could help more international students about more information than now.
Scope
In order to determine the feasibility of Job center for international student, I plan to examine:
- How to provide job information for international students?
- How UBC will hire specific advisors to give the information to international students?
- Is there possibilities to find the company where they want to hire bilingual or trilingual students?
- Is it possible to train students until they have ability to compete with Canadian students?
- How will UBC find the companies that supports the international students as the visa sponsor?
Method
To answer this question, I plan to meet international student’s communities and conduct surveys with them. I will make sure these surveys are completed by a range of big number of the population with more than five different nationalities and different locations and different years. I will also conduct interviews with job centers in UBC for gather how to find companies that can help international students and useful websites.
My Qualification
As an international students and graduating next year, I have had many difficult times to find jobs and found out that there are not enough information for international students. I am a member of Korean UBC student association group, I can distribute my survey to my members, and our group has good relationships with Chinese’s association and Japanese’s association so I can find ways to distribute my surveys.
Conclusion
The lack of international students’ job information center in UBC has caused a big trouble for international students. Students are having a hard time to find a job after they graduate and only way they can do is just go back to their origin country even though they want to work in the Canada. In order to solve this problem, UBC has to provide additional job information that is useful and appropriate for student with several specific advisers to give students advice when they have problems.
301-SeungjaeCheon Application Letter
310 Seungjaecheon Application Letter
January 21st, 2018
English 301 Students
University of British Columbia
Vancouver, BC
Dear English 301 classmates.
I am happy to apply to become part of a writing team and we will be helping and reviewing our writing skills.
First, I have outstanding skills in writing. In particular, I know well how to gather people’s attention and what kind of writing style young people love. These are significant elements in recent times: many people dislike reading tedious magazines or newspapers.
Second, I have strong passion in writing. In fact, my interest in writing went back to my childhood. When I was little, my homeroom teachers always emphasized the importance of reading and writing. At that time, however, I was too young to know the real value of them so I just read any books as fast as I can. Then one day I got a homework writing a letter to the main character of my book. At that moment, I realized that my way of reading is not helpful at all. That is why I started reading books much more carefully and writing with all my efforts.
Third, I have various resources for writing. In my school days, I learned some musical instruments: piano, cello, and flute. I also learned Calligraphy for peace of my mind. I was a member of Korean Youth Association, so I had many chances to do volunteer works. In addition, I love traveling around anywhere, so I can experience new things continuously and learn different point of views. All these things make my writing appealing.
I am prepared for contributing good efforts to an English 301 team. If you wish to form a group with me, please feel free to reach out at jk82017@gmail.com
I think this is a great opportunity for me to be participated in ENG 301, English Technical Writing Course. I believe that this course will serve as stepping stone as well as a corner stone for my future career building process. I am certain that a course in technical writing could help me become very good at writing any kind of business and technical documents, and create a much more effective work environment. With better technical documents, things would be able to be communicated more quickly, efficiently, and productively to people like managers, co-workers, employers, customers, friends and relatives as well. However, I understand that this task is not as easy as I said above, but in this regard I am determined and hopeful because this course definitely going to help me achieve the goal.
I am sure that I know very little about the structure of a technical writing and areas where it can be implemented effectively. After skimming the all the chapters, I figured out that technical writing in today’s working society is the most. I believe technical writing plays an active role in the daily activities of a corporation. Technical writing is a guideline and principle to simplify scientific and technical information in a way that is clear and easy to understand. All scientific and technological information conveyed should be helpful to the reader. Because a technical writing needs to be accurate, clear, complete, concrete, organized and visually effective, this would be greatly important in scientific, mechanical and all kind of business activities in today’s world.