Task 7: Mode-bending

Re-designed Task 1: What’s in your bag? in audio form:

 

Task 7 Reflection (separated into parts due to file size upload constraints):

Part 1:

 

Part 2:

 

Part 3:

 

Part 4:

 

Part 5:

 

Part 6:

 

References

ASMR University. (n.d.). What is ASMR? https://asmruniversity.com/about-asmr/what-is-asmr/

Dobson, T., & Willinsky, J. (2009). Digital literacy. In D. R. Olson & N. Torrance (Eds.), The Cambridge handbook of literacy (pp. 286-312). Cambridge University Press.

The New London Group. (1996). A pedagogy of multiliteracies: Designing social futures. Harvard Educational Review 66(1), 60-92.

Task 6: An emoji story

Emoji story:

First of all, I found this task very challenging and I will be amazed if anyone is able to guess what show and episode my emoji story depicts. My emoji story represents the most recent episode of a show I’m watching, and it was not chosen based on the ease of visualization. I am eager to hear your guesses!

This task was a lot harder than I expected and I ended up focusing on key ideas only, rather than trying to capture details, which I found couldn’t be ‘correctly conveyed’ with a limited set of emojis. The show I am watching has an immense amount of details – it involves live-action scenes, backgrounds, established characters, and I often couldn’t find the ‘right’ emoji to capture all of these details. We are limited by those who create emojis and while in my day-to-day usage I normally find the range of emojis to be quite broad, for this task there were certain details such as a light-skinned character with brown or red hair, that were not included in the emoji keyboard.

Another challenge was related to the fact that each emoji can have several meanings. I kept flip flopping between using emojis to convey their literal meaning versus their symbolic meaning. This is consistent with Bolter’s (2001) argument around each element in picture writing meaning too much than too little and having different meanings. This makes it challenging for any ‘reader’ or ‘viewer’ of my emoji story to understand what is being conveyed. An emoji’s meaning is also dependent on the creator and viewer’s context and culture – for example, the diamond ring emoji, which is meant to symbolize a wedding that took place in the show, may not convey the same meaning for a different viewer.

I used my iPhone’s Notes application to capture my emoji story and in doing so, it seems like text is still in control, despite not using any text in my story. Bolter (2001) discusses the tension between textual and visual forms of communication and while this entire task is made up of graphics (emojis in this case), they are used in a textual way. The emojis are organized as if in sentences and I used spaces between the lines of emojis, as if I was organizing paragraphs to separate ideas.

Prior to this task, I have never used emojis alone to tell a story; they have only been used as ‘decorative pieces’ to supplement text. It is interesting to think that emojis alone or text alone are both open to several interpretations – emojis alone can carry different meanings and text alone requires a reader to make several inferences or visualizations. However, when put and used together, they can help provide more contextualisation, resulting in less interpretation.

If visual forms of communications, including emojis, can help to enhance communication, it is surprising to me that emojis haven’t made their way into ‘professional’ or ‘business’ writing. When writing emails, it seems taboo to include emojis as they are deemed as ‘unprofessional’ but why is this, if they can enhance our communication?

Reference

Bolter, J. D. (2001). Writing space: Computers, hypertext, and the remediation of print (2nd ed). Lawrence Erlbaum Associates.

Task 5: Twine task – Student Decisions

Compressed HTML file (zip file) of my Twine: ETEC 523 Task 5 Student Decisions.html

This was my first time using Twine and as I was playing the game, I thought this type of interactive text could be very useful for breaking down complex topics. In particular, for topics that involve decision trees or different ‘pathways’, a hypertext could help students understand the connections between ideas, better than if presented in a linear way. I also thought this type of non-linear text could be useful for students who are navigating decisions; a Twine could help them make their decisions through a series of choices.

I intended to create the latter concept when creating my Twine, but it evolved into something a little different…

I envisioned a student coming to office hours to discuss their career, which is a common topic of choice for my students. As a starting point however, it felt too linear and unnatural to stick with one ‘storyline’ so I added a choice on the first screen, which then opened up the different pathways and a non-linear web of storylines.

I found working in a web to be a more natural way to capture how our thoughts work, and how conversations flow. Similar to what Bolter (2001) stated, I found myself “being overwhelmed with ideas as I [wrote]” (p. 34), and my ideas didn’t always flow in a linear way. It was helpful to capture ideas within a web rather than having to form them linearly. My hypertext grew exponentially, as each time a choice was offered, a new pathway and web would form. This seems similar to how conversations flow, as conversations often branch off of what is said, with one idea leading to another, but not necessarily in a linear way. A conversation may eventually loop back to earlier topics, but it may not.

This experience was very different compared to writing a story using a word processor, which requires that I order things from start to finish (i.e. top to bottom, or left to right). As Bolter (2001) discusses, this innately creates a hierarchical organization. A hypertext allows for non-linear flow of thoughts.

I am eager to try using Twine for a topic that involves decision trees and seeing how my students navigate through the topic. I think it may be a very effective tool to break down complex tasks.

Reference

Bolter, J. D. (2001). Writing space: Computers, hypertext, and the remediation of print (2nd ed). Lawrence Erlbaum Associates.

Task 4: Manual Scripts and Potato Printing

Do you normally write by hand or type? Did you find this task difficult or easy? Explain.

I normally type, so I found this task more challenging than expected.

Firstly, it was difficult to find the appropriate writing technology for this task. I don’t normally keep any paper on my desk, so I had to go searching for this technology and eventually found an old notebook to write in.

After only a few lines of writing, my hand started to cramp up. My muscles are not used to writing by hand and I was shocked at how ‘out of shape’ these muscles were. My students still often write in-person, paper-based exams and I often see them shaking out their hands in discomfort. I can better understand that several of them may not be used to writing by hand, but then are asked to do so on an exam, forcing them to use muscles they are not used to.

The task was to write a reflection of approximately 500 words. I quickly realized how reliant I am on electronic word count tools, and I realized that I have no idea how much writing would constitute 500 words. I ended up counting the number of words in a row and multiplied that by the number of rows to get an approximation.

I am also left-handed and I quickly remembered how annoying coils in a notebook are as they impede my hand placement. Writing near the bottom of the notebook was also difficult as my hand had to hover above the notebook – you may notice that my writing gets a little messier at the bottom of each page.

What did you do when you made a mistake or wanted to change your writing? How did you edit your work? Did your choice of media play a part in how you edited your work?

I made seven mistakes during my hand-written reflection and since I was using a pen, I simply crossed out the unwanted words. I opted not to use white out, mostly because I don’t know if I have any. Another option would have been to start over completely, but given that my hand written work is not being presented formally, it was not worth the effort to edit my work in this way.

My choice of media – pen and paper, limited my options to edit my work. Pen is more permanent than pencil and cannot simply be erased. I opted for pen as I find it clearer to read.

I often mark-up documents using my iPad and Apple Pencil, which merges hand-writing with digital affordances. With these two technologies, I can write ‘by hand’, but am given many more opportunities to edit my work, including erasing and re-arranging text.

What do you feel is the most significant difference between writing by hand and using mechanized forms of writing? Which do you prefer and why?

Writing by hand seems much more effortful, both physically and from a time perspective. It took me approximately 35 minutes to hand-write my reflection (keep in mind that this includes the time to think of what to write as I was writing), but it took me less than 10 minutes to type. The accelerated rate at which typing allows us to record thoughts and convey information seems parallel to the accelerated rates that the printing press enabled as examined by Innis (2007). As typing is more efficient than writing by hand, I wonder if this results in us writing more compared to if we were to hand-write everything.

From a physical perspective, it is more effortful to write by hand and the amount of effort can be influenced by the writing device (e.g. stylus vs. pencil vs. ballpoint pen vs. rollerball pen). The physical effort needed to write by hand can result in variations in the size, shape and overall legibility of our writing (Bolter, 2001). This is not the case with mechanized forms of writing, which has the ability to produce consistent text, in consistent sizes and fonts.

A significant advantage of mechanized (and digitized) forms of writing includes the ability to edit one’s work more easily. I wonder if this causes us to be more critical of our writing and whether we spend more time editing, simply because it’s easier to do.

For work and school-related tasks, I prefer typing as it is much more efficient compared to writing by hand. The formatting and editing abilities are also valuable. However, I find writing by hand more relaxing. I feel more grounded and at peace when writing by hand, perhaps because it is slower so it feels calmer, or perhaps because I associate typing with work and school.

Do any of my peer used mechanized forms of writing for personal hobbies (e.g. diarizing or story writing)? Between typing and writing by hand, which do you find more relaxing and why?

References

Bolter, J. D. (2001). Writing space: Computers, hypertext, and the remediation of print (2nd ed). Lawrence Erlbaum Associates.

Innis, H. (2007). Empire and communications. Dundurn Press.

Linking Assignment

Link #1: This is my response to Steph Takeda’s Task 3:

Hi Steph,

It sounds like we had similar experiences when using a speech-to-text tool to capture our stories! Similar to your experience, the very first thing I noticed was how unappealing the block of text was to re-read. The lack of paragraphs and errors in punctuation negatively affected my experience re-reading my story in written form. What speech-to-text tool did you use to capture your story? I used the dictation feature on my iPhone and it does have the ability to separate text into new paragraphs if you say “new paragraph”, but this obviously wouldn’t be included in an authentic oral story.

I really appreciate the differences you highlight between oral storytelling and written storytelling – most are differences I hadn’t thought of. The consistency of oral stories is a great one and reminds me of the game ‘Telephone’ that I used to play as a child and how the word / sentence was never the same when it got to the last person in the game. You raise an excellent point that there is flexibility with oral storytelling where the storyteller has the ability to adapt parts of the story based on the audience.

You mention another difference that written story telling requires a technology, whereas oral story telling does not. What about oral story telling through phone calls or through audiobooks – would you consider story telling through these mediums oral storytelling?

Shannon

Link #2: This is my response to Duncan’s Task 3

Duncan,

It was a mistake to read your post around lunchtime! I am now craving a big bowl of ramen…maybe not quite as big as your friend Anna’s bowl though…

I like your candid storytelling approach; it certainly made me chuckle a few times. My favourite typo was the misinterpretation of Ramen as “Roman men”.

Similar to you, I also used the Apple dictation feature and we had several similarities in our analysis, mostly around the poor punctuation, haphazard comma placement and misplacement of periods mid-sentence.

While you call your text a result of your meandering, there is a charm when reading the collection of run-on sentences that describe the ramen that you have eaten. I can feel the joy of you reminiscing about the delicious and different bowls of ramen you have experienced. I wonder whether this ‘charm’ may be lost if your story was presented in written form, resulting in a more structured and rules-based body of text.

Finally, can you please clarify the best ramen you have had in Vancouver? It seems like Ramen Domo was a frontrunner (is this Ramen Danbo??), but then you also mention Gill para Ramen (is this Gyo Para Ramen??).

Shannon

Link #3: This my response to Lachelle’s Task 4:

Hi Lachelle,

The first thing I noticed (even before reading your reflection) was that I used a lined notebook for this task, whereas you used a blank piece of paper. My response is boring and structured as I wrote in neat, straight lines, left to right, and top to bottom. While I could have added illustrations or ignored the light-coloured lines and wrote diagonally, I didn’t even consider this, allowing the type of paper to impact the structure of my words. It’s also kind of funny to think about the entire paper industry that has emerged…offering blank paper, lined paper, graphing paper, dot paper, columnar paper, etc. There is some practicality behind these options but it also seems a bit unnecessary. If I wanted to sketch something, I could easily do this in my lined notebook, but I would probably opt to buy use a blank-paper notebook instead…consumerism in action!

You mention writing non-linearly and this relates to Task 5 (Twine task) that I just completed. It felt liberating to add thoughts as they came, not in any kind of hierarchical order or structured way. Your blank piece of paper for journaling allows for jotting down thoughts in this non-linear way, as they pop into our minds. You mention that you like to contain thoughts in particular shapes; why is this? And which comes first, the shape outline or the text?

You raise two really interesting points about literacy (in your hand-written journal entry itself) and the human element associated with non-mechanized writing.

It’s funny to think of those birds – illiterate when it comes to human’s English language. This doesn’t mean they can’t communicate, but they can’t in the way that we can. This also makes me ponder about humans who are illiterate in certain environments (e.g. when a human travels to a foreign country, where all signs and oral language are in a different language). Signage depicting rules still apply to them, despite being illiterate in that particular language! Tools such as Google translate have been developed and can help reduce barriers in these types of situations.

Your point about us all having a ‘personalized font’ is very insightful and reminds me of when I mark my students’ hand-written responses. I often start to learn whose response is whose, based on their hand-writing and without looking at their name on the first page. I wonder if/when the concept of signatures will become obsolete, particularly as electronic signatures, which sometimes are just names typed in a standard cursive font, are accepted. Without signatures, do we lose a personal identifier or perhaps it was not a strong personal identifier to begin with. What do you think?

Link #4: This is my response to Jennie’s Task 6:

Hi Jennie,

I was so eager to try and guess what show you’re depicting with your emoji story, but I’m stumped.

Does it have something to do with demons, drama, heartbreak, the police, and a father loving his son, despite his demons?? Am I on track at all?

Based on your first thought, it sounds like we both faced the challenge of trying to convey a complex show, using a limited set of emojis. Were there any imageries that you felt could not be captured with the emojis currently available? And if so, does this provide any insight into the creators of emojis? In my case, I felt limited by the lack of certain characteristics that are not currently available such as an emoji of a light-skinned character with brown or red hair. This detail would not capture the personality or rich character from the show I was trying to depict, but it would at least help to communicate which character I was trying to showcase.

Similar to you, I also used my iPhone’s Notes application to craft my emoji story and it’s interesting to see that we both split up our string of emojis into separate lines. To me, this made it feel like text is still in control, despite not using any text in the story. Despite no text being used, my emojis were organized as if in sentences and I used spaces between the lines of emojis, as if I was organizing paragraphs to separate ideas. What made you organize your emojis in lines and when were you prompted to start a new line?

Can you elaborate on some of the ‘important losses’ that you think are being lost in the shift to visual and multimodal texts?

Link #5: This is my response to Carlo DeFazio’s Task 7:

Hi Carlo,

Interestingly, we approached this task in a similar way by conveying our objects by the recognizable sounds they make (or the environmental sounds in which our objects are found). This may be partially due to Ernesto advising us to avoid simply describing the objects in our bag, but it also highlights that we both agree there are sounds that we have learned to associate with certain objects / environments. We also both refer to ASMR! It sounds like for both of us, it took longer to prepare this activity in audio form compared to preparing it in written (text) form. I mentioned that one reason for this was because I was inclined to write a script before recording my audio reflection, essentially doing double the work (written + audio form). Was this the case for you as well? You spoke so clearly, without um’s and ah’s so it’s not obvious to me whether you were reading off a script or not. I’m also curious what technology you used to record and edit your audio clip? One difference between our two tasks was your addition of background music. I didn’t think of this (I wish I had!) and I think it can impact the tone of your entire audio clip. For example, you chose an upbeat song, but had you chosen suspenseful music or a sad song, it would have completely changed the feel of your task. This also makes me think of movies / tv shows and how sound effects and the soundtrack can immensely impact the overall experience.

Thanks for your redesigned Task 1, I enjoyed listening!

Link #6: This is my response to Robyn Bernsen’s Task 8:

Hi Robyn,

Before diving into your Task 8, I went back to your Task 1 to get to know you via ‘what’s in your bag’. I’m so glad that I did, because it turns out we both teach at BCIT! I teach in the School of Business, specifically in the Financial Management program. Are you on campus often or do you teach remotely?

Similar to you, I found this task more challenging than anticipated and it felt ‘wrong’ to cut pieces and deprive a future listener of the diversity of music from our planet. I ended up taking a purely geographical approach, mapping out where the pieces and artists originated, and my final 10 pieces represent a collection of geographically diverse pieces. In doing so, I only kept a single piece originating from Germany (I cut all of Bach’s pieces (ah!) and kept one of Beethoven’s pieces and similarly, I only kept a single piece originating from the United States.

You pose whether this task would be easier or harder if the Golden Record was created in 2024 and I think it would be even harder today. The sheer volume of music pieces available today would make it more difficult and I think it’s also important to consider that music pieces nowadays have been ‘published’ in different ways. There are music pieces by well-known artists who have formally ‘published’ their work via records and labels, but there are also a lot of musical pieces shared by people on platforms such as YouTube that we should consider as well. I wonder if different forms of audio pieces such as podcasts or audiobooks should also be considered…

Considering the theme of diversity that you discuss, I wonder how age and stage of life impacts one’s perception. For example, a toddler’s most ‘meaningful’ 10 pieces may be very different from an adult’s most ‘meaningful’ 10 pieces. Perhaps in choosing 27 songs that represent Earth, we not only have to consider the diversity of the pieces themselves, but also ensure a diverse group of individuals are involved in curating the pieces to begin with.