Prompt:

Describe or narrate a scenario about a piece of clothing found a few years into a future in which “progress” has continued. Your description should address issues related to communication and elicit feelings of contentment.

Scenario:

Suzette stands in front of her closet looking at her collection of clothes. The articles of clothing look like ordinary pieces that resemble pieces that exists today; however, each piece is filled with possibility. Technological advances have transformed the clothing industry, and each piece of clothing now has the ability to transport the wearer into a virtual world, recreating the environment, time, and surroundings of when that piece of clothing was first worn.

In this future, regrets, life-altering decisions, and questions such as ‘what-if’ or ‘if only’ are no longer hypotheticals. They can be revisited and re-experienced, providing a unique opportunity for re-living, re-direction and closure.

Suzette reflects upon her life and one regrettable moment that has haunted her is not standing up for her friend who was bullied in the second grade. Determined to face this regret, she chooses a summer dress that she first wore on the first day of second grade. As she ties the bow at the back of her dress, she looks up to find herself standing in the middle of her second-grade classroom. She is there, right in the middle of the group of children, but this time, with her adult mind in her younger self’s body, she feels a newfound courage. She steps forward to speak up and re-write the moment that has caused her so much regret for years.

Reflection:

Part of being human as we know it today is living in the present moment, cherishing memories, experiencing moments that we sometimes wish we could take back or change, making decisions that have life-long impacts, and wondering ‘what-if’. With these human aspects come mindsets and emotions that we have become accustomed to – acceptance, happiness, sadness, anger and regret. Dunne and Raby (2013) pessimistically state that “many of the challenges we face today are unfixable and that the only way to overcome them is by changing our values, beliefs, attitudes, and behaviour” (p. 2). Suzette’s closet filled with ‘time travelling, do-over’ clothes opens a world in which we may re-visit or alter moments. If everyone got a do-over on some regrettable moments in their lives, would the world be a better place? Could we change the trajectory of the world, if every person engaged in a small change of one moment? If do-overs were possible, would life, moments, and memories have different meanings and mean less to us?

Dunne and Raby (2013) differentiate between probable futures, plausible futures, possible futures, and preferable futures. While it is arguably not possible to engage in ‘real’ time travel (at least not today!), virtual time travel is in our probable futures with virtual reality technologies becoming more accessible. It will be interesting to observe how the risk-free experimentation that is possible in virtual realities impacts decisions and emotions, blurring the lines of what can be experienced in reality versus fantasy.

Reference

Dunne, A., & Raby, F. (2013). Speculative everything: Design, fiction, and social dreaming. The MIT Press.

Prompt: Podium winners of the all-around gymnastics competition in upcoming Paris 2024 Olympics

Prompt: Border collie swimming

With the upcoming Paris 2024 Olympics and being a long-time follower and fan of the U.S. Women’s Artistic Gymnastics team, my first prompt was: Podium winners of the all-around gymnastics competition in the upcoming Paris 2024 Olympics.

I assumed that biases and stereotypes would be apparent in the generated image, but I was hopeful that I may be proved wrong. I hoped that the image would contain three gymnasts, including Simone Biles, an African American gymnast who is heavily favoured to win the gold medal in this competition (Macmillan, 2024). Given that Simone has been dominant in her sport for nearly a decade (this will be her third Olympic games) (Simone Biles, 2024), I was hopeful that images of Simone would have been included in Craiyon’s training data and included in the generated image.

The generated image includes four, lighter-skinned gymnasts, none of whom are clearly identifiable and none of whom are Simone Biles. This indicated Craiyon’s lack of predictive ability, lack of associative ability, and stereotypical representations in its training data.

Unlike ChatGPT, which was able to predict winners (and good predictions in my opinion), the generated image did not indicate a clear prediction of the winners, as prompted. As a test to see if pictures of Simone Biles were included in Craiyon’s training data, I entered a second prompt including just her name. Several images of Simone Biles appeared, indicating that pictures of her were included in Craiyon’s training data. Upon reflection of my prompt, it did not explicitly include Simone’s name, but it included several words associated with Simone Biles – the words gymnastics, Olympics, and winner. However, Craiyon’s output was solely based on the words used, and not based on unwritten associations or inferences. The program cannot generate something that isn’t prompted. This also made me wonder how images are tagged and how tagging may be based on distinguishable people and objects in images, versus the news, events, or points in time that images may be associated with.

The generated image includes four-lighter skinned gymnasts, who also appear slender and long-limbed. This highlights stereotypical representations in Craiyon’s training data as the sport has historically been dominated by lighter-skinned gymnasts with slender body types being preferred. This highlights the first layer of bad algorithms as described by O’Neil (2017), which encompasses unintentional problems that reflect cultural biases. The image of lighter-skinned and slender gymnasts perpetuates stereotypes of who can be successful in the sport of gymnastics and the body type that gymnasts ‘should’ have. Note that in my prompt, I did not specify that I wanted an image of women’s gymnastics, and yet only women appeared in the generated image. This also highlights the stereotype of women doing gymnastics more than men, further perpetuating the stereotype and reflects unbalanced training data.

Craiyon was also ineffective at generating realistic images of people, as the gymnasts’ faces and limbs are…far from realistic. It performed poorer than expected in this regard and seems to be a result of cutting and pasting different images together.

Other generated images of this prompt included the Olympic rings and the Eiffel tower, but it seems as though my prompt was too complex for Craiyon as it generated pictures of either gymnasts or Paris or Olympic icons, but not all three together. This highlighted a lack of understanding or a lack of training data with clear associations between Paris and gymnastics.

My second prompt was : Border collie swimming.

It is evident that Craiyon’s training data included dogs and different breeds (border collies being one of them) as Craiyon successfully returned an image of a border collie. Similar to the stereotypes identified in my first prompt, the returned image of the border collie depicts a ‘perfect’ border collie with black/brown fur and symmetrical white markings. This could lead to skewed representations of dogs in the world, particularly when it comes to people picking their dogs that match these ‘picture perfect’ representations. Dogs with unsymmetrical markings or unusual colouration may be seen as less desirable.

As my second prompt was less complex, Craiyon was able to understand the association between the words in my prompt, and generated an image of a border collie swimming. Upon closer look however, the dog’s right leg is raised near its head, as if doing a ‘front crawl’ stroke, which is a swimming stroke performed by humans. This indicates that Craiyon’s training data likely included more humans swimming compared to dogs swimming. The image humanifies a swimming dog and doesn’t accurately capture the ‘doggy paddle’, which as far as I know, is the only stroke they know!

On first glance at the visualization, I see that two
tracks (boxed in green) appear at the outer edge of the visualization: Track 22 Panpipes (Solomon Islands) and Track 27 String Quartet No. 13 in B flat. Track 22 was only selected by one individual as indicated by one link and Track 27 was selected by two individuals, as indicated by two links. At this time, it is not apparent to me why these tracks were selected so few times.

Switching to the metrics section (using the icon that looks like a calculator at the top right of the screen) the data was presented in a table format, which I found easier to interpret compared to the graph.

This view allowed me to count the number of nodes representing students (23) and the number of nodes representing pieces of music (27) and by sheer inclusion of each piece of music as a node, this indicates that each piece of music was chosen at least once. Next, by filtering by ‘Degree’, I discovered the two tracks (boxed in blue) that are chosen most frequently and that have the highest degree of connectivity: Track 7 Johnny B. Goode and Track 14 Melancholy Blues. Based on Task 8, I recall that these two pieces are by American artists, indicating to me their popularity in the task perhaps based on recognition – maybe our class recognized these two pieces or based on geographical relevance – given that our school is based in North America, perhaps we are more likely (consciously or not) to ensure that North American musical pieces are represented in the Golden Record.

Next, I analyzed each group’s graph and found myself in Group #4, the smallest group consisting of only two students, myself and Brie.

I see that we have 5 tracks in common, which seems high considering we are a group of 2. From the visualization itself, I do not understand the rationale behind our choices. I based my choices based on geographical diversity and perhaps Brie may have taken a similar approach given the overlap of 5 tracks, but this inference is made using pre-existing knowledge of my curation process and is just a guess. There is no other demographic data for the nodes (e.g. location of students or location where pieces originated, ethnicity, age, etc.) that may help to provide insight on the reasons behind the choices.

After looking at Group #4 (the group where I was placed), I wondered how many links other groups had for each track.

Group 1 consists of 5 students, but there was not a single track chosen by all 5 students; the highest degree of connection was 4 links.

Group 2 consists of 5 students and had a single (1) track chosen by all 5 students: Track 6: El Cascabel. Do each of these 5 students have a preference towards or relationship with Mexican music? Their rationales for all choosing this track is not apparent based on the visualization.

Group 4 consists of 4 students and had 4 tracks chosen by all 4 students! The group seems very connected. I wonder if there are any other demographic, geographic, or psychographic similarities between Sebastian, Julia, April, and Lucy that may help explain the high degree of connectivity.

Group 0 consists of 4 students and had 2 tracks chosen by all 4 students and Group 5 consists of 3 students and had 4 tracks chosen by all 3 students.

This means that my group (Group #4) had the highest number of tracks in common, but we are also the smallest group, being the only group of 2 students.

Our class collectively curated the following 10 pieces of music, selected based on the highest degrees of connectivity:

1. Track 7: Johnny B. Goode
2. Track 14: Melancholy Blues
3. Track 3: Percussion (Senegal)
4. Track 18: Fifth Symphony (First Movement)
5. Track 5: Morning Star Devil Bird
6. Track 6: El Cascabel 12
7. Track 11: The Magic Flute (Queen of the Night aria)
8. Track 24: Flowing Streams
9. Track 25: Jaat Kahan Ho
10. Track 9: Tsuru No Sugomori (Crane’s Nest)

The most connected tracks, as indicated by the number of links, could indicate tracks that are most popular, but may also indicate the tracks most original regardless of whether one actually enjoys the track. I don’t think we can know the reasons or rationale behind a track’s ‘popularity’, only that the class, for some and likely varying reasons, thought it would well-represent music of the world.

My curated 10 pieces of music, selected from the 27 pieces of music included in the Golden Record:

1. Senegal, percussion, recorded by Charles Duvelle. 2:08
2. Australia, Aborigine songs, “Morning Star” and “Devil Bird,” recorded by Sandra LeBrun Holmes. 1:26
3. Mexico, “El Cascabel,” performed by Lorenzo Barcelata and the Mariachi México. 3:14
4. “Johnny B. Goode,” written and performed by Chuck Berry. 2:38
5. Japan, shakuhachi, “Tsuru No Sugomori” (“Crane’s Nest,”) performed by Goro Yamaguchi. 4:51
6. Georgian S.S.R., chorus, “Tchakrulo,” collected by Radio Moscow. 2:18
7. Peru, panpipes and drum, collected by Casa de la Cultura, Lima. 0:52
8. Beethoven, Fifth Symphony, First Movement, the Philharmonia Orchestra, Otto Klemperer, conductor. 7:20
9. China, ch’in, “Flowing Streams,” performed by Kuan P’ing-hu. 7:37
10. India, raga, “Jaat Kahan Ho,” sung by Surshri Kesar Bai Kerkar. 3:30

Of the 27 pieces of music, I focused on organizing the pieces of music geographically and I selected 10 pieces that capture different styles from around the world. I started by identifying any pieces originating by the same artist or from the same region and narrowed those pieces down to one. For example, Bach and Beethoven are both German composers so while both influential, only a single piece originating from Germany was curated as part of my 10 pieces. Similarly, there were at least three different American pieces of music, and I selected only one piece as part of my 10 pieces to ensure American-style music was not overrepresented. My final 10 pieces represent a collection of geographically-diverse music pieces.

Re-designed Task 1: What’s in your bag? in audio form:

Task 7 Reflection (separated into parts due to file size upload constraints):

Part 1:

Part 2:

Part 3:

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Part 6:

References

ASMR University. (n.d.). What is ASMR? https://asmruniversity.com/about-asmr/what-is-asmr/

Dobson, T., & Willinsky, J. (2009). Digital literacy. In D. R. Olson & N. Torrance (Eds.), The Cambridge handbook of literacy (pp. 286-312). Cambridge University Press.

The New London Group. (1996). A pedagogy of multiliteracies: Designing social futures. Harvard Educational Review 66(1), 60-92.

Emoji story:

First of all, I found this task very challenging and I will be amazed if anyone is able to guess what show and episode my emoji story depicts. My emoji story represents the most recent episode of a show I’m watching, and it was not chosen based on the ease of visualization. I am eager to hear your guesses!

This task was a lot harder than I expected and I ended up focusing on key ideas only, rather than trying to capture details, which I found couldn’t be ‘correctly conveyed’ with a limited set of emojis. The show I am watching has an immense amount of details – it involves live-action scenes, backgrounds, established characters, and I often couldn’t find the ‘right’ emoji to capture all of these details. We are limited by those who create emojis and while in my day-to-day usage I normally find the range of emojis to be quite broad, for this task there were certain details such as a light-skinned character with brown or red hair, that were not included in the emoji keyboard.

Another challenge was related to the fact that each emoji can have several meanings. I kept flip flopping between using emojis to convey their literal meaning versus their symbolic meaning. This is consistent with Bolter’s (2001) argument around each element in picture writing meaning too much than too little and having different meanings. This makes it challenging for any ‘reader’ or ‘viewer’ of my emoji story to understand what is being conveyed. An emoji’s meaning is also dependent on the creator and viewer’s context and culture – for example, the diamond ring emoji, which is meant to symbolize a wedding that took place in the show, may not convey the same meaning for a different viewer.

I used my iPhone’s Notes application to capture my emoji story and in doing so, it seems like text is still in control, despite not using any text in my story. Bolter (2001) discusses the tension between textual and visual forms of communication and while this entire task is made up of graphics (emojis in this case), they are used in a textual way. The emojis are organized as if in sentences and I used spaces between the lines of emojis, as if I was organizing paragraphs to separate ideas.

Prior to this task, I have never used emojis alone to tell a story; they have only been used as ‘decorative pieces’ to supplement text. It is interesting to think that emojis alone or text alone are both open to several interpretations – emojis alone can carry different meanings and text alone requires a reader to make several inferences or visualizations. However, when put and used together, they can help provide more contextualisation, resulting in less interpretation.

If visual forms of communications, including emojis, can help to enhance communication, it is surprising to me that emojis haven’t made their way into ‘professional’ or ‘business’ writing. When writing emails, it seems taboo to include emojis as they are deemed as ‘unprofessional’ but why is this, if they can enhance our communication?

Reference

Bolter, J. D. (2001). Writing space: Computers, hypertext, and the remediation of print (2nd ed). Lawrence Erlbaum Associates.

Compressed HTML file (zip file) of my Twine: ETEC 523 Task 5 Student Decisions.html

This was my first time using Twine and as I was playing the game, I thought this type of interactive text could be very useful for breaking down complex topics. In particular, for topics that involve decision trees or different ‘pathways’, a hypertext could help students understand the connections between ideas, better than if presented in a linear way. I also thought this type of non-linear text could be useful for students who are navigating decisions; a Twine could help them make their decisions through a series of choices.

I intended to create the latter concept when creating my Twine, but it evolved into something a little different…

I envisioned a student coming to office hours to discuss their career, which is a common topic of choice for my students. As a starting point however, it felt too linear and unnatural to stick with one ‘storyline’ so I added a choice on the first screen, which then opened up the different pathways and a non-linear web of storylines.

I found working in a web to be a more natural way to capture how our thoughts work, and how conversations flow. Similar to what Bolter (2001) stated, I found myself “being overwhelmed with ideas as I [wrote]” (p. 34), and my ideas didn’t always flow in a linear way. It was helpful to capture ideas within a web rather than having to form them linearly. My hypertext grew exponentially, as each time a choice was offered, a new pathway and web would form. This seems similar to how conversations flow, as conversations often branch off of what is said, with one idea leading to another, but not necessarily in a linear way. A conversation may eventually loop back to earlier topics, but it may not.

This experience was very different compared to writing a story using a word processor, which requires that I order things from start to finish (i.e. top to bottom, or left to right). As Bolter (2001) discusses, this innately creates a hierarchical organization. A hypertext allows for non-linear flow of thoughts.

I am eager to try using Twine for a topic that involves decision trees and seeing how my students navigate through the topic. I think it may be a very effective tool to break down complex tasks.

Reference

Bolter, J. D. (2001). Writing space: Computers, hypertext, and the remediation of print (2nd ed). Lawrence Erlbaum Associates.

Do you normally write by hand or type? Did you find this task difficult or easy? Explain.

I normally type, so I found this task more challenging than expected.

Firstly, it was difficult to find the appropriate writing technology for this task. I don’t normally keep any paper on my desk, so I had to go searching for this technology and eventually found an old notebook to write in.

After only a few lines of writing, my hand started to cramp up. My muscles are not used to writing by hand and I was shocked at how ‘out of shape’ these muscles were. My students still often write in-person, paper-based exams and I often see them shaking out their hands in discomfort. I can better understand that several of them may not be used to writing by hand, but then are asked to do so on an exam, forcing them to use muscles they are not used to.

The task was to write a reflection of approximately 500 words. I quickly realized how reliant I am on electronic word count tools, and I realized that I have no idea how much writing would constitute 500 words. I ended up counting the number of words in a row and multiplied that by the number of rows to get an approximation.

I am also left-handed and I quickly remembered how annoying coils in a notebook are as they impede my hand placement. Writing near the bottom of the notebook was also difficult as my hand had to hover above the notebook – you may notice that my writing gets a little messier at the bottom of each page.

What did you do when you made a mistake or wanted to change your writing? How did you edit your work? Did your choice of media play a part in how you edited your work?

I made seven mistakes during my hand-written reflection and since I was using a pen, I simply crossed out the unwanted words. I opted not to use white out, mostly because I don’t know if I have any. Another option would have been to start over completely, but given that my hand written work is not being presented formally, it was not worth the effort to edit my work in this way.

My choice of media – pen and paper, limited my options to edit my work. Pen is more permanent than pencil and cannot simply be erased. I opted for pen as I find it clearer to read.

I often mark-up documents using my iPad and Apple Pencil, which merges hand-writing with digital affordances. With these two technologies, I can write ‘by hand’, but am given many more opportunities to edit my work, including erasing and re-arranging text.

What do you feel is the most significant difference between writing by hand and using mechanized forms of writing? Which do you prefer and why?

Writing by hand seems much more effortful, both physically and from a time perspective. It took me approximately 35 minutes to hand-write my reflection (keep in mind that this includes the time to think of what to write as I was writing), but it took me less than 10 minutes to type. The accelerated rate at which typing allows us to record thoughts and convey information seems parallel to the accelerated rates that the printing press enabled as examined by Innis (2007). As typing is more efficient than writing by hand, I wonder if this results in us writing more compared to if we were to hand-write everything.

From a physical perspective, it is more effortful to write by hand and the amount of effort can be influenced by the writing device (e.g. stylus vs. pencil vs. ballpoint pen vs. rollerball pen). The physical effort needed to write by hand can result in variations in the size, shape and overall legibility of our writing (Bolter, 2001). This is not the case with mechanized forms of writing, which has the ability to produce consistent text, in consistent sizes and fonts.

A significant advantage of mechanized (and digitized) forms of writing includes the ability to edit one’s work more easily. I wonder if this causes us to be more critical of our writing and whether we spend more time editing, simply because it’s easier to do.

For work and school-related tasks, I prefer typing as it is much more efficient compared to writing by hand. The formatting and editing abilities are also valuable. However, I find writing by hand more relaxing. I feel more grounded and at peace when writing by hand, perhaps because it is slower so it feels calmer, or perhaps because I associate typing with work and school.

Do any of my peer used mechanized forms of writing for personal hobbies (e.g. diarizing or story writing)? Between typing and writing by hand, which do you find more relaxing and why?

References

Bolter, J. D. (2001). Writing space: Computers, hypertext, and the remediation of print (2nd ed). Lawrence Erlbaum Associates.

Innis, H. (2007). Empire and communications. Dundurn Press.

The following text was captured using the dictation feature, converting my oral speech to text in the Notes application on my iPhone:

This is a story of how my dog Max and I performed with the super docs. If you have never heard of the super dogs, they are a group of performing dogs that perform at events around the world. We had the opportunity to perform with the super dogs in Vancouver at the PNE, Vancouver, pacific national exhibition, the PNE is an annual event in Vancouver and takes place during the last two weeks of the summer. It is an outdoor fair with lots of events and activities for people of all ages. I have fond memories going to the PNE as a child, playing games and winning prizes, eating food at the fair walking through the marketplace, but my favourite event of all times was always the super dogs are our journey to perform with them started much earlier in the year in January or February when our good friend and trader Lisa who has been involved with the super dogs for years, let us know that she would be hosting super dog auditions at the pet lover show local pet event being held in Abbotsford, BC she invited us to go audition, where we would get to see how our dogs did performing in front of an audience. We got to partake in a few different events, the dog agility component where the dog runs through tunnels over jumps, and even through the weaves, the high jump event, and a freestyle event, where Max and I showcase his tricks The auditions went well. Max stayed focussed on me the entire time. Of course I was holding the most high value treats. I could think of to keep his attention but overall he did incredibly well and surpassed my expectations in terms of how focussed he could be in front of an audience we fast forward to the summer time when we got a message from Lisa asking if we were available for an apprenticeship position with the super dogs the last weekend in August we were ecstatic to be given the opportunity to perform with the super dogs I recall pulling into the parking lot, walking through the back entryway of the Pacific Coliseum, where the super dogs performance was held and it was such a weird experience to be backstage with for so many years. I had only been a spectator from the other side, I recall being able to walk out onto the floor, a huge floor with empty seats all around to warm up, I recall getting a super dogs uniform to put on which made it feel very real. Max and I participated in a couple of different events the first being the relay races which is a fan favourite where the super dogs are split into two teams and one by one the dogs run through an agility obstacle course and which ever team completed the fastest wins this goes on as the audience is cheering for their team and overall it’s a very fun event for both the dogs and the audience. We also participated in the high jump event where we started by bringing out the small dogs who could only do a few bars high of the jump, we were in the middle of the class, and then after us, we brought all the dogs who could jump even higher than us, we participated in the weaving event which is one of maxes favourite agility obstacles, and I remember feeling so proud of him as he completed the different events and obstacles with is not bothered at all by the loud music lights or audience, even with all the excitement going on my self as a handler, had one job and it was to pay attention to my dog and to meet him that connection with my dog and I think we are Chief that after the show which lasts around 60 minutes, the team got to eat and take a break and we also stretched as a group because the shows are not only physically demanding for the dogs but also for the humans we participated with the super dogs for three days on that Labour Day long weekend which meant three days of three shows a day for a total of nine performances it was an exhausting three days but one of the most memorable weekends I’ve ever had with Max and I’m so proud to be able to say that he is a super doc

Reflection & Analysis:

How does the text deviate from conventions of written English?

Firstly, seeing my story as one large paragraph is not appealing and highlights the lack of formatting achieved using the dictation feature. Had my story been presented following conventions of written English, components including a title, headers, paragraphs, and spacing would have been incorporated to help separate different ideas within my story.

The text also contains some grammar and punctuation errors that would likely not be present had my story been written instead of orally conveyed. For example, the term ‘most high value’ was used instead of saying ‘highest value’, a grammar mistake that came out while speaking, that would have been corrected if written. From a punctuation perspective, there are several run-on sentences and some misuse of punctuation (commas and periods) that capture the pace and tone of how my words were spoken, but don’t confirm to proper grammar or sentence structure of written English.

What is “wrong” in the text? What is “right”?

Let’s start with what is right – of the 748 words in the text, over 97% of the words are spelled correctly. The voice-to-text feature did well in this regard.

Where it wasn’t so effective and got things wrong, was mostly in the spelling of names and the punctuation used throughout the text. There were two names used throughout my story – the organization called Superdogs and my dog named Max. The name ‘Superdogs’ was often captured as ‘super docs’ or ‘super dogs’ which is reasonable given that the name of the organization is not part of the common English vernacular and the voice-to-text software broke this name into two, more common words in the English language. My dog’s name Max was appropriately spelled, except for one instance where the word ‘Max’s’ was spelled as ‘maxes’, likely since the software did not know I was referring to a being.

There is also a lack and misuse of punctuation. I enabled my iPhone’s Auto-Punctuation setting and instead of vocalizing punctuation such as ‘comma’ or ‘period’, which would not be included in oral storytelling, I allowed the voice-to-text feature to add the appropriate punctuation. Several commas and periods were missing, resulting in run-on sentences. In a couple of instances, periods were misplaced, often before the word ‘I’, such as in the following two sentences:

• Of course I was holding the most high value treats. I could think of to keep his attention…
• …it was such a weird experience to be backstage with for so many years. I had only been a spectator from the other side…

What are the most common “mistakes” in the text and why do you consider them “mistakes”?

The most common mistakes in the text relate to the lack and misuse of punctuation. I consider them mistakes as they change the pace at which the text is read. For example, commas and periods indicate pauses within and between sentences and can be used to emphasize different ideas.

The following text at the end of my story is one very long, run-on sentence. The lack of punctuation not only makes it difficult to read, but also removes some of the emphasis placed on certain sentences.

We also participated in the high jump event where we started by bringing out the small dogs who could only do a few bars high of the jump, we were in the middle of the class, and then after us, we brought all the dogs who could jump even higher than us, we participated in the weaving event which is one of maxes favourite agility obstacles, and I remember feeling so proud of him as he completed the different events and obstacles with is not bothered at all by the loud music lights or audience, even with all the excitement going on my self as a handler, had one job and it was to pay attention to my dog and to meet him that connection with my dog and I think we are Chief that after the show which lasts around 60 minutes, the team got to eat and take a break and we also stretched as a group because the shows are not only physically demanding for the dogs but also for the humans we participated with the super dogs for three days on that Labour Day long weekend which meant three days of three shows a day for a total of nine performances it was an exhausting three days but one of the most memorable weekends I’ve ever had with Max and I’m so proud to be able to say that he is a super doc

I wonder whether the auto-punctuation feature of other voice-to-text tools may have better captured more appropriate punctuation, or whether my tone, pace and enunciation could be clearer.

What if you had “scripted” the story? What difference might that have made? In what ways does oral storytelling differ from written storytelling? 

If I had scripted the story versus shared it orally, it would have included components such as a title and paragraphs to help provide context and to break up different ideas and make it more visually appealing and easier to read. Note that at the beginning of this task, I was inclined to add one sentence that was not part of my oral story, but that I felt helped to add context to the text.

Oral storytelling can be much slower compared to written storytelling – the text above captures approximately 9 minutes of speech, but it took me less than 4 minutes to re-read. In oral storytelling, the speaker has control over the pace and tone of the story and can influence the story and characters by using different voices, or by emphasizing different parts of the story. In written storytelling, the reader has more autonomy over the pace and tone of the story. For example, if a story has characters, two readers may visualize or envision different voices for the same character very differently.

I hope you enjoyed my voice-to-text story! Were there parts of the story you didn’t understand due to the text captured? Have any of you watched the Superdogs at the PNE before?

Just for fun, this is Max as a Superdog!

Hello, I’m Shannon!

I’ve chosen to include two bags that I carry regularly and wear simultaneously – one as a cross body bag and one around my waist.

Why do I wear two bags at the same time? This must be a fashion ‘no-no’…but you’ll see why shortly.

My first bag, a cross body bag contains the following:

1. Phone
2. Keys
3. Cards including driver’s license, BCIT ID, BCAA membership, credit card, debit card
4. Sunglasses

1. Phone – the obvious ‘text technology’ and is used not only as a communication device, but also as a camera, an entertainment device, a notebook, a calendar, and a calculator. This technology allows me to communicate through text messages, emails, notes, and phone calls, capturing both the written and oral forms of ‘text’. The camera allows me to capture photos and videos, which is also arguably ‘text’ as they’re used to create content and used for storytelling on social media.

2. Keys – so many keys! For my home alone, there are several keys: a key FOB to enter the building, a key to enter my unit, and different keys for different parts of the building. Excitingly, I will soon get to exchange all these keys for a new set of keys later this week, as I am moving to a new home! I also have a key FOB for my car, a key to my office at work, and an air tag. On my key ring alone, there are 3 different ‘text technologies’ that communicate electronically with other devices. I am not able to see or hear the communication occurring, but it is happening in their own ‘language’. I also noticed icons on my key FOB for my car, subtlety providing information on the functions of each button. While not words, these icons are also ‘text’, used to inform and guide users’ actions.

3. My cards tell you that I can legally drive in Canada, that I work at BCIT, that I am a BCAA member, and that I have some trust in financial institutions as I have a credit and debit card. To elaborate on my role at BCIT, I am a Faculty member and teach accounting and business courses. I am a Chartered Professional Accountant (which you cannot tell from the contents of my bag, but may assume based on my position), and my experience in accounting led me to my current position. All these cards are ‘text technologies’ allowing me to communicate with others – either by physically showing / using my cards which contains text in the form of words and images, and electronically as the cards can electronically communicate with campus and governmental-systems.

4. Finally, my sunglasses. One may infer from this item that I live in an area where sunlight is present and may conclude that I like to be outside, which would be a correct assessment. I feel most at-peace when I am outside, surrounded by nature in some way, whether amongst trees in a trail or beside the ocean on a beach.

Moving onto my second bag that I wear around my waist.

It contains the following:

5. Ziplock bag full of dog treats

6. Poop bags

From the contents of this bag, one may determine that I am a dog owner. I have two dogs – Max and Obi, who are very much treated like members of the family. Max is an 11-year old Border Collie / Australian Shepherd and Obi is a 2-year old Chihuahua mix, rescued from Tijuana, Mexico. Both are extremely food motivated and were eager to see if treats were being passed out as part of this activity. I gave in…

On first glance, the bag of treats may not seem to relate to ‘text technologies’ but they do indicate a lot about how I communicate with my dogs. My training methods primarily involve positive reinforcement, where treats are used to reward behaviour that I would like to reinforce. The treat is the positive (pleasant) stimulus that is added, with the goal of reinforcing good behaviour that I want repeated. I communicate with my dogs using oral commands and gestures, both of which may be considered ‘text’!

The poop bags – they are used because it is socially acceptable to pick up after one’s dogs. I have never really thought about their design, but they are generally opaque and designed with dog-related icons (in this case paw prints), which indicates that its contents are dog-related, but should be ‘hidden’ from the public. I have yet to see clear poop bags and I am guessing that those would not be very popular!

So there you have it, the contents of two bags that I often carry, that contain more ‘text technologies’ than may initially meet the eye.

From the contents of my bags, I may be pegged as a minimalist person, carrying only the necessary items, capable of driving to/from the BCIT campus, and who carries the supplies needed to care for her dogs.

In the future, an archeologist may marvel at the fact that we had to carry so many fragmented items (e.g. keys, cards), as I imagine that our phones will soon serve as the single item needed. Services like Apple Pay have already diminished the need to carry physical banking cards, and with smart homes and cars, keys may quickly become obsolete.