The short story Toine by Guy de Maupassant presents the narrative of a man whose sudden medical condition turns into an opportunity to become a father. I will first discuss themes of the story then the writing style .
Toine is a bon vivant greatly appreciated by the people of his county. Right at the beginning, the reader can grasp his character by the way Maupassant introduces several positive monikers to name Toine (le gros Toine, Toi-ma-fine, Brûlot). The name Toine – the story title – itself is a nickname. Toine is an important person of his county ; the whole hamlet seems to be his property.
He seems however to be the antithesis of his wife, who’s described as beeing ‘‘born ill-tempered, and (going) through life in a mood of perpetual discontent.’’ They constantly fight – Toine in an humoristic way, his wife with real anger. Her anger towards her husband surely comes from the fact thet he doesn’t contribute much to the production while she constantly works to be more efficient. The wife’s expression, ‘‘Wait a bit! Wait a bit! You’ll see what’ll happen. He’ll burst like a sack of grain!”, mentionned at the end of every argument, foreshadows Toine’s sad destiny. (It is important to note that Maupassant’s use of past tenses to describe Toine’s life also hints at Toine’s life change – his attack and new condition).
After the attack, Toine is confined to his bed. His friends start to visit him in his room and Toine enjoys life almost as before, which upsets his wife. At this point the balance of power changes and Toine must now follow his wife’s orders. The jovial Toine becomes anxious and docile in front of his wife who’s quite decided to make her husband productive. She makes him brood eggs under his big arms as if they are wings (what he had mentioned – but surely not thought true – earlier in the story).
At the end, Toine becomes proud when finding a paternity that he never had : the chicks that he brooded became, in some way, his children. And when he calls his friend son-in-law, that time it is almost true.
Style
The writing has interesting, constrasting aspects in both its form and register. The text has a fluidity almost as though it is told in oral tradition. Many sentences or paragraphs start with a coordinating conjunction (and, but) as if the story was coming out of a mouth without pausing. While it possesses this characteristic, the writing style is highly literary. In the narration, the simple past – a literary tense – is constantly used.
Another important contrast is the gap between the register used in the narration and that of the dialogue. The use of the simple past, sentence constructions and vocabulary used in the narration contribute to the literary register. On the other hand, dialogue is written such that we can almost imagine French peasants speaking in the 19th century countryside. From the simple syntax and colloquial words used as well as ellipsis (like in these lines: ‘‘J’verrons c’qu’arrivera’’, ‘‘Qué que tu veux ?’’, ‘‘Pourquoi que tu ne bé point la mé, pé Toine ?’’), the register used for dialogues is popular.
Finally, the story has the feel of a legend. Toine’s and his wife’s personalities seem exaggerated, but it really is the description of the brooding and the chicks’ birth that make the story special : there was a great ‘‘commotion’’, ‘‘newcomers filled the bar’’ asking how many chicks there were, it was a ‘‘triumph’’ ! This singular paternity surely contributes to making Toine a legendary character.