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My mini-LinkedIn Profile Screenshot<\/em><\/p>\n Formal Report<\/span><\/p>\n As the weekly assignment on our webpage indicates, I have complied my Formal Report proposal and the outline. It has been an exhilarating experience. I truly feel passionate about making a change in how Starbucks Canada<\/a> operates. Even if the report fails to be conclusive or does not yield any support for the idea, I feel good to actually have a positive input to the company that I feel passionate about. As of now I am waiting for the green light from Dr. Paterson<\/a> to approve of my research topic, I hope she agrees with me and I cannot wait to collect data to see if any significant amount of people are willing to come on board with the idea. Reflecting on my peer reviewer, I can tell he was happy with the ideas presented. Ajay was kind enough to suggest fixes for grammatical errors and the environmental factors I haven’t thought of. As I reviewed Ajay’<\/a>s proposal, I learned that an in depth scope would help with the research part, as I have focused on what the company would like, rather than the impact that it may cause for the surrounding industry.<\/p>\n Peer Review of LinkedIn Profiles<\/span><\/p>\n Finally, both my peer review of Jade<\/a>‘s LinkedIn profile and Ajay’s proposal allowed me to revise the style I write it. I have been writing in a casual tone while I was out of school for a year and a half. I must retool my writing style that is suitable to academic writing. I was very impressed with Jade’s writing and Ajay’s ambitious proposal, it made me realize that I should really focus and work harder to keep up to their level of writing. Last, I feel that by having the peer review process, I have been a little more cautious about what I write and how I present the idea. It occurred to me that I have an impactful way of writing, that is not suitable for professional grade.<\/p>\n <\/p>\n DOC file of Revised Proposal with Peer Reviewer’s Input<\/p>\n