In this reflection blog, I will discuss my creation of a LinkedIn profile, formal report, and the peer-review process. Furthermore, I will take into account the remarks made by Professor Erika Paterson during her assessment of my Unit 1 work.

LinkedIn is platform that I genuinely wish to harness as an avenue to build my career. Yet, this project was no easy task as one should acknowledge and speak to the specific requirements and tastes of potential employers. Targeting these employers requires a strong sense of purpose with regard to career goals, which many, including myself, may have not fully formed at this juncture. Through this exercise, my peer-review, and my research, I have learnt that building a personable, yet professional profile requires the succinct communication of qualifications and experiences, a strong summary, and a well composed profile photograph. My peer reviewer, Jamil Devsi, provided excellent advice in this area, especially in the formulation of a strong summary. My own review of Yasaman Fazel’s profile highlighted small organizational issues, which could speak to her impressive employment experiences. Overall, I found the LinkedIn exercises useful.

With regard to the Formal Report Proposal, I found this exercise to be challenging, as I am currently unemployed and my work on The Envoy is performed remotely. Therefore, finding a suitable issue to analyze or correct was a difficult task. I settled on examining a core problem of The Envoy: the stagnation of membership rates. This focus has allowed me to research an area that I am interested in and work towards furthering a project that is close to my heart. Analyzing The Envoy’s analytics on social media platforms will provide me with a good foundation of converting quantitative data into qualitative analysis. I am confident that I can produce a solid formal report for The Envoy. Stephen Razis’ peer review of my proposal provided an important reflection on this task. There was some confusion as to whether proposals are in letterform or longer piece, like the one I produced. Nonetheless, Razis’ emphasized organizational and language changes, all of which were valuable critiques. I have attempted to implement his suggestions into my formal report outline.

Finally, I thoroughly enjoy the practice of peer reviewing as a method to provide and receive constructive criticism. I sincerely hope that my reviews have been as helpful for my peers, as theirs have been for me. I am very impressed with both the professionalism of these individuals and their own, unique, experiences and vocations. I found Devsi’s review to be most useful with my LinkedIn, due to the immediate impact of the changes that he recommended. I will continue to offer my opinions, in an effort to provide helpful advice to my peers.

I have attached a link to my revised Formal Report Proposal below, a link to Stephen Razis’ review of my original proposal, and a link to my own review of Razis’ proposal.

301 James Watson Edit-Proposal for Formal Report

James Watson’s Review of Stephen Razis’ Formal Report Proposal

Stephen Razis’ Review of James Watson’s Formal Report Proposal