Jul 01 2010
MP1
Hello everyone,
Here’s my MP1 on Science Fiction. This has been quite the process. This is the fifth and final draft. Some of the information initially belonged in my MP2 so I have made my final edit and moved the info to my MP2 which made both of them flow much better. I’m including my first draft and my final draft of my MP1 to give you an idea of my improvement through this process. Enjoy!
Here is the final version of my MP1, Enjoy!
Here is draft one of my MP1 – I think you will agree, quite a difference.