Evaluation 9

 
Week 12: Venture pitch evaluations
 
For Dale Pearce at Livescribe Echo Pen”
 
Comment by jiorns 10:42 am on December 1, 2013
 
Hi Dale,

The pen technology is a great tool for learning for sure and I can see how you believe in its application for students you deal with.
In terms of your Word doc (venture pitch), I found the introductory reference to yourself as “mock CEO” and the concluding disclosure that you had researched an existing and real company confusing.
I am not sure that a consumer/user of the pen is an investor as such, more of a stakeholder.
So, there is no investment pitch. As @jkhanson has said, it might have been good to think of a new direction for the company and base a pitch around that.
 
 
Ratings

CEO and team 1
Venture concept 1
Marketability 1
Venture plan 1