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Golden Record Curation Analysis

The graph from Palladio represents an undirected multigraph, with edges between the nodes: Sources and Targets. The sources represent the curators, and the targets represent the tracks of the Golden Record. Initially, the network observed is an intertwined jumble of connections as seen in Figure 1 below:

Fig. 1: Network graph of curators and tracks from the Golden Record.

Deciphering this network is not an easy task. The edges overlap and the endpoints are hard to see. I fiddled around with the settings to highlight the source nodes and also “sized” the target nodes. This made it easy to differentiate the source from the target. I then decided to move the source nodes to the outside and leave the targets on the inside. Figure 2 below is a representation of this network, and it is now easier to see the multi-network connection between all the curators. By sizing the target nodes, it is also clearer to see the track chosen the most (Percussion (Senegal)), as well as that chosen the least number of times (String Quartet no.13 in B Flat) (circled in red in Fig.2).

Fig. 2: Network graph with highlighted source nodes and sized target nodes.

While this representation of the graph is more informative than Fig.1, it is still quite well-connected, with many edges between all the nodes making it difficult to isolate each edge. Taking advantage of the “facets” and “modularity class”, it is possible to make the groups smaller for analysis. I looked through the six pre-made groups and found the node labelled with my name in Group 3. Figure 3 below represents the network map for group 3.

Fig. 3: Network map for Group 3.

In Fig. 3, despite there being many edges crossing over, they are easier to isolate because there are only 4 source nodes. There are also three four-way vertices, meaning all four of us have chosen three tracks in common with each other (Tracks 3, 9, and 14). Additionally, it displays three-way vertices representing tracks chosen by any combination of three of the four curators, as well as two-way nodes representing tracks chosen by any two curators. Three of us have two tracks not in common with any other curator in the group, while one has only one track not shared by the rest. What does this say about us? Presumably, the four of us were grouped together because of the similarities in our choices of tracks. However, the network does not tell us why we chose the tracks we did. Is it likely that all four of us had the same criteria for choosing the tracks? Hardly. If it were true, all our choices may have been the same. All we can infer from the data is that our track choosing criteria had large overlaps, greater than any other grouping determined by the software’s programming. What the programming does not tell us are why the curators have those tracks in common? Why is it that we have a total of nineteen tracks in our map out of the total twenty-seven? Why were the remaining eight tracks not chosen by any of us?

Fig. 4: Graph of my highest matched choices

Figure 4 above represents the node that has the most matches with mine. Chelan and I have seven tracks in common with each other. Conversely, Figure 5 represents my least common matches with Melissa. I went back to read Task 8 by both Chelan and Melissa and was quite surprised. I had not read their reflections and curation criteria up to this point. I found that quite simply, all three of us have placed emotion as the central criterion. Why then do I have seven matches with Chelan but only one with Melissa? I chose to include as wide a range of emotional diversity as I could with the tracks I enjoyed listening to, and found that Chelan’s reasoning was somewhat similar to mine. She also specified drama and intrigue in addition to emotion, and that perhaps explains the three tracks that are different for us. Conversely, Melissa specifies that she wanted to choose only happy, upbeat tracks that did not include any words. In my reflection, I designated the word “happy” to two of my ten choices: Percussion (Senegal) and The Well-Tempered Clavier (Bach). The link that connects my node with Melissa’s is indeed one of these – Persussion (Senegal). This track is also one of the three tracks that is common between all fours of us in Group 3, of which Chelan is also a member. It is interesting to note that neither Melissa nor Chelan chose The Well-Tempered Clavier. Maybe I need to listen to it again to find what it was about it that made me choose it.

Fig. 5: Graph of my lowest matched choices.

The similarities in our choices may be somewhat explained by our Task 8 reflections, but not entirely and not from the graphs alone. The network graphs from Palladio cannot say why one track feels happy to me but not to Melissa or Chelan, and vice versa. Or maybe, it does feel that way to them but not compelling enough to include in their top ten? Emotions are subjective, but some are universal – the former explains the differences in our choices, while the latter explains the similarities. Maybe?

I created a new graph to see how both Chelan’s and Melissa’s choices interact with mine, see Fig. 6 below. Although I had seen how both their choices link to mine separately, this was an interesting depiction of how Chelan’s relate to Melissa’s. They both have 3 tracks in common, Percussion (Senegal) of course linking all three of us. The other two are tracks 18 and 21, and I probably did not choose them because I already had “happy” tracks and wanted more diversity.

Fig. 6: Interaction with my most and least common choices.

Finally, Figure 7 below depicts my interaction with my second highest common choices – 6. Two curators matched with me here, Jasmine P and Greg P. I like this graph because of how symmetric it is. The three of us have 6 common choices all three ways. All three of us have four tracks in common and share two tracks with one other person. While with Chelan and Melissa, the curation criteria matched in terms of emotion, with Greg and Jasmine this is not quite the case, not overtly at least. Greg chose tracks he felt he could connect with (OK – maybe there is emotion here), but Jasmine chose tracks that represented physical diversity. She wanted to include tracks that were from different parts of the world. Why then, do I have so many tracks in common with both of them? I did want diversity in emotion and maybe I got geographical diversity in that – but why then do Greg and Jasmine have so many tracks in common? Palladio, unfortunately, cannot answer these questions.

Fig. 7: “Triangle” with my second highest choices.

As for the political implications of such groupings, it is evident to me now that though people’s choices may be similar, their rationale need not be. I have made a few assumptions in my analysis thus far, based on the data I had, and also referred to different reflections to supplement this. When large scale decisions are made from similarity data or such network graphs, it is highly unlikely to take into account multiple reflections to understand people’s choices. I think that with more complex networks, more complex walks in the graphs, it would become exponentially more difficult to isolate and explain each choice, deduce the missing information, and thus, increase the risk for misinterpretation. Whether this is to one’s advantage or disadvantage, or good or bad, would depend on the risks associated with the decision, if it can ever be that discretely bipolar.

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References:

Systems Innovation. (2015). Graph Theory Overview. Retrieved from: https://youtu.be/82zlRaRUsaY

Systems Innovation. (2015). Network Connections. Retrieved from: https://youtu.be/2iViaEAytxw

I had no illusions about the difficulty of this task – I knew it would be fun, but I did not for a moment think this would be easy. I spent a LOT of time listening to the tracks, some of which were completely unfamiliar to me. Initially, I wanted my choices to be intelligent, representative, and meaningful. If these tracks are the sounds that reflect all of humanity on Earth (Taylor, 2019), I wanted my curation of 10 to be equally representative. I wanted to ensure men and women were also equally represented, but I knew that was naïve.

The talks by both Dr. Rumsey and Taylor highlight the importance of space and choosing what we can “afford to lose” rather than what we can afford to keep. It is true that in today’s age of digitization, storage of media is not as big a problem (if at all), the real issue is who can afford to pay for data storage Brown University, 2017). Thus, the question is not about what we can keep, but what we cannot. The phrase “afford to lose”, however, may not necessarily be monetary value, but rather emotional or sentimental value. It is this, then, that finally decided my criteria for me. Emotions are what differentiate humans from machines. Emotions are well-expressed with music. Animals also express emotions and empathy. If an extraterrestrial intelligent life exists, I think I would want them to experience the emotions expressed through the music. I decided to focus on what emotions each piece of music evoked or represented, thus my criterion for my curation is very subjective. I tried to keep in mind the other aspects I want to try to balance, for example gender and cultural representation, but it is emotion I chose first.

The tracks I chose are the following:

1. Bach, The Well-Tempered Clavier, Book 2, Prelude and Fugue in C, No.1. Glenn Gould, piano. 4:48 – happy, uplifting
2. Azerbaijan S.S.R., bagpipes, recorded by Radio Moscow. 2:30 – lamenting, hopeful
3. New Guinea, men’s house song, recorded by Robert MacLennan. 1:20 – the excitement and uncertainty of new beginnings.
4. Stravinsky, Rite of Spring, Sacrificial Dance, Columbia Symphony Orchestra, Igor Stravinsky, conductor. 4:35 – intense, dramatic, suspenseful
5. Peru, panpipes and drum, collected by Casa de la Cultura, Lima. 0:52 – fulfillment, like sitting around a fire with the community and sharing food and stories.
6. “Melancholy Blues,” performed by Louis Armstrong and his Hot Seven. 3:05 – hopeful, trip down memory lane kind of feeling.
7. Bulgaria, “Izlel je Delyo Hagdutin,” sung by Valya Balkanska. 4:59 – yearning, mournful.
8. China, ch’in, “Flowing Streams,” performed by Kuan P’ing-hu. 7:37 – relaxing, meditative.
9. Senegal, percussion, recorded by Charles Duvelle. 2:08 – happy, skip a beat, dance (also, the drums remind me of my home and childhood in Tanzania).
10. Japan, shakuhachi, “Tsuru No Sugomori” (“Crane’s Nest,”) performed by Goro Yamaguchi. 4:51 – peace and calm, accomplishment.

Overall, I am quite happy with my choices, and yes, I had to decide which ones of the 27 I could afford to let go of. There is something lost in limiting the choices only to ten, but there is also a lot to be said from these ten pieces. I hope they are able to evoke a range of emotions, connect to memories and forgotten parts of life, while also displaying the range of experiences and diversity Earth has to offer.

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References:

Brown University. (2017). Abby Smith Rumsey: “Digital Memory: What Can We Afford to Lose?”

NASA. (n.d.). Golden record: What’s on the record: Music from earth. Retrieved from https://voyager.jpl.nasa.gov/golden-record/whats-on-the-record/music/

My Bag: Redesigned is a video created using PixTeller and iMovie. PixTeller was used to animate the original photo and iMovie was used to add sound effects, text and transitions. Recommended viewing with speakers on:

View the original What’s In My Bag? post here.

Initially, for this task, I was going to pretend to be a forensic scientist who is investigating this bag for evidence and identification. The output would be a video of me in my lab coat extracting and examining each of the artifacts from the image above and taking notes on them. However, I realized that this would be fully visual as well. Thinking back to the original aim of the task, I decided to add more focus on the sounds. I decided to animate the original image instead of recording a new video and added sounds that I thought would be significant to each artifact. The sounds in order of appearance, and reasons why they were used are listed below:

1. “Sweep motion” and “Packing boxes” (iMovie): Bag being put on a surface, rummaging
2. “Hard Rain” and “Heavy Rain Thunder” (iMovie): rainfall – a common sound in Vancouver, and why umbrellas are used.
3. “Coin drop on concrete” and “Coin drop on wood” (iMovie): coins, money. Wallet.
4. “Sweep” (Mixkit) and “Household glass clink” (Zapsplat): glasses.
5. “Telephone Ringing”, “Cell phone ringing” and “Dialing tone” (iMovie): main use for earphones and wireless earbuds since teaching remotely.
6. “Household big bunch of keys on soft surface” and the same on hard wooden surface (zapsplat): keys with metallic keychain.
7. “Bubbles” and “Human hands dry rub circular motion (Zapsplat): hand sanitizer
8. “Mask Fabric Handling” and “Sleep Mask Remove” (Zapsplat): face mask
9. “Warp Engineering 03” and 05 (iMovie): MacBook charger, electrical buzzing sound
10. “Office pen writing on wood” and “paper turning” (Zapsplat): fountain pen scratching sounds and notepad rifling.
11. “Household big bunch of keys on wood” and “Electronic single button beep” (Zapsplat): Keys and key fob
12. “MacBook startup sound” (Soundboard) and “Apple MacBook Pro short typing sequence” (Zapsplat): MacBook sounds when turned on
13. “Footsteps” (iMovie): walking, working life, no car keys or fobs, no visible bus pass.

I imagine that the sound effects would be an effective means of understanding or identifying these objects for someone who may be visually challenged. I also realize that for some of these objects I chose sounds that hint at their use or need (like rain for umbrella) and others I chose sounds that the objects themselves would make (e.g. MacBook starting up). Adding the sounds to the image give the objects in it a life, function, or story. The mixture and combination of several modes make for a more effective semiotic mode (New London Group, 1996), thus the audio added to the visual add another dimension to this story. The text labels help to identify the objects, which may seem redundant, but they also helps to remove ambiguity.

However, it is not only the audio and the visual aspects that are significant here; I chose the sound effects specifically to evoke memories and lived experiences, and also find something relatable in the everyday and mundane. These would highlight the “culturally received patterns of meanings” in the sense that the common, mostly impersonal, professional artifacts could potentially be familiar to many working women today (New London Group, 1996, p. 76). The common objects and sounds comprise an “infinite variability of different forms of meaning-making in relation to the cultures, the subcultures, or the layers of an individual’s identity that these forms serve” (p. 88). The fact that these are the objects I carry everyday and sounds I hear everyday also imply that they are a significant part of my identity.

Reflecting on the process of creating this video, I kept thinking back to the literacies and skills required. While I may be comfortable with the basics of the software I used, they may not be as accessible to everyone. Beginning with ensuring the image is in the appropriate format, looking for an app/software/web application and then learning said application to animate the image, saving, rendering and downloading the animation, navigating iMovie, editing the animation as a video, searching for sound effects, adding these sound effects based on timing and transitions, adding text, exporting the movie, uploading it onto YouTube… and any other micro steps I may have overlooked. This task took longer than if I were to just write or verbally describe what was in my bag, however, I would not have been able to make those sound effects and evoke those memories quite like this.

As an educator, I think it is important to be “well-versed in different semiotic modes, visual, textual, and verbal” not only for the reasons of “meaning-making and communication in the digital age” Dobson & Willinsky (2009) mention, but also to enable our students to do the same (p. 15). As students have different strengths in the literacies they rely on or need on a day-to-day basis, it is important to encourage them to develop their proficiency not only in those literacies they are most comfortable with, but also in those that will help them become successful citizens of today’s digital world. Having said that, it has also been very challenging to redesign some of my own lessons since going remote last spring. Most of all, my students and I miss the hands-on laboratory work, and no matter how good virtual labs and simulations may be, they cannot replace traditional hands-on labs in teaching some skills and techniques. Every kind of literacy has a part to play, in my opinion.

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References:

Dobson, T., & Willinsky, J. (2009). Digital Literacy. The Cambridge Handbook of Literacy. Cambridge: Cambridge University Press.

The New London Group. (1996). A pedagogy of multiliteracies: Designing social futures. Harvard Educational Review 66(1), 60-92.

While this may be very familiar to a lot of you, the above emojis represent one of my favourite shows that I recently re-watched. I relied mostly on ideas to depict the plot above. The title is hidden in the plot itself, so I did not separate the two. I thought that would make it even easier to identify. I started out with a lot more emojis than I have here, but decided to trim it down to streamline the ideas. I related to Kress’ story regarding the children’s interpretation of their visit to the museum. Kress (2005) mentions how “[t]here is no hint of narration”, rather the children display a variety of objects they found significant (p. 14). The emojis in my “story” above also do not narrate the events of the show, neither did I rely on words or syllables to present it. I thought of the main principles behind the show, the characters, their relationships, their professions as I believe those to be comprehensive enough to describe the whole plot and its premise. I did not choose this because it would be easy to visualize, but I had to challenge myself to focus on the backbone of the show and ignore the trimmings. Kress also distinguishes between words and depictions by stating that while the former is finite and fixed (“syntax, line, page, text”), the latter are more flexible, more meaningful (2005, pp. 15-16). If I were writing out the plot in words, and when I was thinking it out, I was more narrative, chronological, and wanted to include more plot points, storylines and ideas. Trimming this down to the essentials was fun, and I wanted to ensure the meaning would be universally similar. While words are open to interpretation, depictions provide more context and “constitute their own silent language” (Bolter, 2001, p. 59). This language can transcend boundaries of spoken and/or written languages, culture, age. Representing the plot using emojis was also a nice change for me because I am generally quite verbose. Sometimes, the meaning may be lost in too many words. However, with the emojis, or icons, the meaning is visual and limited in interpretation, I think. Could we communicate entirely in emojis, though? Do we lose meaning or something else if we did not use any words? Would my emoji story suffice to present the emotional connect, the mystery and suspense, the pull of the show? I don’t think so…

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References:

Bolter, J. D. (2001). Writing space: Computers, hypertext, and the remediation of print (2nd ed.). Mahwah, N.J: Lawrence Erlbaum Associates. doi:10.4324/9781410600110

Kress (2005), Gains and losses: New forms of texts, knowledge, and learning. Computers and Composition, Vol. 2(1), 5-22.

Welcome to my Twine Escape Room! (Open in New Tab/Window to download).

Recently, I had assigned my grade 11 students a group project that involved creating a digital escape room on the topic of the Periodic Table. I got very creative and quite challenging puzzles, and they all had fun solving each others’ puzzles. When I began brainstorming ideas for my Twine story/game, I thought how perfect it would be to try an escape room on Twine! I had very minimal experience with Twine before – in the gaming summer institute, and had not really played around with it as much. I also have very little coding experience from my first year at UBC. However, I was very excited to try it out.

My very first instincts was to make a Harry Potter themed escape room. I quickly foresaw logistical issues with this, copyright being a big one. Also,  I would have gotten VERY carried away with that. So I stuck with a more generic idea. I started brainstorming on paper first, because I wanted the links to be clear for me before I began making them on Twine.  As Bolter (2001) states: “the physical unit of a writing technology helps to define the conceptual unit” (p.43). I wanted the conceptual idea of my escape room to make sense and this paper version provided the clarity to easily reproduce it on Twine. This is what one of my early planning sheets look like:

It is easy to see how network-like this looks already. The feature image above represents the actual network tree for the Twine story. As Miall and Dobson (2001) explain the non-linearity of hypertext and how it is “writing with places”, it is evident from these images how true this is.

After this initial organization, I made the clues and puzzles on paper first, at least a skeleton of them, then proceeded to make them all digitally. I had to be careful about any images I add, as they should not distract from the clue searching. I also decided against music (although a mysterious tune would have been nice) for the same reasons. I am a huge fan of puzzles and would have liked to make these more complex, but found myself limited by what Twine can offer. However, if I had invested more time, I’m sure I could have learned to embed other externally held puzzles.

The Main Room serves as a jumping off point and links to the locations of the clues. I did not number these links, nor did I put the clues in any particular order in those locations, because I wanted to make sure the “users are entirely free to follow links wherever they please” (Miall & Dobson, 2001). I tried to connect as many links back to previous pages to take advantage of the fact that “hypertext increases individual freedom”. One can see in the featured image above that most links are bi-directional. The player (for the most part) would not need to close the page and re-open it to play it differently.

I also learned how to get set-up a prompt for the final code, and then embedded that into an “if… else..”. clause to lead to either the Success! or Try Again pages. Overall, I had a lot of fun making this Twine and it helped me make further connections between writing, planning, puzzle solving and representing it all digitally. I do think I will make a Harry Potter themed escape room… eventually!

Hope you all enjoy this escape room. Please let me know if you have any feedback on how to improve this, or any ideas/suggestions (collaboration on HP maybe??)

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References:

Bolter, J. D., & EBSCOhost. (2001). Writing space: Computers, hypertext, and the remediation of print (2nd ed.). Lawrence Erlbaum Associates. https://doi.org/10.4324/9781410600110

Miall, D. S., & Dobson, T. (2001). Reading hypertext and the experience of literature. Journal of Digital Information, Retrieved from https://explore.openaire.eu/search/publication?articleId=issn13687506::feae30569d02fbf0a7451897e74be20b

I chose to create a potato stamp because I do not remember ever doing this as a child. I enjoy writing and still write whenever I get a chance, but it is less frequent now. My journaling has also decreased in frequency, but I do still make my weekly plans and to-do lists on paper by hand. I thought that the writing task would not be much of a challenge for me, and the potato stamp would be. I am a perfectionist, and I thought that the imperfect lettering carved on the potato would bother me. I cannot just cross out a mistake and re-write it. I cannot use White-Out to hide it. If I mess up, I will have to make a new stamp. Thus, I decided to give it a shot. The word on my potato stamp was initially going to be “hello”, but since it has a repeating letter, I chose “learn”. Before I set out to cut my potato up, I told myself I should learn how to do it correctly, hence, the word choice. The word “learn” is actually perfect word for me; I am always seeking knowledge and not just because I am a teacher. This could be a new recipe, a new skill, or new vocabulary; it could mean “geeking out” on Harry Potter, Star Wars or the Marvel Cinematic Universe; or it could simply mean learning to be a better person.

The Process:

I decided to use lowercase, cursive for my potato stamp because that is how I normally write, and it would pose more of a challenge to try and carve that. I wrote the word “learn” on parchment first because I knew I would have to invert it for the stamp to then print it correctly. As Collier mentions in Cooke’s (2012) video, early printing requires “great consideration; there are no quick highlights and change font”. It requires forethought and planning. I could not just edit the text once it was printed, I would have to start all over again (Cooke, 2012). Rather than imagine a mirror image of the word, I could just flip the parchment paper around and see what the word looks like inverted. I thought of using it as a stencil, but decided to trace the word on the potato just by sight using a Sharpie. However, the Sharpie did not like the wet potato even after I had dried it with a kitchen towel. I kept scribbling on the paper so the ink would continue to flow and was able to make enough of a trace on the potato that I could carve around. This was challenging, as I knew it would be, especially around the curves and inside the letters. I used a sharp ceramic knife and held the blade like a scalpel. Once I was done carving, I knew I did not have any paint, but I do have a lot of ink for my fountain pens. I also do not have a small paintbrush, but I did recently get a glass dip pen, which I thought would be perfect to use for this task. The photo collage above depicts all of the images in order, and here below is a short video of the process as well, and took me between 30 – 45 minutes from start to finish.

The Result:

Once I had the word printed on paper, I saw that it looked more like “leam” rather than “learn”, but printed well, nonetheless. I decided to add a bit of a gap in between the last two letters, and ended up carving out more than I wanted to. It looked like “learn” now, with a noticeable gap between the r and n. The printing is almost identical. The letter “a” is a bit bigger than the “e”, more of its inside got carved out and its top left side is thinner than the rest. The “l” and the “e” look quite nice, and I wish I could fix the “r”. Writing in cursive also made me wonder how the old wooden or metallic stamps printed, and if cursive fonts were possible. I also thought about how official forms and documents ask for names to be “printed” on what is clearly a handwritten document. Is it because of the mechanical stamps that we call it printing when we write in distinct uppercase letters? Overall, I am happier with my potato stamp printing than I thought I would be! The imperfections are a reminder of how far printing has come.

Here below is an image of the word stamped as well as handwritten by the same pen that was used to transfer ink onto the potato:

The Mechanization of Writing:

Although I had fun carving out my five letters and printing them on paper, I would not want to copy an entire book of text, forget illustrations. This task has made me appreciate how the books, pen and paper that we take for granted were at one point luxury items for some. I love “old school” stationery, especially fountain pens, but these have also been modernized. I certainly do not have blood or lead in my inks, or paper that dissolves or rots in my lifetime. The mechanization of writing, or rather, printing, seems inevitable. Its evolution to typing is also inevitable. Personally, there are times when I think writing is quicker and easier, and there are times when I consider typing to be more convenient. As a chemistry teacher, I need to write a lot of chemical reactions and equations. Typing those out and adding symbols, mathematical equations, reaction arrows, etc. although available easily on Word, still feels cumbersome and tedious. Carving that out onto potato stamps is unthinkable and undesirable. Writing out journal entries, or essays, or typing this analysis/reflection, on the other hand, is sometimes more preferable because of the ease of editing. Handwriting, however, seems to have its own charm. I prefer handwritten notes and cards, both as a receiver and sender, because it feels more personal. It has more of an emotional connect and a sense of nostalgia. There are multiple studies that enumerate the benefits of writing to memory retention due to the formation and reinforcement of neural pathways due to reading, contemplating, writing, editing and reading again when one writes. However, in the recent years there are a number of studies that compare the effect of writing vs. typing on memory retention with mixed results. Researchers like Hsiung, Chang, Chen and Sung (2017) and Smoker, Murphy and Rockwell (2009) advocate for pen-and-paper writing for better retention and accuracy, whereas others like Schoen (2012) believe that context matters and typing notes in a lecture context may be more beneficial.

Choosing to write or type based on needs or convenience is a privilege. Not too long ago, this would not have been a choice so easily made, or even possible. Even today, not everybody can choose to type instead of writing. Worse, not everyone has the privilege of learning how to write even. By mechanizing writing and its evolution to the word processors and printers of today, the printed word is ever more accessible in both printed and electronic versions. Even if everyone cannot write, they can have access to texts they can learn to read and then eventually write, hopefully.

Conversely, in the mechanization and ease of access of text, what is somewhat lost is the character and magnitude of how impressive it is to be able to see the printed work come to be. Collier mentions in Cooke’s (2012) video how fascinated his young students are when they see the letters pressed on to the page. The texture, the ink, the machinery, are all remarkable. Printing with the potato stamp, on the one hand, illustrates how easy it is to use any available tool to print with, potato, sponge, wood, etc. On the other hand, it serves to highlight just how much effort and planning is needed to be able to print a whole word, a sentence, a paragraph, a newspaper. Where would we be today without it?

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• How does the text deviate from conventions of written English?

The text reads very awkward, lacks punctuation and flow. The software seems to have attempted to follow grammar rules, but the whole thing seems illogical and haphazard. It is not easy to read and definitely makes no sense at all. The sentence structure for standard English has not been applied, as the whole text reads like one long run-on sentence. There is hardly a “subject-verb-object” order to the sentences, and some nouns and adjectives do not seem appropriate. There are no paragraphs or transitions to other ideas. However, there are barely any spelling errors in the text, and a lot of the nouns and other references have been capitalized, which was a pleasant surprise.

• What is “wrong” in the text? What is “right”?

At first glance, everything seems wrong in the text. The grammar, punctuation, and organization of words leads to the loss of meaning, making it difficult to understand what the text is actually saying. However, upon closer inspection, the text actually does have some meaning, it has just recorded everything as it perceived me speaking. I spoke without stating the punctuation “comma”, “question mark”, “period”, etc. thus it did not add them everywhere they are needed. There are some words that have been capitalized though. The software is familiar with Harry Potter, and was able to spell most of the names and locations from the series correctly. My pronunciation, rate of talking, volume, and proximity to the device have all played a role in this transcription. I used my laptop and dictation.io/speech to record what I was speaking. The transcription was distracting so I put my laptop down and looked up at the ceiling while I talked, or paced nearby while talking. The text does not take into account any of my inflections or sarcasm or any other emotions expressed while I narrated. It noted down words as it “heard” them. There is no logic to the text and if I talked too fast, it missed out on some words. What is admirable, though, is the fact that almost all the words are real words and would normally be meaningful. Also, the fictional words from the Harry Potter universe have (for the most part) been spelled correctly – including Voldemort (Walmart once), Ginny, Lockhart, Expelliarmus, Ollivander, Griphook, Dumbledore, etc.

• What are the most common “mistakes” in the text and why do you consider them “mistakes”?

Some common mistakes include the substitution of words that sound somewhat similar: “talking portraits” became “stalking portraits”, “whole” became “hole”, “summer” became “somewhere”, and so on. These are mistakes because they take meaning away from the narrative even more. The text already lacks the inflection and emotion (and gestures) that a listener may use to make meaning of the spoken words, and these word replacements would confuse a reader even further. Some other substitutions do not make as much sense and are more difficult to decrypt: “the Heir of Slytherin” became “Syed of Slytherin”, “terrorizing the place” became “standardizing the place”.

Besides word substitution, the lack of structure is a “mistake”. Reading the text as a whole run-on sentence was arduous – it barely made sense to me and I know what I spoke. I am curious to see what others make of it. The lack of punctuation, paragraphs, transitions between ideas, all take away meaning, leaving behind a bunch of words placed together. These same words, when spoken aloud, made a lot more sense and put forth a narrative about the Harry Potter series. This transcription is quite far from that narrative.

• What if you had “scripted” the story? What difference might that have made?

If I had scripted this story before narrating it, I would have better sentence structure, clear punctuation and followed the normal rules of grammar. While narrating this script, I would have added the punctuation words for the software to decode: “comma”, “period”, “next line”, etc. giving the transcription a better form and structure as well. My “thoughts” themselves would have had better flow and structure, I would have all my ideas written down and edited accordingly, chronologically. As I was speaking, I realized how much I had missed out and wanted to add but I had already moved ahead to the next point. In some ways, the text reads random because my thoughts and narration was a little random. With a script, it would have been less awkward, more meaningful.

• In what ways does oral storytelling differ from written storytelling? 

The idea that intrigued me most this week was Ong’s idea that “[o]ral expression can exist and mostly has existed without any writing at all, writing never without orality” (2002, p. 8). I had not given much thought to the languages I speak and/or write. However, this struck me when I read it and was able to immediately perceive the truth in it. There are so many spoken languages that exist without writing, but there is no way I can read without “saying” the word inside my head, first (or simultaneously, I guess). Upon reading this chapter, I was able to appreciate how literature has evolved from spoken to written, and yet the emphasis we “literates” place upon the written word, while considering the spoken word somehow “inferior”. The written story would be formally written, sequential, and “relatively permanent” (Gnanadesikan, 2011, p. 2). It would leave a mark, literally, on the page, line after line. As Gnanadesikan (2011) further states, “[w]ritten texts can thus convey their message more precisely, adding to the sense that writing is worth more than speech” (p. 5). The oral story could be more emotive despite being fragmented, logical despite being out of sequence, and yet regarded with skepticism despite the fact that most of our history has been passed down by oral tradition. The scientist in me thinks that this is because the written text serves as evidence, support for the ideas they convey; the spoken word, once spoken ceases to exist, it is “inherently ephemeral” (Gnanadesikan, 2011, p. 4) making it difficult to hold on to, to refer back to, to rely on.

Nevertheless, I believe that the written word may also lead to misinterpretation and confusion, if not read with the correct intention. The spoken word, imbued with emotion and gesture, is not as easily misunderstood. Depending on one’s needs, culture, traditions, purpose, etc. one may argue the superiority of one form over the other. However, both are important and need not be mutually exclusive in their usefulness or dependence. As Ong puts it:

“Oral cultures indeed produce powerful and beautiful verbal performances of high artistic and human worth, which are no longer even possible once writing has taken possession of the psyche. Nevertheless, without writing, human consciousness cannot achieve its fuller potentials, cannot produce other beautiful and powerful creations. In this sense, orality needs to produce and is destined to produce writing.” (Ong, 2002, p. 14).

While oral stories may be wonderfully immersive in their right, without the written word they may not (will not) live forever. Oral stories passed down may lose elements that make them beautiful and powerful. The written word need not always be clinical, technical and functional. There are many written stories that are equally, if not more, powerful, beautiful, and wonderful despite their formality. If not for written storytelling, we would not be able to enjoy a lot of the classics from previous generations, and if not for oral storytelling, we would not be able to learn about different cultures, dialects, and pronunciation.

References:

Gnanadesikan, A. E. (2011). The first IT revolution. The writing revolution: Cuneiform to the internet (pp. 1-10) John Wiley & Sons, Inc.

Ong, W. J. (2002). The orality of language. Orality and literacy (pp. 5-15). New York; London: Routledge.

I carry what is referred to as a bucket bag (1), to and from work every day. It is easy to dump “stuff” into it as well as find it when I need it. The stuff, pictured above, are all items of necessity: an umbrella (2), wireless earbuds (3) and a case (4) for them as well as my wired earphones (in case), blue light blocking glasses (5), wallet with detachable card case (6), house keys with various “cards” (7), hand sanitizer (8), lip balm (9), keys with an entry key card on a school lanyard (10), pen (11), post-it notepad (12), an extra cloth face mask (13), Mac power adapter (14), MacBook Pro (15), and a laptop case (16). There are two items missing from this image: my smartphone – Samsung Galaxy S10 – since it is what was used to take this picture, and my school laptop – an Acer Spin 5 with a touch screen and stylus (I accidentally spilled hot tea on it this week and it is now possessed – sorry Greg!).

The first thing I noticed was how much stuff I think I need on a daily basis! Everything in the bag is removed every night when I get home, except for my wallet. The wallet has minimal cash, but has my bank and ID cards. The one visible in the card sleeve in the back of the wallet is my school ID card for this school year. The text on these cards represents information that is essential to root myself personally, financially as well as professionally. Most of these cards have my name, some dates of issue and/or expiry and/or birth, and the numeric digits appropriate to the card. Some of these are encrypted (password, PIN code, security ID…), while others also have my photo on them. Each of these components has the potential to further link elsewhere digitally – the banks, ICBC, medical service providers, etc. Ironically, the text on these digitally linked cards is (almost) the only print text available in my bag. Print and written text does not seem prevalent in this time period. While my wallet is not an object that I need every day, it holds the essentials of living in a developed, digitized country like Canada.

The second thing I noticed upon looking at this picture is the colour scheme. Almost everything is in shades of black and blue, and almost always in solid colours. What adds a pop of colour is the lanyard. I work at New Westminster Secondary School, and orange and black are our school colours. The text on this lanyard reads “Celebrating New Westminster Secondary 2021”. We finally moved into our new building this month and the new keys and FOB card deserved a bright new lanyard. The card has my first and last name on a sticker in the center, “ioProx” on the bottom left corner and an alphanumeric code on the bottom right corner of the card. This card, with its digitally encrypted code text, lets me enter the school as well as the elevator in the building. The second pair of keys are connected to other smaller cards, which are potentially connected to other institutions, or facilitate other aspects of my life. These items also reinforce the idea of the owner being a digitally connected working professional.

The second set of keys with a blue carabiner and flashlight, along with the umbrella, could imply that the owner of these items is practical and prepared for different conditions. (Really, umbrellas are essential when one lives in “Raincouver”, even when it looks sunny out!) The umbrella is patterned, but is also in shades of black and grey. The lip balm, hand sanitizer and face mask are for personal use and would emphasize practicality. Perhaps an archaeologist might consider the air quality in this time period to be subpar, or that the person may have allergies or other health conditions requiring the sanitizer and face mask. There is a pen and a sticky note pad, too; these are tools for writing, but they also highlight preparedness. The presence of the non-digital writing implements (especially a fountain pen), despite the availability of digital technologies, might suggest that the owner is suspended into or transitioning between time periods.

The theme of communication is prevalent across the items pictured above. Besides the cards transmitting their encrypted and sensitive information to their respective institutions, the laptop(s) and smartphone can be used to do the same and more. These devices lend themselves to access different texts in different forms – audio, visual, typed, handwritten. Perhaps an archaeologist finding these might marvel at our reliance on these devices (we do not have chip implants yet!). As for the devices, upon turning them on, the user will be prompted to enter a password or a PIN to access them. This need for security (or appearance of it) could indicate potentially sensitive information that may be accessible on or through these devices. However, as the bank and ID cards are easily accessible from the wallet, one could wonder what other information and texts these devices might conceal. Facial and fingerprint recognition are increasingly being used as passwords to unlock devices. The passwords and PIN codes, as written (typed) text, shines light on to something that may be significant to the user – a piece of information that is memorable but “secure”. This text is very specific not only in the rules that are required for its creation, but also because it is text that is potentially used multiple times a day. Given how the devices “read” faces and fingerprints to allow access, these may also be considered texts, which in this case are unique to the owner. The use of biometrics to unlock the devices may not surprise someone from the future given its pervasiveness by then (or would they find it laughable and obsolete?). There are also two types of earphones with microphones: wireless and wired, which could indicate the importance of remote communication or other auditory information being transmitted (again – no implants!). One could infer that, in this era, text is mostly consumed as the spoken word either audio or video based. In fact, I currently teach all my classes remotely and the laptops, earphones, and blue light blocking glasses are a necessity to perform my job. I wonder if one might find the presence of all these devices redundant in the future.

The contents displayed above are up-to-date and reflective of the owner’s position in a first-world society of the twenty first century. A decade or two ago, this bag would hold very different contents. Laptops were not a prevalent part of society twenty years ago, and touchscreen smartphones were not yet omnipresent. This 2014 version of the MacBook Pro did not exist, nor did the wireless earbuds. Keys to enter a building would not be digitized, and there may have been a lot more paper instead. Everything might be bigger and clunkier. Fifteen to twenty years ago, I would still be a young schoolgirl in Tanzania, and not only would these items not be available to me, but they would also seem very out of place and irrelevant. Even today, were I still living and working in Tanzania, my workbag would not contain a high-end laptop nor would I need one. My “wallet” would only have cash, and I would not need to carry an umbrella daily. A bag like this might imply that the owner possibly works in a higher administrative position.

Finally, the bag, and the items in it, while descriptive of my professional life and digital inclinations, do not say much (if anything) about my cultural background, experiences, personal life, skills or literacies. The image I have of myself, that I know I also project, is that I am easy to read, easy to talk to, approachable and easy to get to know. Surprisingly, the image above says the exact opposite. A colleague looking at the image inferred that it looks like I do not want anybody to know who I am. Everything is closed, plain, even the wallet is face down so the brand name is hidden (intentional). In fact, there is nothing “personal” (read: of sentimental value) in the bag, except for one keychain. The school keys and lanyard have a letter “K” keychain attached to them. Because this keychain is translucent, it is very easy to miss; however, it does glow in the dark, which makes it easy to find in the darkness. With my name legible on the FOB, even without opening my wallet one can assume that the K represents the first letter of my last name. While this is not untrue, it is also the first letter of my husband’s first name and I took this keychain from him when I had to return to my life in Canada and he remained at his home in India as he cannot yet immigrate to Canada. Other than this, there are no images, photos, or names of anyone else, even in my wallet. The identity assumed from this image is very one-dimensional – I am a teacher at New Westminster Secondary School and perhaps I take pride in it (I do!). Surely, when I began teaching here in 2015, and for a few years since, my life was this job, this profession. However, for someone who has been trying to achieve a better work-life balance for the past year or so, this was a slightly disappointing interpretation. Perhaps, if we were not in the midst of a pandemic, and I could still go to my piano lessons, one would find my practice book and sheets of music in the bag. This could then open the door to other dimensions, literacies and interests of mine!

What did you notice (or not) when you first saw this image?