Good day 301;
As I read through peer reviews for Formal Report Proposals, I am finding a lot of reviews that are missing details. Indeed, many reviews do not include the name of the Report, and some reviews leave me clueless as to the topic of the proposal.
Please review your work and ensure that you edit to include necessary details. Here are a number of examples for you:
Without Details:
“Your recent report proposal displays a sophisticated understanding of the stated issue, and a determination to achieve a positive outcome.”
With Details:
Your proposal for increasing customer makeovers and decreasing the number of ‘no shows’ for the Sephora shop is sophisticated and demonstrates a determination to achieve a positive outcome for the business.
Without Details:
“The proposed solution is effective in its method,”
With Details:
Your proposal to investigate setting up a reminder program to confirm appointments a day prior, sounds like an effective beginning to solving the issues involved in ‘no shows.’
Without Details:
This is thoroughly described, and provides a clear understanding of the issue
With Details:
The problems associated with poorly trained cashiers are clearly explained.
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