MEMORANDUM
TO: Cynthia Zheng, member of Team Victory Lap
FROM: Brent Hanover, member of Team Victory Lap
DATE: February 16, 2019
SUBJECT: Peer review of LinkedIn profile
Hi Cynthia,
I have reviewed your LinkedIn profile and carefully considered how it can be improved. Let me first say that you have a great profile and must have spent a lot of time crafting it to make it look so good. I do have some advice which I believe will turn it from a good profile into a great one.
I have created a template document for reviewing LinkedIn profiles and included it below. I have also reviewed your profile using that template and made some suggestions for improvement in the following areas:
- Formatting of information into easier to read sections
- Inclusion of all formal education on your profile
- Having more ‘interests’ on your profile
- Adding more ‘skills’ and getting your peers to endorse you
These recommendations are important to making sure that your profile comes across as a strong candidate for whatever job you may be seeking in the future. I hope that you read the information in the below attached document and implement changes based on them. Please let me know if you have any questions.
Cynthia Zheng’s profile: https://www.linkedin.com/in/cynthia-zheng-9a1a5617b/
LinkedIn review template: LinkedIn Profile Review Template
Completed review: LinkedIn Profile Review Cynthia Zheng
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