Welcome to SUSTAINABLeLEARNING.com
Welcome to SUSTAINABLeLEARNING.com, a free social networking and learning enterprise aimed at bringing together like-minded educators and learners from around the world to socialize, network, play games and share ideas and resources on sustainable development. For more detailed information on this amazing investment opportunity, please click here.
We also invite you to meet the founder and CEO of SUSTAINABLeLEARNING.com, E. Danielle Norris, as she introduces this innovative venture.
Thank you for visiting us and we look forward to your comments!
Posted in: Venture Forum
Jody McKinnon 2:57 pm on July 30, 2012 Permalink | Log in to Reply
Hi Danielle. First and foremost, I want to commend you on the quality of your video and the attention to detail in the presentation of your longer venture pitch. The editing and framing of the video are very impressive. In your report, I was particularly impressed with the visual appeal, the structure, and the themes that you have used to present it. I love the water related theme and your CEO team seems top notch 😉
As for the venture itself, in a world filled with social networking options, I am impressed by your idea in that it is different and does stand out to a degree. I agree with your assessment when you state that it might be difficult to launch among other weaknesses and threats you have identified in your SWOT analysis. Hopefully with enough investors and an excellent marketing campaign (sustainable of course!), you would get enough users. I think that if you targeted teachers of social sciences, geography, environmental studies, science and green industries, you might have a natural group to begin with. Also, if you target existing green industries and companies, your audience will build quickly. Perhaps if you used a celebrity endorsement from someone like David Suzuki, your product could grow in leaps and bounds with little to no effort.
Overall, if I were an investor, I would certainly consider providing some assistance to this venture. It is not only a great way to connect with like-minded individuals and groups from around the world, but it is also a great way to help save our planet. Well done!
Danielle 7:14 pm on August 2, 2012 Permalink | Log in to Reply
Hi Jody,
Thank you very much for your feedback. And your ideas are great! I’d like you to consider applying for a job at SUSTAINABLeLEARNING.com! We need your talent and expertise!
Danielle
Ronna Hoglund 5:48 pm on July 30, 2012 Permalink | Log in to Reply
Hi Danielle,
Your personal elevator pitch was the clincher for me. Putting yourself “out there” is very effective. Besides that, you have a great idea and one that is close to my heart which, I think, can make a difference with investors. So, all in all you were very clear and concise in your elevator pitch and filled in all the necessary blanks in your venture pitch. I would invest in sustainableelearning.com.
Regards,
Ronna
Danielle 7:40 pm on August 2, 2012 Permalink | Log in to Reply
Thanks Ronna! As a platinum level investor, you are entitled to a preferential rate on our “Class A” shares! 😀 Thanks for your feedback, I appreciate it!
Dave Horn 10:36 pm on July 30, 2012 Permalink | Log in to Reply
Hi Danielle
I thought that your elevator pitch was simple, but professional and you had very clear voice and conveyed a genuine characteristic, which does I believe, give investors confidence. I could see a small niche market existing for the sustainable approach, but I questioned how much room for growth there was in the long run. While I wouldn’t invest right away, it would definitely be a venture that I kept an eye on.
Dave
Danielle 8:34 pm on August 2, 2012 Permalink | Log in to Reply
Hi Dave, thanks for your comments! I appreciate the feedback. Danielle
dmcinnes 9:49 am on July 31, 2012 Permalink | Log in to Reply
Danielle,
I thought your elevator pitch was really well done. It was clear, simple and professional. I also really liked your venture pitch. I thought the format was professional looking and visually appealing. I really liked your metaphors (confluence, rapids, tributaries, etc.). I think there is a niche here that you have tapped into. Social Networking is great, but they don’t have focus and are too overwhelming. Your proposition for an idea that is focussed and based on “social purpose” has some potential. It might be a small market though. I’d be interested as an investor for the greater good, but not as one looking to make a great deal of money.
Well done!
David McInnes
Danielle 8:43 pm on August 2, 2012 Permalink | Log in to Reply
Hi David, you have an interesting point. You would invest for the greater good but not to make money? Then perhaps you are suggesting that the venture attract donations rather than venture capital. Something for me to think about, thanks very much! Danielle
Yves Mainville 11:03 am on July 31, 2012 Permalink | Log in to Reply
Hi Danielle
Very impressive pitch. The presentation was very pro-like and quite complete. I also likes the team member’s names. 🙂
The concept seems viable, but perhaps a little trendy – I would would like to know more about the long term viability of the concept, but this is more a case of this being outside my comfort zone and I am most likely ignorant on these particular facts.
My concern is with the competition / market. There seems to be a fair bit of it and large well established to boot. That being said however, there seems to be a definite niche and you cater to it well.
Excellent presentation.
thank you.
Danielle 8:54 pm on August 2, 2012 Permalink | Log in to Reply
Hi Yves,
Thanks for your feedback and ideas. I agree that the investment would be a risk given the competition. It would require a stellar marketing campaign at the least. Thanks again for the comments.
Danielle
Brian H 11:43 am on July 31, 2012 Permalink | Log in to Reply
Danielle,
Outstanding elevator pitch. You had me engaged and ready to write a cheque.
However, I looked for my 250% return and as an investor, was not confident in the venture’s ability to generate revenue.
Your project however could hit a niche market and could secure government and non-profit funding without the need for private investors.
Very intriguing!
Brian
Danielle 10:33 pm on August 2, 2012 Permalink | Log in to Reply
Hi Brian,
Thank you for your feedback! It is very helpful!
Danielle
sheza 11:39 am on August 1, 2012 Permalink | Log in to Reply
Hi Danielle!
I was really impressed by the professional wuality of your elevator pitch and the overall look of your venture pitch. Obviously, when I read the content I became even more impressed! You have clearly crossed all your Ts and dotted your Is! The idea is an interesting one and while I admire its roots and vision, I don’t think that it would be a viable venture due to the untangible nature of the concept. I think that many schools and teachers have adopted eco-friendly ideals and values in their teaching and learning and I think that it is a neat idea to have a place to come together and combine these, I think that it is a little too optimistic. Social networking takes up so much of our time today, and I just don’t think that you will generate so much interest from the people to add this to their plates as well. Perhaps the venture could be developed into an add-on feature to another already popular social networking site? Perhaps a pitch to Facebook to have a Sustainable eLearning or Green Networking division as part of their platform?
I really admire the hard work that you have put into your work though and even though I wouldn’t be ready to put the money into this particular venture, I would certainly be interested in working with you and your team in the future.
All the best!
Sheza Naqi
Danielle 10:37 pm on August 2, 2012 Permalink | Log in to Reply
Hi Sheza,
I chuckled at your feedback. I am often criticized for being too optimistic! 😀 I appreciate the time you took to assess my venture. Your feedback is helpful!
Cheers,
Danielle
kimnoel 1:11 pm on August 1, 2012 Permalink | Log in to Reply
Hi Danielle,
Nicely done! Your pitch looked and sounded professional, and I think your venture idea has merit. It certainly plays into the “green” culture.
I do wonder about the market however. While I am sure there would be a moderate market, I wonder if the market is there to become a true financial success.
Smiles, Kim
Danielle 10:42 pm on August 2, 2012 Permalink | Log in to Reply
Hi Kim,
This venture does not target people who want to make a difference but those who take the take the necessary steps to do so. I agree that these individuals are few and far between. A lot of work needs to be done to create an active culture of change. Thank you for your feedback, I appreciate it!
Danielle
Colin 1:13 pm on August 2, 2012 Permalink | Log in to Reply
Hi Danielle,
Your elevator pitch was professionally done. It was neat that words showed up when you pointed. Your SWOT analysis is thorough and honest. Your venture pitch overall was well researched. While I wish to support a “green” initiative in Canada, do you think it would be a better cause to promote this program in a country that produces significantly more pollution, making the most impact? Nevertheless, I think this is a great cause. All the best! 🙂
Colin
Danielle 11:00 pm on August 2, 2012 Permalink | Log in to Reply
Hi Colin,
Please watch H2Oil.
http://h2oildoc.com/home/
Danielle
mackenzie 4:59 pm on August 2, 2012 Permalink | Log in to Reply
The elevator pitch was well done, I really got to connect with you personally and see what you are about. The idea of that kind of return on my investment was captivating since most companies usually only hope to break even by year 5. I was impressed that you did SWOT and ROI analysis that connected the future growth to government and corporate opportunities. I wish more was said about competition and how you are dealing with their interest in you investors.
Danielle 11:02 pm on August 2, 2012 Permalink | Log in to Reply
Hi Mackenzie,
Great advice! I will keep that in mind for the real pitch! 😀
Danielle
Sherman Lee 10:48 pm on August 2, 2012 Permalink | Log in to Reply
Hello Danielle,
Congratulations, I think you have done a great job on your pitch. As many have complimented already that your pitch was very professional. If I had to be super picky, the only thing I would mention is your voice. It was strong, well paced but the microphone you had didn’t do you justice. It was a bit too far away so it picked up a lot of background, but that is strictly picking bones out of an egg of me. As an investor, your venture drew in my interest, but not from the standpoint that I would make money off of direct. However, I do see that my company could invest in something that would give back to the community. It will build a better outlook as my company is launching an eco-conscious program to our employees. Overall, you did a marvelous job!
CEO & Team: Danielle, you looked so professional in the elevator pitch. Without even looking at further references, you have received my buy in with your gestures. I think that is a very important part of a venture pitch. In a short minute, a list of reference would do peanuts, but a professional and strong speech carries you miles ahead. Your team was equally professional looking. It would be great if I get to meet them later on.
Venture Concept: I like your concept of making a social network of sustainable development educators. Like I have mentioned before, your concept may not draw in direct money but it will end up benefiting in many other ways, such as creating a more positive outlook for your investors. I would like to see you play on more of that to draw in more investment interests. Please let me know of your plans of how you would accomplish that.
Marketability: Unfortunately, I don’t think this product is very marketable on its own. However you may consider building publicity through any giants that are already in the sustainability campaign for years. Connect with your local groups to help draw in the crowd.
Venture Plan: I would like to know a bit more about your plans for kick-off. How are you going to promote this product?
With such a great pitch, I would like to invest in your venture. Prior to committing a solid amount, I would like to further discuss with you in regards to your business model and marketing plans.
Thank you and great job!
Sherman
Danielle 11:12 pm on August 2, 2012 Permalink | Log in to Reply
Wow, Sherman!
Thank you! What a phenomenal set of feedback! Can I hire you?? I’d pay you well! Your questions are excellent as they raise important issues about the pitch. I really appreciate it! Too bad we can’t go back and adjust our pitches.
Thanks again for taking such care in your analysis,
Danielle
Sherman Lee 8:30 am on August 3, 2012 Permalink | Log in to Reply
Hi Danielle,
You know, I wish this was due about 3 weeks earlier. That would have given us the time to revise and show improvement and progress. Although I also understand how that would make our schedule super jam packed with all the group presentation etc. I am glad that what I have shared is of value to you, Danielle. Again great job!
Sherman
Hussain Luaibi 9:44 pm on August 3, 2012 Permalink | Log in to Reply
Danielle
Great work! Your venture is really interesting and what makes it so is the fact that it gathers people who have the same concerns or expectations. Your pitch is done professionally. As for the venture itself, well I personally prefer to make the venture more interactive or more pictorial These things pave the way to the invesors’ hearts. But that is not really a big thing. The great thing about your venture is that I feel as an investor that it can get a place in the market . There are many sites that offer the same service but yours is more organized and engaging.
As an investor, I believe I want to slow down before I start .
Great job
Hussain
Danielle 8:41 am on August 5, 2012 Permalink | Log in to Reply
Hi Hussain,
Thank you for the feedback, and great idea on interactivity. If I had the time and expertise, I would have built a sample site for “potential investors” to view. Of course if this were a real venture, the site would already be in place. I appreciate your comments and the fact that you see the potential in this site. Thanks again!
Danielle